• Published 12th Nov 2017
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Jack Spicer's Quest to Conquer Equestria - CrazedLaughter



Jack Spicer and Wuya are teleported to Equestria after a fight with Omi and his friends. Jack, using his evil genius, plots a magnificent and fool proof plan to take over the new land he finds himself in. Also Wuya is there.

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Epilogue

With Wuya defeated. The land that had been destroyed and killed by Wuya's influence began to immediately spring back to new life.

With the defeat of Wuya, life in Equestria, Like with the defeat of any other major threat, returned to normal. With ponies going on about their lives like nothing happened.

Wuya herself didn't even have a chance to escape. For when Jack noticed her trying to float away in ghost form. He had the bright idea to open the comic book at her. Sucking her in and sealing her inside. It would have to work as a prison for now.

Twilight and her friends went back to their lives as well. Setting up a reconstruction team to clear away the remnants of Wuya's castle and restore the old castle of the two sisters.

Good Jack, feeling his purpose for being there had been fulfilled. Wished a happy farewell to those who could hear and see him....Well..not before Pinkie stalled him long enough to throw him the most awkward party ever thrown. Since none of the guests could see or hear him. He thought it was simply delightful.



As for Jack. Twilight allowed him to stay in the castle basement as he studied the comic book and attempted to build a portal back to his universe. Jack was pardoned for his crimes due to saving the world. But he was given housing to the basement so she could keep a close eye on him, just in case. As he still made claims on being "Evil".


"JAAAACK! LET ME OUT OF HERE!" Wuya cried out from the comic book "I'M IN SOME KIND OF UNDERWORLD WHERE THE VILLAINS LOSE EVERY TIME! IT'S HORRIBLE IN HERE!"

Jack was doing his best to ignore his former companion as he began welding together pieces of metal from scrap Scavenger Bot #2 was bringing him when not hanging out with Spike. "Yeah I know...you've said it like a hundred times. Can't you see I'm busy?"

"HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO SEE ANYTHING WHEN I'M INSIDE THIS STUPID BOOK! LET ME OUT! LEEETTT MEEEE OUTTT!" Wuya screeched

"Ugh." Jack was rubbing his temples "I'm getting a headache...I hope Princess Sporkle finds that spell to mute you soon..it's getting really old real fast."

"YOU'LL NEVER SILENCE ME! YOU THINK I'M TRAPPED IN HERE FOREVER?! OHH HOHOH I'LL BE BACK! AND YOU'LL BE SORRY! JAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!" Wuya was screeching like a banshee

Jack just rolled his eyes and flapped his fingers like it was a mouth.

Suddenly, there's a quick zipping sound coming from behind him. Before he can even turn around. He feels a warm being grasping him from behind "Hey Jack!"

It was Scootaloo. Flying into Jack to give him a friendly hug.



"Oh hey Scoots! how are ya-" Jack turned around "what is that on your head?" Jack pointed to a pair of blue goggles on Scootaloo's head. with Rainbow Dash's Cutie Mark marked on each side of the frames.

"Goggles...why?" Scootaloo looked up at him with a smile "Pretty cool huh?"

"No! That helipack doesn't go with those goggles!" Jack points with heavy emphasis to his own goggles "they go with THESE goggles"

"Come on Jack, I think both you and Rainbow Dash are cool. You don't gotta be jealous!" Scootaloo nudged him

"I'm not jealous...I just know what fashion is. That's all." Jack crossed his arms.

"Rarity says your clothes are tacky" Scootaloo said

"HER FACE IS TACKY!" Jack yelled in reply.

Scootaloo giggled "come on Jack, relax. I actually came to ask if you wanted to help us get our cutie mark today."

Jack looked at the comic book, Wuya still screeching like mad. he winced, then looked back at Scootaloo "Yeah sure why not. I've been working all day on this thing"

"Cool! Come on, let's go!" Scootaloo landed, and started walking forward to the stairs next to Jack.

"So, what's the order of the day" Jack asked

"Well, Applebloom suggested we try being Manticore tamers!" Scootaloo smiled and hopped about.

"No! NONONONONO! Waaaayyyyy too dangerous. Nuh uh." Jack waved his hands about

"...awww...well, I guess it's a little dangerous. How about...cutie mark crusader Spelunkers!" Scootaloo suggested

"nope, I'm not going into any dark and creepy caves. Remember what happened last time?" Jack mentioned

"The spiders we're only like...as big as my eyes. They weren't that bad!" Scootaloo said

"That's bad enough for me....I can still feel them...ewwww" Jack shivered

"Ok..how about Cutie Mark Crusader Painters?" Scootaloo made another suggestion

Jack rolled his eyes "About as fun as watching paint dry"

"hmmm..OH I GOT IT! How about Cutie Mark Crusader World Conquerors!"" Scootaloo raised her hoof


"really!?" Jack suddenly got super hyped and excited at the suggestion

Scootaloo raised her eyebrow at him ".....no Jack, it was a joke" She giggled

"...right..right...I knew that..heh" Jack chuckled nervously.

They left the basement. to have their adventures. For Jack Spicer. His days in Equestria would probably be his most happiest. As he could be a different person here. He had a friend. And as long as he could hold in his rather evil tendencies. He'd be accepted here. The heroes of his own world would have reprieve in Jack's absence. But one day...Jack would be back.

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Comments ( 12 )

Really awesome and wonderful story. Any chance of a sequel?

8594402
Probably not. The story, I feel, is perfect as is

I can't be bothered to go through and correct all the various grammar errors and stuff, but in general, this is a pretty nice, succinct story. Does what it wants to do and wraps up. 6/10, held my attention the whole way through, not special but it does what it does well.

Considering the abundance of complete crap on this website with a ton of likes, it's a bit sad this doesn't have more; but at least your other story is getting attention.

8706583

I understand. It was originally a greentext story I had converted and I'm not too great with my grammat invthe first place. I'm glad it was ok enough though

8706606
Well it got a like from me. Glad you've made more stuff.

Well, it was funny, I wonder if Twilight can manage to 'reform' Jack... Also... What happened to 'Good Jack'?

It was an interesting journey, the characters were well made and felt real without OOC-ness. While you may not plans a next story you may could make spin-offs about this.

8747474
I've thought about it. but at the moment i'm working on my big main story

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Ok no hurry, good luck to your main story!

8932416
Eh. I dropped the story after the third chapter. The grammar eventually got to me and nothing else was really keeping me hooked.

I kept expecting Jack to insult Twilight for sounding like Omi (Same VA), but otherwise nostalgia all around. I miss this show.

No idea what the inspirational material was, but enjoyed it regardless :heart:

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