• Member Since 6th Nov, 2011
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Pen Stroke

A fan-fiction author and game programmer that lives in Glendale, CA.



On a dark night filled with even darker magics, an insane cult attempts to give Nightmare Moon a body and life of her own, utterly separate from Princess Luna. But, when the spell is interrupted by Celestia, something unexpected is created.

Now, a little black alicorn filly named Nyx finds herself living under the care of Twilight Sparkle, only to be haunted by memories and emotions from her past. Is she Nightmare Moon reborn or is she simply a doppelganger with a soul and mind of her own? Can Twilight Sparkle protect Nyx from those who refuse to see past her dragon eyes and black coat?

Or, will Nyx be forced to inherit the sins that may not even be hers and become the greatest evil Equestria has ever known?

Chapters (22)
Comments ( 6303 )


Im going to admit it
i cried a little bit

OMG! It's here finally!
Look out feature box, you are about to be destroyed!
I cannot tell you how much I love this fic.. nah, this should be called a epic!
Can't wait for my copy of the hard back to arrive!
Now If you excuse me, time to celebrate

The feature box will never be the same...

Oooh, you brought it here!

The Feature Box will be broken for a month now. :rainbowlaugh:

Hmm... I've heard of this story before...

Dear god........:yay: Also We are going to need a new featured box.....


Oh, God I have waited for this moment! NOW TO READ AND NOT LEAVE MY ROOM! :rainbowwild::rainbowwild:


Glad to see it finally up here Pen Stroke, sorry I kind of dropped off on helping with it :pinkiesad2:

Well, it'll be good to finally read this one.

This story is one of my favourite fim-fictions and I enjoyed reading it immensely. I'm very pleased to see it here! :twilightsmile:

I love this story!! I listened to it of youtube from Vozdesuenos, and when he hasn't updated, I pretty much read the rest of the way. Bravo my friend, bravo!:rainbowdetermined2::eeyup::ajsmug:

YES! I have been waiting for this!

And there it is, the perfect excuse that I needed to read this again. THANK YOU! Take it, take them! all of my yays!:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

I still haven't read this...


OH NOES... All those other stories I have to read are gonna get pushed back in the queue, just so I can reread another. :yay:

Just to be sure... This is the FINISHED version, right? No more being told we need to re-read chapters...

(Also, Everfree 2012 writing panel shoutout! Woo!:pinkiehappy:)

Promised myself to reread this when it would be posted here. Looking forward to it...

Huzzah! I was wondering if this ever would make it on this site. Time for a reread!

1181047 Actually, this is the guy who wrote it, Pen Stroke. He just finally decided to bring it here. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png

Been meaning to read this ever since I finished Fallout: Equestria. Needed a super epic fanfic to read.
This one I think I can and need to manage. Background Pony's chapters are just too long...

Time to become even more well-read!

oh god, there goes my social life


It's here it's finally hear. Well I know what I'm doing for the wrest of the day.

O my....Past Sins here? Instant Fave!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I've been waiting for a chance to celebrate something Fanfiction related so here's to Past Sin on FimFiction commence the fireworks

This story took me around 18 hours straight to read. Meaning I read this for 18 hours straight. I loved every bit of this story on Google Docs, so I will do my part and like and favorite this story to help the cause of getting this story to the Feature Box. :ajsmug:


Seems legit. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png

Anywho, now that this is finally on fimfiction, I shall read it for the first time. Time to initiate Operation: Ignore Hype.

For all the controversy around this fic, I personally find it quite enjoyable.

Well, I'm taking shelter for the rest of the day.

I hope the world is still there when I return.

Within five minutes it's already taken over the feature box

There are a lot of good moments in this story, but this chapter, "missing joy", is probably my favourite.

Ivan receiving the impression that this story might be worth reading. I suppose I shall read it then.

1181110 I know, it's crazy, it's almost like it's been around for months and people who've read it before are pre-emptively liking it. MADNESS.

1181088 Agreed, and not just cause that Colgate is creeping the everything outta me...

I can't believe it's finally here! I loved this story and my favourite OC is Nyx!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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