If I cold begin to be half of what you think of me I could do about anything I could even learn how to love like you.
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Might want to watch those pretenses, you switch quite frequently here
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I like your profile pic.
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Thanks.
It’s my OC Sparkling Medley.
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I wanted to get this chapter out quickly
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I could tell.
Just a bit of friendly advice, we’d rather wait for a good chapter than a rushed chapter. Grammar wise or otherwise.
Awesome work love it keep it up
I see that it's finally here, the remake. Nice!!!
So, what's gonna be the changes in here? Or it will be the same thing, but with better grammar and everything improved?
this is really good so far
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Well the first big change is that Starlight is the first pet instead of Trixie
Pet play huh, well as long as it is mutual and the one acting like a pet is willing to do so I guess I’m okay with this.
its ok when it gets to same number of chapters as the old one i will coment on the last one
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Im glad you liked it
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Why would it annoy me?
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Oh I definitely do, but I try to keep myself calm. And this didn't bother me. Also just letting you know, this story was co written by me and my partner. he's known as The Lurker on this website
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It was funny. I laughed.
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No problem.
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*huggles*
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Go for it
I should help with this
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I would be very open to your help, Shade~!
it is a good chapter
nice work
Excellent work I agree with you I love starlight as twilight first pet and i did enjoy your old one as well but this one was excellent keep it up and can’t wait for will happen next.
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Thank you very much
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I have a lot of plans, but I've learned from my past mistakes. I need to pace myself instead of cranking out chapters asap until I'm burnt out.
Just started following this story not even 24-hours before the second chapter came out!
Excellent work!
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can you wait intel it reaches the same number of chapters before you judge ok and do wait because we don't want the author burning himself ok.
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Talk about good timing lol
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Thank you.
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your welcome
I have a sudden urge to wanna boop Starlight’s snoot. I happily await for more, especially if Tempy will eventually show up.
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Oh I have quite a bit planned for Tempy.
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lel
when will the next chapter come out?
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I dont know. This story hasn't been high on my priorites for awhile. I've been going through a lotof shit.
Yay this story has new chapter I wonder how twixie will be introduced this time
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I love this stuff lol
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You see, the funny thing is.....I have no fucking idea.
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XD
Excellent work love it keep the work up
nice work
I see what you meant in your blog. What you have doesn't really have anything that could do with expanding, and just about anything you try to transition it to would be quite jarring.
I think you made the right choice in just posting it.
Woop woop more story
And a nive little chapter :)
Think I found an error here
another good chapter also are u going to add enchantments to the collar like u did in the original thank you mistress
I wonder what the fate of this work will be.
I'm waiting for the continuation.
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It's not cancelled at the very least. I've just been focusing on non pony related stuff. Right now I'm deep into my Helluva Boss story. I just posted the twenty second chapter not even a few minutes later.
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I understood. Good luck writing another story.
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If the question is still relevant, I can offer an option: after visiting Ponyville for the first time, Trixie was angry at Twilight Sparkle for surpassing the showpony and embarrassing her. But after the second visit (with the alicorn amulet), when she saw the kindness and compassion that the then unicorn possesses, she begins to reconsider her views on Twilight, gradually awakening romantic feelings towards the purple mare. Having gone on another trip, Trixie overcomes herself and becomes stronger in order to attract the attention of her beloved, but the next return to Ponyville shocks the young sorceress, shattering all her hopes for a relationship with the now alicorn. It is in such a desperate state that Starlight finds Trixie and makes friends with her and, inviting the latter to the castle, "fires" in the service of the mistress, which again encourages Trixie to act.
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