"Through darkened skies and malevolent eyes, my journey never dies"-Skaltrox Orthuris: Knight of Defiance
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Twilight Sparkle's entire life started off simple, then it got a little complex with the arrival of her ascension, with time, she adjusted to her title and she couldn't be happier living her life as royalty (despite some minor problems). Celestia was proud of how far her student had come and she wished that no secrets were to be kept from her... but that also meant one of Equestria's oldest known secrets.
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I'm intrigued. The writing is very good, the characters are in character from what I can tell, and the premise is interesting. I await the next chapter.
7923595 It shall be the last. This is just a two parter. And also thanks, I've been doing my best to write better and slightly longer chapters and I can say this is my best piece so far.
7923601 look forward to it and your welcome.
Seems interesting, been a while since this has been updated though.
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Yeah I'm pretty much done writing anything on here. It was fun for a time but I just couldn't seem to write anything good enough to entice people. While that wasn't my whole reason for doing it, it doesn't hurt to have the attention a story gets such as the ones being featured. Basically motivates me to do more.
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Makes sense. That's the reason I stopped writing for a while. When I came back my skills had improved and I was making the top page on each story.
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Man I'd be satisfied with just one Story doing that good. I did have a look at a couple of your stories and I see what you mean. I might read through the best ones so I can get an idea of how it's done better
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Best tip I can give is; start with epic one-shots. You seem to be a fan of Twilight Sparkle so that's a good start she is the show's main character which makes her the most eye-catching and liked.
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Yeah I can see that. She is definitely my favourite, so I do have ideas towards that side of things. As for one shots, it seems to me that for a one shot to do well, it has to have an eye catching plot to drag people in and the story itself to build upon that
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That is true here I'll pm you and we can continue this conversation.
Is this dead because it was said it was only gonna be a two-parter so please don't just leave us here wondering