Before I read this, I must know how Cadence feels about this.

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Oh, she's [WHATEVER FEELING YOU WANT TO HEAR] with this arrangement.

Real talk, her feelings on the matter are on the agenda to address. Just a bit of patience.

“Love you, Shining,” she mumbled sleepily, so quietly he was almost sure he didn’t hear it, before he felt her head rest on his ribs.

Who is "she" here? I feel like it's meant to be Twilight given that her head is resting on him, but Sunset could be doing that in theory since the last action we see her perform is turning off the lights. Who knows where she went or what she did in the dark? This also feels like a moment Twilight would use Shiny instead of Shining, so... that means it could be Sunset? I don't know, and that's the issue.

Can next chapter be them waking up and Shining fucking both of them more? Maybe even in the ass? Or even better, fucking Sunset first, creampieing her, then fucking Twilight while Twilight eats his cum out of Sunset?

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And the award for the most NSFW comment I've read today goes to...

Short answer. no. Long answer, I got plans for the next few chapters, the most immediate of which will not involve clop, so that particular suggestion will not be happening.

I loved this chapter

Decent chapter we've got here. I don't overly have much feeling toward this one, but I feel that's because my liking for Twilight x Shining has changed over the years. Nevertheless, this was enjoyable and I look forward to more.

You gotta add in Celestia, I am begging you.

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Celestia is a definite maybe. It's not a matter of what mares to do. It's entirely a matter of how well I can do them. Soon as I can think of a good scenario for her, in she goes. And if you can, well, I am accepting suggestions via pm.

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Perhaps you could reveal that all prospective Captains of the royal guard are subject to a “special interview” with the princess. It could be a secret ancient tradition.

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I've seen that scenario a fair few times already. Not a bad thing; it works for a reason. Amd funnily enough, it does fit where I want this story to go.

Eh, maybe. I think I wanna get through the current plate of mares before I add new ones. I havent even started on the next chapter, so thats something I'll want to get on.

Wow 0.0 this is so fucking good, it has it all, a good plot, a protagonist one can emphatize, and a very good Xxx writing :D, now lets go for the next ones, lets see mmm... Moon Dancer, Celestia, Ink Well, Trixy, Lyra, Minuette,Lemon Heart, Pinky Pie, Rarity, Cherelee, Derpy, a maid, a thestral, and miss Harswhinny :D, all of those can fit the story nicely, considering they are in canterlot, anyway, i hope this contenue as good as always :D, oh and about celestia, why not get her on board as her famous alter ego Sunny Skies, and get on the fun from time to time in the story, and somehow reveal herself some time later, actually she could be using sunny skies to do something similar on her own, the tecnicallities are up to you.

It's been a great read, hopefully there's more to come. First time commenting on this story, but let me tell ya I've been revisiting some of these chapters a few times already just because they're the good stuff.

I admit that I started with this chapter (thanks for the chapter breakdown in the description), and thus far I am impressed with your writing of Equine Erotica

Well, off to read the other chapters now.

It bugs me that you never explain the significance of horngasms, and specifically why Sunset was trying to clear herself and Shining from Twilight whenever Twi had one. Are they potentially dangerous? Is gross overstimulation or the like a possibility? Something else?