We all know that the Cutie Mark Crusaders do stupid things, but sometimes these things turn out to be great for meeting new people! Cue in Johnny Bravo.
This is set before the crusaders get their cutie marks, but after at least a dozen adventures together. Its also my first fic so I don't know how well I'm doing. If the story is good, then thank you! If you don't like it I would appreciate if you can tell me why. This is also supposed to be a comedy but I have no idea if its funny at all. Enjoy anyway!
But what would the cutie mark for being an irredeemable freeloading egotistical jerk with absolutely no sense of self-perception even look like?
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...nevermind.
8073944 Huh thought you were gonna make a jab a Prince Blueblood. you know, speaking of him... has he ever had any spoken lines since the Gala? I know he made a brief Cameo in Sweet and Elite but I don't know if he's shown up again since then.
Hmm, didn't expect to see this crossover ever haha!
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I was a fan of Johnny Bravo as a kid and was quite sad to not see many stories of it on Fimfiction, even if it is a short story I'm happy that I made it.
Tell the truth I would love to see a follow up to this would be interesting
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It probably would be interesting if I had any idea what I should do it about. Also it's supposed to be a one-shot if you couldn't tell by the ending.
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I know it's a one shot , I was just saying .
Johnny didn't get beaten by a female
7/10
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Timberwolves count
8073944 That, or a mirror with the word "Irony" scrawled across it.
Odd but funny story and chapter.
It's a good material, a very rare, but interesting idea.
What i felt it was plenty short and could have not much out of blue. The idea that Carl send Jhonny into another dimension is beliveable it just ended too soon.
Maybe Johnny could've spend a little more time in Ponyville (a few days). Rarity's freak out about Johnny in her house, Johnny try to calling Rarity on a date just to get a skillet into his face. Then the Crusaders spend a day to show Johnny Ponyville which would give you a lot chance for funny happenings, Johnny's reaction to the situation, to the Mane Six (and the theirs to him).
Then he could return to home similar as happened in this story and show as Johnny talk in his world about what he saw and they thinks he lost his mind (more like usually ). So it would have some more "filling".
You could make a remake or something, i hope my words will help you.
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You words help immensely. I was thinking of a rewrite but I have no idea when I shall do it.
That’s why all my stories are on hold, rewrites, ones on haitus and ones I’m planning to make.
Basically a Trump’s wall sized writers block
Love.
It.