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Summer Dancer


On Wednesdays, we wear PINK!

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Soarin has liked Rainbow Dash for some time, but unfortunately, she's really bad at picking up romantic hints, which pretty much annoys everyone.

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:rainbowlaugh: Busting a gut throughout this whole story. Great work, and I'm damn sure Nor will apprieciate this.

That was just so much like Rainbow! A very cute and funny story. Great job, Dancer!

Great job Summer, this is very good. :twilightsmile:

Ha! Glad I stumbled across this story! FAVED!

. “Ninety-three, Nintey-four, Ninety five…” 

She lifted her knees higher, her eyes sharp and focused. “Ninety-six, Ninety-seven, ninety-eight…”

94 is misspelled, and you don't need to capitalise the start of every number.

To her surprise, Soarin looked a little sheepish and absently scratched the area behind his shoulder. “What? You don’t like Ice cream?”

“Here we are!” she chirped, setting the tray down on the table. “Two cups of Hot Chocolate!”

“How about finish our CoCo and go and study?”

There's no need to capitalise the names of food items, and I was under the impression that it was spelled "cocoa".

“We should call you hot lips now,” Rainbow snickered.

Hot Lips should be capitalised here, since it's a name. Wasted opportunity for a wonderful Soarin kiss to help live up to his nickname.

“Well, yeah...yeah, of course I do...that’s not what I meant. It’s just that I thought I’d be doing something...harder than that.”

Har.

Such a cute and enjoyable story you got here :rainbowkiss: Nice job SD.

OMG!!!! I LOVED THIS!!!! SOARINDASH IS MY FAV SHIP!!!! THIS WAS AMAZING!!!! :raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry:

..Yes.
ALL of my yes. :heart:

Awww, that was cute and sweet. :rainbowkiss::heart:

I'm not usually one for SoarinDash, but this was exceptionally cute and enjoyable. It was paced just right, felt in-character, and the dynamic between the two of them was perfect.

I'm always a sucker for these type of stories. Twas a good read, indeed. I've been using slight rhymes all day what am I doing

7876752 Nothing to fear, your rhyming is top tier! :rainbowkiss:

My verdict... I LOVED IT.

Rainbow's naive nature was very cute and funny, especially with all the hints that were being dropped. And with how giddy everyone was about those two.

I liked the end too. Funny and cute.

For the record, I would totally carry Fluttershy's things around for her.

Thanks for writing this! I really appreciate it! I anticipate seeing this on the featured box considering you wrote it. And congrats on the well-deserved 900 followers!

Alright, I'm gonna dip. Thanks again for an awesome story!

kul

Hey this is pretty good! Very well written and felt inline with the canon setting. Just simple romance stuffs

“How about finish our cocoa before we and go and study?”

Try this instead.

Aww~ this was cute~

It's always such a fun thing to read about dense characters finally realizing what is going on.
Even more so since I'm often pretty dense as well :rainbowlaugh:

A fun little read! :pinkiehappy:

STOP MAKING ME FEEL FUZZY INSIDE YOU ENCHANTRESS!

more please:twilightblush:

That was beautiful.

It's never too late for another SoarinDash story:derpytongue2: Great job.

7876518 Apparently somepony doesn't like Snowdrop

As Rainbow struggled to put on her backpack, a magazine and landed on the grass, wind flipping its pages. He picked up the magazine and read the content of the open page. Squinting, he read, “‘How to Change Your G string’?”

Rainbow Dash snatched the magazine out of his hands, her cheeks burning. “Guitar practice.” She bolted and took off across the field.

As a guitar player, I can say that G string jokes never get old.

This was nice. A sweet little variation on an old favorite.

Love to hear your take on a AJxCaramel story!

If Fluttershy hadn't intervened:
:raritywink: Oh, Rainbow Dash, could you join me for a second?
:rainbowderp: Sure, but what's with the branch?
:duck: Why, this is my Clue Stick, darling.
:rainbowhuh: Ooookay, what's it for?
:raritycry: This! *WHAP WHAP WHAP* Soarin' likes you! Get it?!

7877155 I love that you love it! :yay:
7878104 AJX Caramel? Now this sounds interesting :trixieshiftright:

Comment posted by insertfootinmouth deleted Jan 18th, 2017

7878155 Oh Please oh please! She's best pony and he? A lovable screw up who tries his best should get the girl of his dreams!

I would think that Rainbow Dash would be the one to bet on somethi- oh, right.

Then pinkie pie, probably.

Good read.

7877785 To the contrary!
But if she didn't exist, this would have been a Ray Charles meme.

Sunset shivered

Sunset Shiver
Sunset Shimmer's evil winter twin.
(plays evil background sound effects)

Just couldn't get that off of my head.

Set

“Well, yeah...yeah, of course I do...that’s not what I meant. It’s just that I thought I’d be doing something...harder than that.”

Thats not something you should say when talking about love... :rainbowderp: Feels like someone in the background should shout a "That's what she said" there :rainbowlaugh:

Well anyway amazing story summer as always!

Hey, look who's featured! I called it!

Also, I just wanted to say that Fluttershy was perfect. Thanks for that! And thank you so much for the story again! I can't express how grateful I am!

Definitely not bad :twilightsmile:

Very nice. I certainly enjoyed it. The characterizations were well done, and the story itself a fun read. I can't wait to read more from here.:pinkiehappy:

A loud sigh escaped her as she sat back in the booth. "Why don't people just tell me? I'm not some mind reader!"

I totally agree with Rainbow Dash, How are you supposed to know if no one actually tells you? Hell, if I was Rainbow Dash, I still would be clueless.

This is one of those stories (at least to me since I don't pay much attention to the shipping community) that I didn't know I wanted to read until now. Good job, It was great.:twilightsmile:

Short and sweet. It’s refreshing to see a story of this sort that doesn’t insist on stretching the premise to excruciating length.

I like this story. You capture the awkwardness well towards the end and treat it gently. I like that.

Favourite line:

"Someone owes me a twenty," Spitfire smirked, holding her hand out. Fluttershy sighed and gave her the bill.

Y'know, I normally don't read romance. But this... This was great. It's so relatable, so cute and so... perfect. I loved it!:pinkiehappy:

Cute romance. I feel for Dash, as I too am not a mind reader and quite thicker than brick. Extra thumbs up for Mr. Doodle. I didn't even catch his identity at first.
7878596
I see your Sunset Shiver and raise you a Sunset Scrivener: the third, perfect result of the Le Infant Cheveux Lard project. Man, Google Translate is rough sometimes.

This is actually a nice shipping story, sweet, simple, short, perfect.

Lol
Otherwise known as "The Incredibly Dense Mind of Human Rainbow Dash."

7878708 Did I make an unintentional joke? :twilightsheepish:
7879031 That makes me so happy that you love it :pinkiehappy: Thank you for the CheesePie fic, again. :twilightsmile:

Russ. I love these kinds of stories!

"Someone owes me a twenty," Spitfire smirked, holding her hand out. Fluttershy sighed and gave her the bill.

This was my favorite part. :rainbowlaugh:

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