After seeing huge bursts of power from one universe a Q decides to investigate
Twilight goes for her exam for the Royal Sister's School for Gifted unicorns But something goes wrong. Follow Twilight as she tries to figure out what happened to her and how it affected her and her family.
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Seems interesting :)
Some grammar advice, statements like "Well,well,well," needs spaces after each comma
Also while you made new paragraphs when someone else started talking, you should also make a new paragraph when swapping from someone talking to narrating other things. (ex: "That would make anypony giddy.” Her father Night Light replied. (new paragraph) Yes that most prestigious school that)
Really old movie :) Flight Of The Navigator if i remeber right
5257451 Complance
Let's see where this goes...
I am curious to see where this goes, and what became of Spike, is he still in his egg or did he hatch and hasn't emerged from the time stream yet?
5347265 still in egg and being used in that exam, poor guy.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Aside from editing issues, which you provided a warning for, it's a really fun story though kinda speedy. I really like the time jump. cause filly Twilight is best Twilight(actually any Twilight is best Twilight... but you know what I mean)
Love this chapter Luna Rules
5716823 oh there's more to come with the two of them.
Top story the TwiLuna part of the story is so great TwiLuna Rules
Filly Twilight is Best Twilight
Hope more soon
5716860 on the list
5716961 ?
5716995 I cycle through my stories. right now Queen Meets Princess is up next then Nightmare, Nightmare, and a few otehrs but this is in there as well.
5717149 oh ok cool
Love this can not wait for more
5890213 I figured you love little Star more?
5890233 Love that too and can not wait for more so what will you update next
5890435 Shadow OF Loyalty. and Little Star has updated recently
5890450 I have read the new chapter of Little Star and am waiting for the update of Queen Meets Princess
My Three favas are Flare of the Twilight, Little Star and Queen Meets Princess cant wait for more are you doing any more stories
5890504 have some in mind but right now focusing on Q meets P, Shadow of Loyalty, Born for Loyalty, Love Seriously, Nightmare, Nightmare, Little Star, and Regents. With Shadow of Loyalty 2, and Moonlight planned.
5890592 What will Moonlight be about
5890614 it's a sequel to Nightmare, Nightmare where Selene deals with the last think she has to with what she is.
5890624 ok
I want to get into this, but I can't get past your bad spelling. Almost every word processor has an automatic spell-check feature, but you clearly did not use such a thing. Some of the phrasing is a bit awkward, too.
5891869 Um I do have one. perhaps you are wrong. the only thigns it really notes is names like Equestria or Equestrian terms.
5892095 I saw quite a few more than that. A spell checker is a simple thing. Many misspellings happen to be spelled like a completely different word, and thus may not be detected by a spell checker. I'm not going to go back and look for specific instances, though. Rereading things is not my way.
Gah My heart!!! The Feeeelllllsssss!
Dear god I think I'm liking this way too much lol. Keep the story coming it's really making me feel better!
Nice story. This is a very good story and I can't wait for more. Time wise Twilight is about the same age as the CMC if not a little older right? Wouldn't that change the relationship between her and the other 5?
6168368 your correct. She is 8 right now. so it will e different. Sadly I'm in a block right now in this story.
6168410 we need more now it's kinda funny to see how the main six becomes friends whit one who is 8 years younger than them
6504746 in a bind right now on one chapter. Need a bonding chapter leading to what I have planned but not sure out to do it.
6505194 ok if you need help im sure some would love to help you
6505481 so did my advice help you
6512506 a bit, it still will be a weak chapter but it is a needed one.
6512546 yeah it is hard when you don' really know how they where when they where Young
6512614 the issue is trying to have them interact with a pony that is 8 years behind the time.
6512634 well pinkie is always like a kid so she is easy
6512722 Party won't work since she already had one. and honestly this Twilight is even shyer then canon because of her jump. Pinkie would scare her more then not.
6513749 well a few games as a said and maybe make pinkie a Little more carefull
or a picnic where they all meet up
so how's it going on the Next chapter
6566359 haven't started. others have priority.
6567703 kay
6567703 I think it is sad you are kind a stuck right now
6577770 it's just this one part too. I know what's next but the transistion chapter is where I'm stuck.
6578143 have you thought about something
6631101 well right now other stories have the fore front. Curren on the next Born for Loyalty chapter then Queen meets Princess. Then It was Supposed to Be a Costume then Love Seriously, then Nightmare Nightmare
6631496 kay
this kind of story is rare beceuse I have only found a few and thise one stood out the most beside flare twilight, the story where twilight is a young fill but not wereing dippers in that case I found two, I hope to find more like this and also look forward to more ch please keep update I really love thise story