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EbonyDanger


That one fan of MLP, who makes her plot way darker and complexer then intended. And the person, who roleplays more then she writes fanfiction. *ON A WRITING HIATUS FOR NOW*

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Nightmare Moon.
True Queen of Equestria. Ruler of an eternal night.
But once upon a time Nightmare Moon had been Nyx. A small filly, who was loved by Twilight Sparkle and the Cutiemark Cursaders. That filly is still in here. And due to it Nightmare lies in conflict with herself.

AN: This monologue is a tribute to Pen Stroke's awesome story Past Sins, where Nyx is the main character.
Inspiration songs: (spoiler alert!) Past Sins by The Snatcher and Who I am by The L-Train (Cover Doc Dycer)

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Comments ( 6 )

I still have a blanc flank.

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I do not can call them servants.

I do not call them servants

Those mistakes will left me.

will leave me (could be wrong but it just don't sound right)
you might want to fix these

good little story:twilightsmile:.

6357510
Thank you for the small correction.

Its a really nice story, I really enjoyed it, oh poor Nyx I feel pity. But luckily I did read the full story and I know it had a happy ending (sorry for sounding so cheesy)

Good job in writing this story, keep up the good work:twilightsmile:

6387619
Thanks. I guess the monologue takes place after the chapter Once a cursader. And yes, I know it has a happy ending, but during the monologue Nyx does not know that.

6896587
I am glad. I hope it is a worthy tribute to this great story.

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