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David Tennant, once the tenth Doctor, retired. Or so, he was supposed. He was asked to come to a con dressed as Ten which he did. Nothing compared to his surprise at a perfect replica of the TARDIS. He asked the man how much it was. A measly amount for a beautiful recreation. He opens the door steps inside, and its black.
The last thing he remembers is the Merchant grinning at him and looking at a screen.
"ALLONSY!"
Cancelled, for now.
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Figures you would be the first to make something like this....Oh well, it's my fault for having a mini-fangasm when I saw this.
Nice chapter.
*fan girl shrieking*
its official allonsy is my new favorite phrase
besides that we got the doctor in the house, how will the rest of the displaced react
and what about whooves
Midnight... You brilliant, brilliant person!
5774753 *Fangasms all over the place*
... ... Never been a doctor who fan... but am willing to give this story a try.
And Favorited. Do I Even Need To Explain Why?
5775319
no.
Alright, question: why did she say no? It sounded like she was getting defeated.
Oh and equestria, prepare your anus! Here comes the doctor.
oh and the displaced too.
You've done good, Midnight. You've done good. Now keep this one going!
5775616
This one wasn't even planned!
Just, *lightbulb*
AH!
*type typpity type*
*Thwhip*
Done!
5775623 Don't care, keep this one going. Allons-y, MidnightHood, Allons-y!
Bonus points for using David Tennet in this
5775691
That's what I thought!
I was looking at it afterwards and thought "Oh, that is brilliant!"
so. much. awesomeness.
this won't end good for the ponys XD
5775695
You think that in some bibbly bobbly timey wimey stuff happening he meets his later lives and they are the actors that played the Doctor after him
5775707
No...
*Shifty eyes*
That was my plan already. He'll look like them.
Insta-flike
David Tennant's wife might not be too happy about his disappearance...
upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/e/ed/The_Doctor%27s_Daughter.png
--arcum42
5775810
At the point in time, he was no married. Problem solved.
5775814
That only gives you a two year period to play in, and makes it before the Day of the Doctor, then. Things would get even weirder if she did manage to follow him, of course, because she plays the Doctor's daughter...
--arcum42
5775832
I know.
Wibbly wobbly timey wimey.
..... Moar... Moar!
netlore.ru/upload/files/15/gallery/70/middle_4.jpg
... Are we on the same mental wavelength? I thought about a doctor Displaced just yesterday! I wasn't gonna write it as I'm already writing on a second one. But still, what are the odds?
5776038
I started it a few days ago but didn't get a chance to work on it until today.
5776046 I was close enough. I have many Displaced ideas.
Willy Wonka.
Danny Phantom.
Goku.
Tet.
I am even writing one where the Displaced isn't the MC.
First line, 'suite' should probably be 'suit'.
That said, this looks like fun.
I have been waiting for a Doctor displaced story for so long, thank you!
5776060 Willy... WILLY WONKA?
BEHOLD THE GREATEST SWEETSSALESMAN WHO HAS TO PROVE HE'S WORTH AGAINST FLIM AND FLAM THE LOSERS TIME TO TIME AGAIN!
5776704 Ompalompas replaced with changeling getting paid in love filled magic chocolate...
5776710 And Chrysalis as extra-rival...
*SQUEEE!!!!!!!!!!* Finally the displaced series catches my attention again.
I know nothing about Doctor Who. Will this be a problem? I want to read the story (cause the idea is great), but I don't want to stumble my way through the plot.
The Doctor is not an Equine... and boring bits skipped or not, you could develop the Doctor thoughts more.
This looks good so far. Only a few things to point out... there should be an extra line between bits of dialog. Instead of...
he said
she said
they said...
use
he said
she said
they said
Improves flow and readability. Other than that, I'll be keeping my eye on this story. Not enough good Doctor Who stories, and even less that don't get abandoned.
As much as I want to read a Doctor Who displaced story, I can't help but notice how this chapter seemed a little fast paced.
5777862 Agreed, good plot, little too rushed for my taste, and the no spacing is making my OCD want to hang myself. Still, doctorwho story is not unwelcome in my book.
Have a fantastic day everyone!
Finally, someone wrote this story! I'd been playing with the idea of a DW displaced for a while now, but never got around to it.
Midnight. You're amazing.
ALL. MY. YES.
This is genius. Please, continue! Also:
i.imgur.com/ocGSs.png
SO MUCH YES!
The idea is fucking brilliant BUT you should make the chapters longer and give the characters more development. Just a suggestion anyway
Fast, brutal, and lacking in anything more than the most basic narration. Interesting idea, but you need to do something with it, and that means taking your time to actually develop your characters and scenes.
.... I think I have to change the name of my story now. I WANNA DO A CROSSOVER!!!!!!
Wow ...I really should have written that story idea I had sooner, it was sorta like this, but different.
Sigh ...looks like I'm late to the punch, nice job by the way.
5785866 I left lots of ideas in the idea thread in the group, you can take one of those.
5785841
Oh?
Is that an official request?
5786233 As official as it's gonna get....