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Applepip


Just your average pony nothing to see here!

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Hmmm... well if your taking requests, he should get molested by Lyra. Hey its an old trope but it works.

I would love something with Pinkie Pie :D

Roseluck or Nurse Redhart. :rainbowwild:

Princess Twilight first?

Sequel? This is a sequel? That should have been mentioned in the description. What story is this the sequel to?

5895186 It does say a sequel in the short description of the story, this story I really wasn't going to make but the first one was so popular I made this one as an actual story with clop

Okay. I read some of the prequel and re-read this. The only reason they are free was because Discord made the mistake of turning him into a pony. Without those pony feelings, what makes them think that he won't try something like that himself?

5904614 uh uh uh, i can't reveal plot lines. That would be telling.

5906399 As long as it gets explained before he leaves the hospital and is able to walk on his own.

Lost me at turned into a pony.

Well, that answers my previous question. Equestrian DNA gave him more than a new body. I do notice you seem to confuse your with you're quite a bit.

5930183 Yeah, it's something I keep having problems with. I go through the chapter before I post it but sometimes some slip through.

however in-between them there will be chapters involving background ponies, which one's it will be will be up to you guys :pinkiehappy:

honestly i thought this would be a more serious story, or at least that it isn´t a Human harem story, but well i just read it.

Okay i am maybe a bit wary about it, bu till know i like what happened, it is just that i would like it, if he would actually like a certain group of them a little bit more, even if he should choose a work like that, i hope that he has someone, like maybe Celestia, Twilight or one of the others to love.

Rough first day out of his hospital room in Equestria. The filly's mother probably took one look at him and screamed her head off.

I like were this is going. Can't wait for more.

Somehow it is always a little bit weird if i read it, but i like this chapter.

Don't keep us waiting in suspense!

6221828 sorry wazza, my computer is out of action for a while. Might be a month or two before any updates. Sorry to everypony else waiting.
(i'm writing this on my xbox)

I'm caught up. Hopefully, everything goes well with you so we can have the next chapter.

Sweet an update. Hilarious Chapter dude, Can't wait for more.

I wish I had that special talent.

Well, Thomas just learned a valuable lesson...tread carefully when dealing with a mother and her child (foal). Look forward to more updates.:pinkiehappy:

“Sorry no time to explain

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lizard called a comodo

komodo.:twistnerd:

6473428 Thanks, I knew I might have spelt it wrong.

Hah! I figured that Twilight need a little more time. One point for me!

6488265 Don't worry it will happen just wait you will enjoy it! Just remember what Applejack said in the earlier chapter!

So now he is in Ponyville. Let's see how the citizen are towards him in the next few days.

“I'm not nerdy!” Twilight huffs, pulling away her hoof.

Sorry, couldn't resist.:rainbowlaugh::facehoof:

I´m not saying that I suddenly like the plot of this sequel, but after waiting a long time, this chapter alone wasn´t bad.

Wow. Hard to believe Fluttershy did so well considering she was a virgin not to long ago.

The hell's Spikes deal? That seemed a little uncalled for.

well if anyone needs me im going to give spike a little "chat" *walks towards spike while emitting killing intent that could even scare discord*

I do find it weird that Spike is reacting like that. He is Twilight's first boyfriend which means that nobody else has ever hurt her.

I'm 50/50 on Thomas banging Twilight right now maybe later when he figures out what crawled up Spikes ass.

Spike needs to get over himself/get punted like a football, maybe that'll knock some sense into him

Please don't make it a story were the character is a door mat...

6846229 Oh he won't be, remember he is still human even though he has Equestrian DNA inside of him.

6847057 hue hue hue ;3 I feel bad for spike m8

I actually understand where Spike is coming from. He doesn't want to see Twilight get her heart broken. He thinks Thomas is just going to 'hit it and quit it', then Twilight talks like she can't wait to let someone she hasn't known for that long do just that, Spike calls her what she is sounding like and get the taste slapped out of his mouth.

Was this some kind of teasing chapter? Still a good chapter though. Hope the next one isnt to far off.

Gone too far. He did not need to deck Spike, Confront him, yes, but he had no right to deck him. Spike called her what she was sounding like a whorse so she called her out on it. I'm sorry, that part pissed me off.

Who is hard stroke? Also, spike deserved to get decked, it was a reality check ^_^

7209597 This is what Twilight said:

“So what!? I have waited so long for a stallion to come along to take what I have to give. Thomas is the only one I have ever really connected with, we have already gone halfway and I want the full ride!”

Then Spike said:

“Twilight, listen to yourself! You sound like some whorse!”

And she did. I'm sure if she said that to either her parents or Shining, she would have received a similar reaction, if not worst. As for him getting decked, Spike has only known him for a week, maybe two. I was hoping Spike would have blown fire at his ass and told him off. So, no, he did NOT deserve to be decked by this guy.

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