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Nut
Wow. Just wow. That was one wild, but one damn HOT ride. Good job!
The alternate description in the little box, forget what it's called, You spelt Twilight as Tiwlight
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Thanks!
Yep, that ending sounded about right.
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Cheers guys, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Oh good lord
Hilarious, a definite keeper!
Hey, I recognize that cover art!
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Alcor is awesome.
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That he is.
Pity the comic ended. Now we can buy it, though.
This is shakespearicles-grade material right here.
t h a n k y o u
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G I G A N U T
Been noticing a few of your italicized sentences aren't closed properly.
I'm also seeing inconsistent anatomy; in some passages, there are hooves, in others, fingers. The problem is present in the first story, too.
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Thanks coretz, I'll do a scan, definitely shouldn't be any nonmagical fingers about
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Actually, could you point out the instances you found? Just did a wish scan and couldn't find anything.
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Hahaha, thanks for the compliment, lol
Okay, first of all, that was some hot as shit horse smut. 10/10 would cum again.
Second, I loved the interaction between Starlight and Cadence/Twilight; that was a secondary highlight of this story.
And finally, that ending was way out in left field, did not see that coming. I kinda choked on my drink laughing so hard and now my keyboard is in a tub of rice.
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Glad to hear it! Please submit all damage claims for keyboards to shakespearicles
So
Sauce for the cover art?
Detail is something you should always be careful asking for from a stressed-out, anxious, nerdy, alicorn book horse.
Truly the understatement of the year. Though given enough time, I’m pretty sure Twilight would have had charts and diagrams prepared.
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Alcor on derpibooru
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I'm glad you liked all the little jokes I seeded in!
Stressed bookhorses are indeed quite scary.
God dammit I lost it on the koolaid joke lol. Awesome story clop.
So. I hate to ask, but...
Sauce on the pic?
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Alcor
Ooh, a truth spell.
Hey, at least you have good taste, Shining.
Oh Celestia, their awkward confessions entertain me.
Yes, Starlight.
Twilight has got that nerdy-sexy vibe nailed.
You underestimate the power of having the supposedly unobtainable hot pony of your fantasies actually pleasure you, Cadance.
You naughty colt, Shining, you're 'recovering' to your own sister's juices.
It's gonna break, and at the worst possible time. Or is it the best possible time?
Well, the condom can't break if they don't use it in the first place.
By Celestia, this conversation is... hot.
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I'm glad all the little jokes were appreciated!
I, especially a certain part, loves how rough, raw, dominating, and primal Shining is being.
Very hot.
Told ya.
i.imgur.com/ZTFZTyA.jpg
Incest and impregnation!
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That's my favorite type of smut, when things get a little... instinctual, bestial, you put it quite well with 'primal'.
I hope you'll forgive me the redonkulous ending, your comments were a pleasure to read!
Thank you!
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You're welcome.
Thanks for the other comment.
Great story! Sexy, but very funny! I liked the characterization of the characters a lot. Good job! There were a few grammar errors and a few wrong letter mistakes, as well as quite some amount of wrongly opened/closed formatting tags, but overall a great read!
UwU
I need to read the prequel.
Edit: Oh, I did already. Nvm.
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I think I found the broken formatting tags.
Would love if you could point out the grammar/letter mistakes so I can clean them as well.
It's pretty obvious that Celestia and Luna were watching all, and betting XD, so to get more laughs they appear to say stuff, a sequel to the next attempt would be good, with either an XXL sized condom or a more experience twilight, regardless a joke about starlight and her father would have benn good in the fic, anyway, good story dude, loved it to the end.
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Well, I can't do it just yet, but I will try in the next few days to go through the prequel and this one and then send you a PM with the details, if you want?
Well damn... I love this story already for the humor and writing Soon also for the trill
Cadance sure is gifted Shining was edged the hole night so i guess that how he stored more than usual... Starlight sure had fun Lets see how daring Twilight will grow harvesting
Cadance and Starlight teamwork Pretty sure Readers envy Shining or Twilight
NOT that i totaly love it but... After all Twilight witness should now know that the condom cant work... This load of his should Pop that condom...
How did i black out a Dialog so its only to read if you Click on it?
Your end is to Overkill! I was hoping for a sequel of the harvesting with this result
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You don't have to, but if you did it would be highly appreciated!
https://memegenerator.net/img/instances/65400183/not-even-worth-rolling-my-eyes.jpg
the ending was beautiful :')
I think that last joke might work better if Shining was saying "Oh no" instead of "Oh buck". Just a thought. Other than that though this was super hawt and funny.
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Thank you! Gotta ponify the final joke a little bit, at least!
Can we get a link to the cover image?
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It's from Alcor, image 1996168 on derpibooru, just paste that in the url after "derpibooru.org/".
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in the text box there is a button labelled Sp. click that and you'll start typing in a special text box. or, you can type [ spoiler ][/ spoiler ] with the spaces removed. then start typing between the two middle brackets.