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I want nothing more than to bring a smile to your face with a light-hearted clopfic! If you want to bring a smile to mine, leave a comment!

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how long to we predict the mods will get all anal and remove the pic? fucking hot tho :P

If you look carefully, you'll see it's just sweat, drool and tears! (Maybe she just ate some spicy chili.)

should the first word be his... not he?

whoops, first letter got eaten during the copy paste somehow. Fixed!


It’s frosting, she was baking and splashed some on her face and like every red-blooded ‘Murican, she’s got to lick it off . . . with love . . . because it’s frosting and nothing else.

If I don’t have a grudge on FimFic, I’m not living life to my fullest, and that’s an actual fact.

Fun fact: the long hair on the lower legs of heavier breeds of horse is called feathers, or feathering.

I haven't read it yet, but between the subject matter and the Cover Pic, I think I'm gonna like it.

Good to see more.

that's quite the cover pic, i tell you hwhat

Only a bit over a half hour, in the middle of the night, and already I can tell this is gonna strike it big. As if there was any doubt.

Definitely gonna take the time and read this one over for sure, you always do write good stuff; even the smut aside. :twilightsmile:

EDIT: Well I refreshed the main page and it's already featured at number 6. Hot damn!

“Boop!” Cookie’s hoof poked him right in the middle of his pucker.

Lewdest boop ever

"Comms check, this is cardiovascular! Penis, status report!"
"Cardiovascular, this is penis, status is 'MUH,' over!"

*accidentally puts it into the bookshelf he uses for sfw long stories*

Welp. I guess it's staying there now.

Oh lord that ending XD

Is it wrong that i wanna see a sequal with him and lets be honest his herd

This the most common type of comment on any story by Clopficsinthecomments. I'm going to go out on a limb and suggest what you're saying isn't intended to be controversial, you've just phrased it that way.

Ahhhh maaaaaaaan! You beat me to Glorious Kazakhstan-posting!

Probably as I've had zero sleep do too doctors orders

Tail bun, huh? Maybe Caisson should help her bun her tail so she can feel like the grown up mare she wanted all day to be. I mean, they're home and with no judgemental classmates to decry Cookie's unfashionable... lateness.

Is it sad that The Caisson Song came to my mind when reading the description?

I was fully expecting a different outcome. Like... when he reared back, hooking the table and flipping it without using any hooves.

And damn, Cheerilee! Cold. (And I'm not talking about Hay Stack)

"Now, sprout, if you'd just stop a moment, and really pay attention to your older brother and sister, they could teach you a thing or two you'll be really glad to know when you're older."

The clop in this story was... unreal. Completely off the chain. I've never in all my days seen someone write such an aggressively-detailed and relentless sex scene. There are some things you can teach a man to do but you can't teach him how to completely disregard conventional wisdom like that and expect to ground things in reality at the last minute.

The winning scene is, by far, Caisson's little sister doing the whole 'you're gonna be in trouble' bit. It was a big hit with me and Admiral Biscuit and effectively cooled the runaway chain reaction sex scene in a way I didn't think was possible. It's a high-risk/high reward style of writing and you always seem to come off better in the gamble. Commendable effort, me boyo!

Thank you for all the upvotes, gents! :heart:

jeezus, clops, you really knocked it outta the park with this one. wonderful stuff.

I'm not an incest fan but this was really nice and sexy , hoping for a sequel where he breaks his promise and knocks up his schoolmates.

Clops wrote a big story description

Like, really big.

You usually have to wait for the story to dig into that many paragraphs! He even dialed the story description up to 11 with his Maximum Energy.

Fantastic as always, I saw this while I was at work and couldn't wait to read it. Been missing your content, hope things are going well.

As a certified BIG BOITM, these kinds of fics are always my favorite.

Keep these stories running guy every time you upload its like a ray of light from the clouds is shining down on clopfics everywhere. XD love your work

Well that certainly explains his name and sheer size. (Before that song, I did not know a Caisson was a type of wagon...)

This song was actually playing in my head when I decided to name him. Good catch!

Not sure why it's controversial.

You're spot on though, AJA... the most common comment on my stories is: "But I wanna see how this continues to unfold!!!"

I take it as a big compliment that readers get invested in my stories to the extent they want to hear more about the characters and what happens! But, you know what they say, always leave 'em wanting more...

That said, Caisson may make an appearance again in some other fic of mine, who knows. It's not like I won't have need of some heroic giant-stallionhood-slinger in many a future fic!

Thanks! I do always try to bring my crazier stories back to some semblance of a landing.

I think Cookie would break his kneecaps if he broke his promise.

Satisfyin' the needs of unmarried mares is one thing... knocking up every one of her friends (and herself) is another.

"Hooves off my big brother!"

Was it big? I thought it was reasonable, lol... I've definitely done bigger ones -- no limit on the long description!

Everything is fine! A bit of a gap since my last fic (June-July I think?) Because I've been spending a ton of time working on re-writing Mission Failed... and then this one was a beast!

You can probably expect more of the same (a story about once every 1-2 months or so).

I'm really excited for Mission Failed! Great to hear :yay:

Poor Caisson!


Or is it 'lucky bastard' Caisson?

It's 'big Dick' Caisson. You're welcome.

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