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Applepip


Just your average pony nothing to see here!

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Comment posted by Khorne deleted Jun 22nd, 2014

You had my curiosity,but now you have my FULL attention!
~FiBP

Last chapter should be about them putting Discord in his place. The harmonic energies they create will turn him back into stone. And ofcourse all of the ponies will see their "lover".

I am interested in seeing were this train-of-thought will crash.

Holy shit yo.. Update this PLEASE this is awesome!

Hmm... It's either Fluttershy or Pinkie.

This made me laugh please keep it coming.

Comment posted by Aleksandr Sherbet deleted Jun 25th, 2014

Any chance you could fit some impregnation themes into the next chapter?

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Like what? Just so I know what your asking because as a human Tomas can't get the ponies pregnant.

Do you mean more descriptive climaxing scenes?

4599266 He can't? I'm surprised that Discord didn't make some modifications to Tomas's equipment in an effort to further mess with the princesses and the Mane 6. But if it's not your cup of tea, it's not your cup of tea.

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I said as a human he can't *wink* *wink*

But i shall say no more.

Twilight, Futtershy or Rarity i say. But i would like Rainbow Dash and Applejack as the fourth and fifth one at least.

good Clopfic i think.^^

Well not bad, but somehow the first two chapter were better, but still good.
PS: For my like i mean, the story itself is still as good as befor^^

Hey, Dash. Fuck you too~

It's either Rarity or Rainbow Dash.

Have they something on their ears? Some way i understadn why she is angry, but then again they had to know at least now that they haven´t much of a choice or not, do they?

I think it is good but i think i like the chapters in this line

1.Luna
2.Celestia
3.Flutteryshy
4.Pinky Pie

“You touch me and I'll rip your sheath off! You hear me!”

"I do." -Poke-

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*Screams and tearing of flesh*

I am happy for a new chapter, but again i think some of the first ones were better. Well probably just my taste, and i start to want a sequel to it, with a normal story, if you want a mature one because of this story here. I want him to help them to beat Discord again and i don´t remember if he was happy in his world but maybe he just can go to Equestria. It would be funny to have a probably blushing Celestia to ask him for a night together again, or if he would be together with Luna again, all the others could hear would be her royal voice screams, yeah funny if everyone can hear it.

This is the third Clopstory i somehow would like a real story about.

Discord's is so... I CAN'T EVEN PROPERLY EXPRESS IT!

No wait, I can. What a dick.

I hope you put the next chapter out soon!!!

Please remove this story from the humanized section.

Well if you're making a sequel it'll be great and full of cloppy misadventures

Well cant wait for the sequel then

Geez. What a way to make us wanting more.

i think the one with Rainbow Dash, was the third one i didn´t liked.

If i remember it right, Celestia was my favourite, then probably.....Fluttershy or Luna (probably Fluttershy), and the third Rarity till now.

i suppose some of this could have been better, but if there is a sequel, it is quite alright.

Well, that's the last chapter folks! I knew you where expecting Twilight to be tied up or spanked but I have a reason for ending it here as I have decided to make the sequel a proper story.

That means plenty of clop and more encounters with the mane six and the princesses, also some other ponies will be thrown in for substance!

I know it might not have ended to everyone's liking but like i said the sequel will be full of plenty for you to soak up!

I guess i would prefer the sequel to be with Celestia, and maybe her sister too, as some sort of his real relationship/herd or something like that.

Since what Twilight said in the last chapter meant something to him, i suppose he is going to have a real Herd or Harem or something like that. Then again, i don´t know if she doesn´t want to understand this, but in one way he toldher already, that he could not do much or anything about it, but it looked like she wanted to force him to marry her friends or care more for them, than he probably could if he would be forced to get back, i just mean that it looked like he had no choise.

Now about him having a choise, i have my theory about what happened at the end, but i won´t say anything till later, i am not that confident about it. However, what i wanted to say is, that it was still a bit weird, that he suddenly started to act, like he had planned the whole thing alongside Discord, i mean as he spoke with Celestia, he talked with her like he did it "completely" out of free will.

Well i don´t know if it is because it is already late enough for me, but i don´t mind that ending to much.

I know you probably want to make it another Clopfic, but i would be happy about a Slice of Life, Mature, Sex, Romance, Comedy? Sequel or something like that. I want this to be a real, and long story, take your time to make something good.

Since Celestia was my favourite ( I don´t know, it was somehow a good first chapter), i would like her to be more imporant for him, if he should choose to be more sappy now, and i guess he should get his own name, I don´t suppose that he have to take the one that Discord gave him huh? Even if no one should be able to change his Cutiemark, i don´t think that he want to live as Plot Fucker. A funny name for this story, but not really if it meant that he wanted to live in Equestria.

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I thank you for liking it and for the input you wrote. I am writing this on my sisters ipad as my computer had a graphic card meltdown and is out of action, so my stories are going to be on hold till I can get a replacement.

In terms of this stories sequel it was being written along side the rewrite of call of the wild 2. When I get my computer back up I will let all my followers know:twilightsmile:

5835270 I hope he isn't a pony in the sequel. I liked this story but I don't like stories were humans get turned into ponies.

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