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After a series of nightmares an urgent letter summons Twilight to Canterlot but the reason is far from what she expected. As she is introduced to a secret that has been kept hidden for centuries how will the new princess respond and will her dreams allow her the choice to begin with?

Edit: 20/04/15 This story is currently on hiatus until I can get my head around it again. The original plotline has become a bit derailed and I need time to think things out. Stay tuned!

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 27 )

Alow me to be your first view...and like...and favorite. This looks interesting, I dont like stories that have tragic endings so the tragety tag is a bit offputing but I am still interested to see where this goes.

4203734 Well hopefully I can keep things interesting for you, the tragedy tag is more for the general theme as opposed to the ending itself but you'll have to wait to see how that turns out. :rainbowwild:

Nice so far keep it up!

Good beginning.
I want to see what will happen next.
Good luck and see you soon ;)

what the crap? this is both dark and epic at the same time, keep it up!

Time travel potion? wat?

You do know that it wasn't time travel? But just visions of the past.

Huh ? What the buck is Celestia doing ? And why ? I hope Sombra's explanations will come quickly.

Damn it >< Why did you cut it at this moment ?
Now, i really want to see the next chapter, and know what Twilight chose.
Arf u.u nevermind, i'll wait, but it's killing me.
See you soon

....t........That was a but too cruel.....But..I'm liking the story for far. But.......I don't know what's going to happen to Princess Luna now that Twilight is heading to her.

:ajbemused: I got a feel Twilight would take Sombra's advice and take down the Princesses.

4279940 well, Duh! They just killed her.

Nice keep it up!

4280605 :rainbowderp: What? They did? How?

4280612 read the chapter two or three I can't remember which.

Ok. And then why Twilight didn't kill Celestia right now?

:pinkiegasp: Well! About time for some updates!

Glad to see it's now continuing.

What is Twilight planning to do with the 5 elements of harmony?

"Twilight couldn’t help but lick her lips as her stomach gave an appropriate rumble."
This made me smile.:twilightsmile:

:twilightangry2: Ok. Now I'm getting angry.

Did I sense some Star Wars Episode IV Return of the Jedi lines where Luke Skywalker on the Death Star confronting the Emperor. If it is then we just need her to wear a black hooded cloak and shoot lightening from her horn and Twilight now best Palpatine :derpytongue2:

:twilightangry2: I'm so getting really angry at Twilight right now!!!

Celestia is starving to death! :flutterrage:

MORE MORE MORE!

Are we going to see more of Sombra?

5368744 You'll just have to wait and see. ^^

Awesome that was awesome keep going I'm loving this well if it's not if it's not complete love it.

Celly!!! Im starting to hate you!

Oh, lovely. More abandoned work. I wish the Recommendations remembered to give me finished work only

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