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The Masketta Man
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The Masketta Man
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Somewhere, somehow ... Cadence got a hate-wingboner.
Very nice. You have my fave, my upvote, and my interest.
I died right fucking there. Holy shit I did not see that coming.
"Keep your pants dry, your dreams wet, and may hordes of unicorns magic thee to thy orgasm" omg this is so what he should have said in the trailer
but but but....what about Cady-Bug? I get it, AU. But really.....she needs to be involved in this at some level....
Also...I skipped the porn cause I was curious about the story you used to drive it. I know, I know, its like reading playboy for the articles. Still, that's what I did. :-)
Nice work, sudden like and Sunset no less. I admit , Shining/Sunset pairs are rare to come by.
In the end, my vote in this is more threesomes, more mares for Shining Armor and possible have a chance at being Celestia's go to Stallion. You could even make a sequel about Shining Armor and Cadence having a long talk and more sex-capades in their life. I mean he does get the title as Prince, meaning he got some perks to banging the Princesses and other mares. But that is me jumping far into this.
Great work! Keep it up.
I like it! And I support the SunsetxTwilightxShining threesome idea.
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Oh, you needn't worry. I have plans for Cadance. Sort of. A lot of this is being played by ear (it is allegedly-PWP after all), but I think I know what I want to do between Cadance and Shining when I get around to it.
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What does PWP mean?
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Porn without plot.
What a nice clop fiction we have here. It's easy to understand and lightly enough to read. Can't wait to see a bug queen turn.
You drama llama!
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It'll work out. I just needed an excuse to actually build this one up, and with what I mentioned in the first chapter when I didnt know what I was doing with Cadance, it just seemed like the best way.
Besides, it makes the perfect backdrop for angry sex between Sunset and Cadance.
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Yeah, classic Cerebus Syndrome. It'll go back to being completely light after this though.
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Why's your comment blank?
Maids know everything
That it does
That went from being silly to suddenly being serious rather quickly. Well, if all goes well, this'll make the ShiningxSunsetxCadance scenario worth the payoff.
Oh, behave!
Heh.
Good work on this fic! It's plenty deeper than you'd think at first glance.
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That's a good question. I have no idea.
Anyway, what I'd meant to post before was that I am liking this story but I felt the joke in this chapter went too long the first time you did it... and then you did it a second time. It went on way, way too long. The chapter is almost 7k words and the joke took up like 1.5k of that or something. Felt like a bit of wasted space and time.
I mean, it was funny when I first realized what you were doing, it made me smile, but halfway through the first instance of it I rolled my eyes and skipped to the end. I skipped it entirely on the second go-around. This sort of thing doesn't work as well in print as it did in the movie in my opinion because while the joke only takes 30 seconds to a minute to pull off in the film, reading takes far, far longer so it felt like a waste to me since it didn't add anything to the story, really. It was just silly nonsenese, which I'm not entirely against, but it was too much for me.
That bit with Sunset clopping while Shining tells her about him and Dash..... unnfff
I cannot WAIT to read more of this.
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That's fair. It did seem to drag on when rereading. I'll try not to drag jokes out next time.
Before I read this, I must know how Cadence feels about this.
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Oh, she's [WHATEVER FEELING YOU WANT TO HEAR] with this arrangement.
Real talk, her feelings on the matter are on the agenda to address. Just a bit of patience.
Who is "she" here? I feel like it's meant to be Twilight given that her head is resting on him, but Sunset could be doing that in theory since the last action we see her perform is turning off the lights. Who knows where she went or what she did in the dark? This also feels like a moment Twilight would use Shiny instead of Shining, so... that means it could be Sunset? I don't know, and that's the issue.
Can next chapter be them waking up and Shining fucking both of them more? Maybe even in the ass? Or even better, fucking Sunset first, creampieing her, then fucking Twilight while Twilight eats his cum out of Sunset?
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And the award for the most NSFW comment I've read today goes to...
Short answer. no. Long answer, I got plans for the next few chapters, the most immediate of which will not involve clop, so that particular suggestion will not be happening.
I loved this chapter
Decent chapter we've got here. I don't overly have much feeling toward this one, but I feel that's because my liking for Twilight x Shining has changed over the years. Nevertheless, this was enjoyable and I look forward to more.
You gotta add in Celestia, I am begging you.
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Celestia is a definite maybe. It's not a matter of what mares to do. It's entirely a matter of how well I can do them. Soon as I can think of a good scenario for her, in she goes. And if you can, well, I am accepting suggestions via pm.
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Perhaps you could reveal that all prospective Captains of the royal guard are subject to a “special interview” with the princess. It could be a secret ancient tradition.
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I've seen that scenario a fair few times already. Not a bad thing; it works for a reason. Amd funnily enough, it does fit where I want this story to go.
Eh, maybe. I think I wanna get through the current plate of mares before I add new ones. I havent even started on the next chapter, so thats something I'll want to get on.
Wow 0.0 this is so fucking good, it has it all, a good plot, a protagonist one can emphatize, and a very good Xxx writing :D, now lets go for the next ones, lets see mmm... Moon Dancer, Celestia, Ink Well, Trixy, Lyra, Minuette,Lemon Heart, Pinky Pie, Rarity, Cherelee, Derpy, a maid, a thestral, and miss Harswhinny :D, all of those can fit the story nicely, considering they are in canterlot, anyway, i hope this contenue as good as always :D, oh and about celestia, why not get her on board as her famous alter ego Sunny Skies, and get on the fun from time to time in the story, and somehow reveal herself some time later, actually she could be using sunny skies to do something similar on her own, the tecnicallities are up to you.
It's been a great read, hopefully there's more to come. First time commenting on this story, but let me tell ya I've been revisiting some of these chapters a few times already just because they're the good stuff.
WOOT! an update!!!!
You're a dick to lonely people.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
1:20_4/29/2018
Its kinda ...awkward. These kinds of things, in story form, never 100 percent seems to work out. Not in terms of everyone being happy, but the writing gets so technical and yet improbable and things seem to go way too fast.
Not really your fault though, you did good writing with what you had.
Pants? Dry?! Not after reading this story!
Yeahhh!! another chapter of one of the best cfics in fimfiction :D, i was thinkig you just left, but now are here kicking flanks again :D.
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I never left. Just been busy and with dead momentum. But I'm back now.
Yeees!!! Great Chapter
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I admit that I started with this chapter (thanks for the chapter breakdown in the description
), and thus far I am impressed with your writing of Equine Erotica
Well, off to read the other chapters now.
This story is great, man! Keep writing, please
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Working on it, dude. It's been hard lately. Not due to hard times or anything. Just mainly trying to get stuff done on my main account.
Gotta admit this is really enjoyable. Funny and sexy with honestly a interesting story. Look forward to future updates.
Just read the newest chapter, and this was the first thing I thought of.
Not sure if it was intentional, but still funny as Hfil.
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Not as intentional as my other references, but I am a huge fan of TFS, so I ain't complaining.
It bugs me that you never explain the significance of horngasms, and specifically why Sunset was trying to clear herself and Shining from Twilight whenever Twi had one. Are they potentially dangerous? Is gross overstimulation or the like a possibility? Something else?