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Everyone knows the saying, 'No good deed ever goes unpaid', or something along the same length. In my case, however, when I discovered this odd guy kidnapping people at a Comic-Con and tried to stop it, said payment ended up with me in a world where everything's pastel-colored, and it's a virtual race of me against the world as I try to find all of the Great Kanohi scattered around the country. Oh, yeah, and for some reason, I'm now techno-organic, and I have to work with technicolor ponies to find Kanohi all around the world that grant me new forms of Toa.

...Whatever happened to 'normal'?!?!
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Crossover with Bionicle.
This fic is a Displaced fic.
Rating, main characters, and cover image subject to change.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 123 )
Comment posted by Runic_Soul deleted Mar 27th, 2015

Like your story. Hope the next chapter comes soon.:pinkiehappy:

Ok, i love the idea, and the way you portray the merchant, BUT you may have mistaken something with the merchant, and I'm willing to answer what, if you allow me to of course.

5790749 Just because he is a bionicle doesn't mean he is terridax!
DAS RACIST FOOL!

5791369 Well, I don't like Bionicle, or half the Games and/or Shows that most Displaced com from. Fuck, man, I don't know the difference.

5791540 Welp, I'm right there with ya man! half the shit i see doesn't even make a lick of sense. Yet the most evil mothertrucker is a fucking Bionicle, who would have guessed right?

5791551 I KNOW!!! A fucking LEGO character, with power rivaling an Opped Dullahan and Auric Fulcrum... Damn, what has the Multiverse come to?

5791561 Infinite possibilities, that's why its a multiverse! And an entire motherfucking war dedicated to the both of them! It's just so insane!

5791567 Still, the guy was made of PLASTIC, of all things.

5791588 Well, if you are talking about the real makuta, he is made of metal. The legos are plastic, because, metal too expensive you kno?

5791597 Honestly don't give a fuck. To busy listening to Linkin Park to give one.

5791622 Hehe, while I'm sitting here, procrastinating my story XD

OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING. THIS IS THE BIONICLE STORY I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR A LONG TIME THIS IS PERFECT!!! :flutterrage:

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Different character. It makes me happy that there are still people who keep the BIONICLE spirit alive.
Good show, author. I expect great things from this.

5793105 Indeed my friend.

5792851 Already told him that, so don't worry good sir!

5793126 Why is it that the worst writers have the best ideas, and the best writers have the most mediocre ideas?

5793292 I'm not sure I can relate to that too much, care to explain with a couple of examples?

5793303 I have great ideas. I'm just a shitty ass writer.

5793327 Hehe, I don't think you are a shitty writer. Besides, with the right tools, and guidance and even help from the right people one can become so much more!
I mean LOOK AT ME, i got 2 stories, and my Displaced fic has like 40+ likes with only 4 dislikes. You only need to work hard and put effort and heart into your stuff!

5793377 ...BWAH HA HA HA!!! Oh, God, I haven't laughed that hard in a while! Thanks! Oh, but in all seriousness, I am a bad writer.

5793454 No, you aren't. I've read some of your work, and I've actually found some of them to be quite enjoyable and a good read. Trust me when I say that I've seen a lot of worse fanfics, FIM or other, than any of yours.

(P.S.: The Main Makuta's name is not Terridax, but Teridax.)

5793454 Are you SURE? Because I think this little story has something DIFFERENT to say my friend. If you can make something as good as that, I seriously doubt you are a shitty writer, shitty writers wouldn't get any likes at all, and even if they did, they would be nothing compared to the hate they get.

5793476 Why do people say I'm a good writer? Fuck, I can't even write a hundred word short-story without getting an F. Does that stop me from writing? No. Do I know I'm bad at it? Yeah.

...Wait, you've read my stories?

5793499 Dude, don't let grades decide how well you do at something. Look at Albert Einstein: He had trouble in school, but he ended up becoming a prodigy in physics!

EDIT: And yes, I've read your stories. I personally found Bubbles, Bullets, and Bones to be my favorite.

5793499 5793504 Indeed, grades mean JACK SHIT. An Einstein is only A example of MANY. Dude, understand this, you will ALWAYS be good in the eyes of at least someone, you have me and Runic and 40+ people who agree.

5793377 5793504
Yes, and he did so poorly due to having mental problems. He could not tie his shoes, or turn his boat around in water. I do poorly because I cannot write well. I can spin a weave, yes, but when it comes to continuity and making sense with words, that is something I cannot do.

