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The older sister of princess Luna returns after a thousand years from her banishment on the moon and supporting her are a group of ponies that believe she should rule again.
However the ruler of Equestria has made preparations for the return of the mare who once ruled the sun and she, alongside her student/daughter Twilight Sparkle, are prepared to fight for their country and its citizens.
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not sure how it going to go but I love and hope to keep reading more, so till than please keep up the alwsome work
Hmm. Rather interested in what the couple were arrested for in the previous chapter; I mean, I know its for treason, but what exactly did they do that was considered treason, if I may ask, and what happened to them?
Sorry. Curiosity.
7451233 As for what happened to them I can't exactly tell you because spoilers, but I can tell you that they no longer live.
As for what they did; They were part of the 'Solar Soldiers'. Their goal and reasons will be given in due time.
Well, this certainly interests me.
7451271 I see. Alright, then.
Zebstrika?
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>>LuminousSpark Yes, that's where I got the name for the country of zebras.
Not a good idea, that's how I ended up with 8 story shells in under a year. My advice, give yourself permission to write garbage. If you take a chapter every so often and give yourself permission to write garbage, you'll very rarely have writers block. It's difficult to do, but it really does work.
Plz don't take this as me saying, "don't write another story, work on the one you already have!" Because that's not my intent here, I just wanted to give some advice (which I should probably follow myself
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Keep up the good work I hope to see another chapter soon it's a good story and I'm love Annette
7781730 Next chapter's writing has begun but I'm quite busy. No promises but it should come out sometime in January
Why does Shining Armor look like a mare in the picture?
Can't wait for next chapter
good story I want moar,
typo
Sweet! Can't wait for more
Lunas finally going to make the dragon egg omelette she's been wanting to try for so long what better time then before a great battle.
I KNEW CELESTIA WASN'T GOING TO BE EVIL!... Or at least I was hoping that would be the case.
..... This is really interesting.
Only Unicorns, hm?
That does not reflect well on Luna.
Quick note: In dialogue, when someone addresses someone else, put a comma before the name. It can be confusing otherwise. For example:
"I don't know, Luna."
"I don't know Luna."
Have a completely different meaning.
So is it safe to say that this story is a role reversal and multiple different events end up taking place because of this?
That explains a lot! I don't blame you the console is really living up to the hype!
Well this is all forms of interesting and strange...
I want more though. So that means it's good.
So get to writing.... please . Lol
I've seen that armor so many times...it would be better if she was wearing night guard armor but it had a even darker shade of blue and the chest of her armor was red
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good chapter keep up the good work m8
7790449 lol
Sweet! Now I really can't wait to see what's going to happen!
You have really long sentences. eg:
You could probably split this into two or three sentences to make it easier to read. (And not run out of breath)
8185300 It said might. Hiatus is not confirmed but thanks.
Ty for the update.
so I haven't finished this chapter yet but as I was trying to remember what had happened up til this point in the story I remembered why this story seems so familiar to me. Have you read "The Nights Favored Child" perchance?
-EDITS WILL BE ADDED AS I READ THE CHAPTER-
also the amount of info his parents had on the solar soldiers warrants a little bit more than a, "It wasn't much." He was just handed the map to what I can only assume is a rather secret society of sun worshipers who no normal pony would know about and the key to get in.
btw those guards are terrible at their jobs if they let that kind of sensitive information stay in the house before detaining Shining's parents, they would've had to either know about his parents affiliation with the group long before hand(which raises the question of why did they wait so long to apprehend them?) or have found the information in the book before Shining did(which means the house got tossed and Shining's parents sucked at hiding crap), the first option would've required a search of the house(if the guard is structured in any sane way) in order to find any incriminating evidence at the scene of the arrest, and the second would've involved a search to begin with, making these guards especially likely to lose their jobs as they would've lost evidence.-
why do you keep saying, "clock-cicle" if you haven't(at least as far as I remember) used it in any other chapter? Also it should be "clock-cycle"
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Your complaints will be addressed in Flashback + Twilight Sparkle
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No, no I haven't.
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well it's a dead story where Luna was never banished to the moon and Twilight ends up adopted by said alicorn of the night. Something about your story has always sent me back to reread it and I keep forgetting to mention it.
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I didn't mean for it to sound like complaining, they were just things that bugged me as I read.
not that i'm complaining, but isn't the prophecy just a chunk of the lyrics to 'lullaby for a princess'?
8435939 Yes, yes they are
Cadence: Yes, but I always like to hear it... straight from the horse's mouth!
Oh, I knew it ! Mayor mare is a solar soldier too !
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Mistake fixed. Sorry for that mistake. I can't believe it slipped by me, that was embarrassing.
I just finished the chapter and then saw an ad that said 'FREE FOREVER'. Coincidence?
When can we expect the next chapter? I would like to read the hole story not just a peace of it.
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Hopefully not too long. I've just been busy with other stuff.
It's been 8 months is this dead??
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I do want to continue but I've been pretty busy. With my job taking most of my time I won't be able to get around to properly write until I have enough time in it to earn my vacation days.
twilight, shining... the irony here is so thick you can cut it with a knife.
that's just mean!!! i know you can'tcontinue it for personal reason (or i presume you do) but that's just mean to haitus a SO great story and never continue it! i've been reading it for the last, i don' know, 2ß 3? hours and i want MOOORREE!!!! it's 4:15am by the way please continue it!! for once you haven't leaved the fandom while having started somethin that great!! i don't want this one to finish like lots of other that are left with a 'next chapter soon' or things like that but never actually finished. i'm begging you to continue this!!!! please!!!!!
that's just mean!!! i know you can'tcontinue it for personal reason (or i presume you do) but that's just mean to haitus a SO great story and never continue it! i've been reading it for the last, i don' know, 2ß 3? hours and i want MOOORREE!!!! it's 4:15am by the way please continue it!! for once you haven't leaved the fandom while having started somethin that great!! i don't want this one to finish like lots of other that are left with a 'next chapter soon' or things like that but never actually finished. i'm begging you to continue this!!!! please!!!!!
is this going to be continued