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An Intricate Disguise


Selling out has never felt so dirty.

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...Screw morals, screw her worldview. She had fifteen more mares to knock up.

:rainbowlaugh:This was hilarious. I can't wait for later chapters.

LOLOL! This was too hilarious 😂

I don't understand how female cock works

Kinks: Gender Swap Spell, Mares in Heat, Public Sex, Impregnation/Creampie.

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Nicely done on the first chapter; looking forward to more!

I look forward to Celestia and Luna learning about the new male alicorn they have running around...

...and the legion of baby alicorns that are going to be born 11 months from now.

I know that this is just a clop fic and I'm looking into it to much but I wouldn't mind a chapter about the after math of Twilights actions

Wow, you're on a steamy roll here. :twilightblush:

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No, I think it's Prince Twilight who's on a steamy roll here; 15 or so mares that is.

I bet her friends will be a part of the crowd.

...Screw morals, screw her worldview. She had fifteen more mares to knock up.

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Awesome chapter, good work.

Holy shit, are we actually going to get some TwiStarlight from you? You’ve been teasing it forever, I didn’t think was going to happen.

I don't particularly mind, but the source link for the thumbnail is to a NSFW picture. I would hate for your story to be struck down for having a link like that. I don't know if they reversed that rule, but I think they don't allow links to NSFW content.

I might borrow this idea for my fic. Twilight experiencing a particularly bad heat cycle, her guard no where in site to help relieve her, sex change spell he taught her on the back burner (as a precaution incase she had to disappear for a while), winds up turning herself into a stallion and rutting her friends, plus possibly Derpy, Lyra, Bonbon, Vinyl and Octavia. I'm not quite sure yet. I'll definitely give you credit for the idea though.

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Thank you very much for pointing that out. I've been trying to get in the habit of sourcing my cover art lately and I forgot to consider its NSFW nature! It's fixed now, and I'll write the artist into the description shortly.

Reads synopsis.
Wow, talk about the mother of all backfires.

A blush adorned her cheeks as she envisioned herself stripping one of the strapping males she'd encountered in her trips, taking off their garments with a sultry gaze and marvelling at what laid beneath. She was sure that she'd find something particularly interesting to study if she did so, and she was happy to take her time and run multiple tests if it ensured total accuracy...

Absolutely beautiful

I'm very turn on by this.... Okay sounded a lot creepy, but regardless I love this cuz the concept is new & original & I can't wait for more Genderswap Twilight's sex adventures!

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Well, I wouldn't say new and original but it's written well.

Anyone got the number for the source?

I could kinda see Twilight being like... "nope!" and running from a bunch of mares after she got her sex-addled mind back under control after being with Derpy.... But then again... Who would turn down fifteen sexy mares?

Pony porn!! Love it! No not really ( The Featured Box Troll )

Of course Starlight got in on the fuck Twilight orgy.

Um okay, Starlight should've got in on the motherhood

"I-I know, it's just..." A small chuckle as Twilight patted her wither. "I'm just so glad that I convinced you to pull out and finish on my face that night at the bar, that's all. Could you imagine if I'd ended up stuck with one of these things?"

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Twilight had one up the entire apple family. Heck as it is, she'll probably matched the apple family in a generation or two.:twilightoops::applejackconfused:

Wait so doesn't this mean she's basically reviving the alicorn population in ponyville? :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

I know Spike always goes to a secret rendezvous spot with his griffin girlfriend.

Aw, no orgy scene, and we don't even get the names of any of the ponies that got knocked up (other than Derpy)?

I demand a sequel of Twilight struggling to help raise all 42 of her kids with the mares she knock up!

Aww. Disappointed Starlight didn't get a kid with Twilight.

I guess the answer to life, the universe and everything is Twilight's herd of alicorns.

Not normally one of these fics (heat/estrus), but a friend recommended and I took a peek because I'm a sucker for R63.

Very cute, very adorable, and nicely written. I'll point out one little problem, and that is Twilight's pronouns. There's a lot of flip-flopping with them (particularly during the exciting bits). It doesn't look like you're going for the "male-thoughts and female-thoughts divided" thing, which is why I mention it.

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You have my permission to commission Disguise for that if you want.

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Commission? Rats, I'll come back later with money.

I just wonder what Celestia and Luna would have to say about all this.

Hell. It was hell on earth. But their adorable faces just about made up for it.
She could only shudder at what they might be like in adolescence.

:rainbowhuh: Guess we now know how the "scorched-wasteland" time-line came to be. :trollestia:

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After giving it some thought as the story's commissioner.

Cadance: Winced in sympathy so hard she gave herself a headache.

Celestia: Laughed herself silly for a solid hour and broke into spontaneous giggle-fits for the rest of the week.

Luna: Considers it a stroke of genius and is even now drafting a royal proclamation "seeking strong, brave, and virtuous mares willing to volunteer to help restore the lost alicorn tribe." Plans to at least double Twilight's accomplishment this coming breeding season.

I was expecting heavy debauchery. That would have been good. This was so much better :rainbowlaugh:

*Slow clap*
Bra-vo. This was glorious.

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