I can hold conversations with inanimate objects. I can lie to anyone, and weave together more than twenty different lies at once and make sure that they don't contradict. But, I cannot write a story. September was a fluke, nothing more. BBB was not my idea originally. The idea originated from Ponyville Paintball, and am writing BBB with his permission. None of it is my work. September was a collaboration with a real-life friend. I didn't do anything. Yes, September is my pride and joy, but is it original? What content is truly original? Typical, 'Villain Amnesia' cliche. The Warrior Chronicles and PaH are absolute failures. Why? The content is original. I cannot base it off of anything, so therefore, my mind cannot make it make sense in words. Do I know where I want to go with them? Yeah, I do. In PaH, the Metarex abduct sentient beings and turn them into machines. In the Warrior Chronicles, they basically do what they do in the show, but aided by ponehs. Yeah, I know what I WANT, but that does not change the fact I can't. Of course, this could be the Placebo Effect from bad early writing grades, but, that is unlikely.

5793546 ...Anyone else want to call 'bullcrap' on these excuses?

Dude.

Seriously.

Stop putting yourself down.

5793561 He won't listen, Believe me when i tell you this

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...Meh. I mean, I'd be happy to collab, as that would make somebody wrong, whether me or you, and I honestly don't care which. If you're right, then, hey, I have a career. If you're wrong, then nothing changes. Whaddya say? I have a few ideas in mind...

5793546 Hehehehehe, well then, we got a fast liar. You cannot even comprehend how much I understand your situation. First off, if you can weave a shitload of lies without them conflicting with one another, and manage to convince them to the public it shouldn't be too hard to make a story up, for it falls within the same category, making things up and making people listen to you. But again, you need the lie to base of something that its true to make it believable, any good liar knows that, so if you wish to make a good story, you NEED it to have a base, a strong base, for if you need to justify a lie, you do it with something believable, and then the lie is sold like hot bread.

And stop with the grades, they themselves are BULLSHIT, they don't dictate your future, you only need them to pass the school, then college, and then the mastery. NOTHING MORE, they are worthless in the real world, in the real practice of how to do things the way they should, they mean NOTHING.

Oh, and another thing, NOTHING CAN EVER BE TRULY ORIGINAL, we all need an inspiration to come from somewhere or something. For crying out loud WE ARE IN FIMFICTION, a place where EVERYTHING you write must have something to do with MLP.

5793599 Fair enough. I got plenty. What about you, Runic?

5793621 I'm up for it. Could you maybe send a few of your ideas over via PM, so that I could at least get a synopsis as to what I could provide the collab with?

Title = The code we all live by.
Yes, we all live by the code to not trust somebody that a beam we saw petrifying someone, that said beam can cure an uncurable disease.

I am liking this already :) Epic story!!!!!

5791339 I actually agree with him a bit here. From every other one, the item instantly warps them, doesn't just knock them out. The items are enchanted. Heck, some people feel blessed for the new lives, while others don't. I don't really see the Merchant as evil, per se. More like Chaotic Neutral.

Good story, please update soon.

FRIGGIN BOHROK! I'm calling it now, that's a bohrok! Cool story by the way, I'm enjoying it so far!

Love it and please update

Since Vezon can travel between dimensions, why not bring him into all this?
Also, Mata Nui is not a Great Being, he was created by them for the purpose of restoring Spherus Magna, but is not one himself.

Clean it all, it must be cleaned. All obstacles will be removed.

I like the inclusion of the Aqua blaster Blade that mean you are a hardcore fan!

5855796 because the great being who Vezon freed truned off the olmaks powers

Also fun fact: masks are designed to work with Bionicle which is why Agori or Glatorain can't use them Greg said Masks are comparable to batteries, they can only work on machines

5864786 Vezon can still join in because (A. He went to a lot of other dimensions before the Great Being incident, and who's to say that Equestria wasn't one of them?) and (B. Since when does logic mean anything to Vezon? He's like the Bionicle version of Pinkie Pie, except more violent!)

Oh shit. The Bohrok are coming. Actually, the Bohrok aren't that bad. They actually serve some purpose How did they get here? If the Bohrok have been awakened, there must have been at least a small population of Av-Matoran somewhere in Equestria- or were they already Bohrok when they arrived here? What does Equestria have to do with getting rid of Mata Nui's rather insular :trollestia: acne problems?

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Actually, the story takes place post-canon, meaning that yes, Vezon doesn't have any wormhole powers after freeing the Great Being who was cursed by the Ignika.

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