What would you do if you lost sight of your life? Literally? This piece explores that event.
[Author Notes: A short piece I wrote up this afternoon whilst searching for inspiration for my other works. I don't plan on continuing it unless there is a overwhelming request to do so. Just a short little piece with feels.]
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*slowly claps* Well done, good sir! This was something that made me feel gloomy. This was well written. Again, well done!
Also:
You meant:
or
That was....deep.
3698967 Thank you, also, corrected the error. Thanks again.
3698989 Thanks!
It feels a bit rushed in places, but I think expanding this story to include (a) the how and (b) the aftermath would be good.
But what did
do?
Also
3701211 Well as I said it was only a short inspiration piece but to be honest I do like the idea. Once I'm done working on my current stories I may come back and expand on this one. Thanks for reading. ^^
3702649 Well at the moment that's up to people to imagine but I may revisit this story and expand it in the future. ^^
Aw man... I wan't this fic to continue
So what had happened?
I understand if it's a one-shot meant to have no closure, I've wrote one myself, but dangit- At least tell us how it got to that in the first place!
4234120 Its a one shot at the moment, I may continue it in the future...
All in all, it was deep and amazing, but too short. Gets a fave from me.
And you can probably get it onto my Favoritest Fics shelf if you expand it~
7972547
Thanks, glad you enjoy it! I have pondered expanding on this in the past but the amount of time I have for writing has been limited recently. That said its always nice to hear that people want more, watch this space, maybe I'll add to it.