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Well if you're making a sequel it'll be great and full of cloppy misadventures
Well cant wait for the sequel then
I wish you luck
Geez. What a way to make us wanting more.
i suppose some of this could have been better, but if there is a sequel, it is quite alright.
I guess i would prefer the sequel to be with Celestia, and maybe her sister too, as some sort of his real relationship/herd or something like that.
Since what Twilight said in the last chapter meant something to him, i suppose he is going to have a real Herd or Harem or something like that. Then again, i don´t know if she doesn´t want to understand this, but in one way he toldher already, that he could not do much or anything about it, but it looked like she wanted to force him to marry her friends or care more for them, than he probably could if he would be forced to get back, i just mean that it looked like he had no choise.
Now about him having a choise, i have my theory about what happened at the end, but i won´t say anything till later, i am not that confident about it. However, what i wanted to say is, that it was still a bit weird, that he suddenly started to act, like he had planned the whole thing alongside Discord, i mean as he spoke with Celestia, he talked with her like he did it "completely" out of free will.
Well i don´t know if it is because it is already late enough for me, but i don´t mind that ending to much.
I know you probably want to make it another Clopfic, but i would be happy about a Slice of Life, Mature, Sex, Romance, Comedy? Sequel or something like that. I want this to be a real, and long story, take your time to make something good.
Since Celestia was my favourite ( I don´t know, it was somehow a good first chapter), i would like her to be more imporant for him, if he should choose to be more sappy now, and i guess he should get his own name, I don´t suppose that he have to take the one that Discord gave him huh? Even if no one should be able to change his Cutiemark, i don´t think that he want to live as Plot Fucker. A funny name for this story, but not really if it meant that he wanted to live in Equestria.
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I thank you for liking it and for the input you wrote. I am writing this on my sisters ipad as my computer had a graphic card meltdown and is out of action, so my stories are going to be on hold till I can get a replacement.
In terms of this stories sequel it was being written along side the rewrite of call of the wild 2. When I get my computer back up I will let all my followers know
5835270 I hope he isn't a pony in the sequel. I liked this story but I don't like stories were humans get turned into ponies.