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Theyellowninja13


A gamer who likes to write stories. My mind is like a mouse who... Whoa! That would be an interesting idea for a story!

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After meeting a strange merchant in a convention, I thought my life couldn't get any weirder.

Now I have my favorite video game character's powers and abilities. I have a full powered Varia Suit with all the upgrades from Metroid games without the other appearances. I have combat knowledge I never had before. I even have a talking hunter-class gunship to live in.

Well, I guess I should protect others, not like Equestria needs bounty hunters right?

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Comments ( 323 )

Nice, tho I'll like to think his suit look a bit like this without the Gardevoir pointed chest...

Also: Varia Suit & Fully Powered Suit

5691302 While I forgot about the Fully Powered Suit, his suit actually looks remarkably like the regular Varia Suit. He doesn't know what all he has yet, because it's almost like he got a new phone and is changing to the settings to fit him.

Actually, I just want him to have all the powers from the other games, with the original look. Not the weird PED suit or anything like that.

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Nice, also just found this a min ago Dual Cannons for those "Oh,shit... O_O" moments :rainbowlaugh:
Would be cool if he found away to dual wield even if his aim would suck as a side effect lol

5691406 Oh man, that would be hilarious to use, maybe Sam gets affected by poison joke? Starts doubling up on samus's most powerful attacks.

i like were this is going ^_^

Aw, man! You beat me to it! Now I'm gonna have to pick another hero... after I finish Time Vigilante.

MOOORE!!!
I mean, if its not too much trouble....

A grand idea and there is a distressing shortage of (active) Metroid stuff crossing over with MLP. That said your inexperience does show, and I urge you to read some stories you particularly enjoy and try to take notes on their methods of storytelling. It might help you refine your own.

A good start thus far.

5694038 Yeah, I'm not that good with writing yet. But I know I'm much better than I was when I was much younger where my entire plot of a story I would write would be based off of Nintendo games. But actually, I started reading MLP fanfics before I watched the show.

OH GOD LYRAS GOING TO RAPE SAM O_O

i'm really liking where this is going,
+1 interested person :moustache:
keep it up!

This is ... no words. I like it. Looking forward for more.

Oh boy. This is only going to be scary crazy. Keep it coming please.

HA!!! fatal amounts of love!!!!!:pinkiecrazy:

Awe, short chapter... Hope it wasn't just for the cliff hanger.

CILFF HANGAR AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maybe the elements can reverse it? Long shot idea I knot but it's all I got.

I did a quick scan of the cupcake, and while I was doing this, Celestia was eyeing my visor, looking at the words that come across.

This got me to thinking that maybe their speaking and written language isn't same just the suit translating them for him and vice versa...?
This way she could see but not understand what's on his visor?
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After I bought it, a few minutes later I passed out, and woke up in Twilight Sparkle’s library,

But it was at this time I realized she lived in a library, inside a tree.

...I feel one of these need to be edited a lil but not sure how o_O
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Would be cool if the elements made it pure/safe so he could still use it,but it just wouldn't have any corrupting effect on him or other?

I can't wait to read the next part. This story sounds like it will be intriguing. :pinkiehappy::moustache:

Oh, this seems to be going in the COOL direction.

I clenched my left fist, not able to do so with my right one, lest I fire some of my attacks.

I'm pretty sure she could retract her arm cannon like she/he does his helmet.
Maybe he didn't think to do so?

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Well,I remember them showing her retract it in a trailer/commercial way back tho can seem to find it...
Anyway on their wiki site they show some old artwork they had made:
vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/metroid/images/5/5a/Samus_artwork_22.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20100516154008
I would like to think once it retracts it looks the same as the left...

5710474 Yes, I know that. But in the story, since Sam is a displaced, he essentially became Samus. The history, the skills, the enemies. The merchant just created a past for him in that universe.

that good to know thanks for explaneing that

5710514 You're welcome. Sorry if I didn't explain it that much in the story.

keep it up! this is an amazing story so far and i can't wait to see where it goes next!:rainbowkiss:
it would be cool if he could retract his arm cannon like granku mentioned, that way maybe he would seem less menacing to the others? not that it would make much of a difference seeing as he just almost simultaneously kicked both luna and celestia's ass in battle.

i hope to see even longer chapters ^_^ also i love the ending there :P

Dude, put this in the displaced group

5725594 Join the displaced group then add your story

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Congrats and welcome to the continuity!~

Celestia and luna are OoC, as they are smart enough to not attack a creature based on their looks, as if they if that the pony race would have gone extinct by the other carnivore and omnivore races fighting them.

5727291 Well, I'm trying to make it sound like Twilight sent a letter that a creature that looks like it's prepared for war just appeared in Twilight's house. I might attack something like that too.

Luna Ooc, guards are as incompetent as ever, nobles, idiots as ever.

“How dare thee alien! Attacking thine subjects with thee aircraft!”

And then later it's just sitting there, like it WASN'T ON IN THE FIRST PLACE as I know of no reason as to why it would just stop and land AFTER attacking ponies, also how did they know it was his?

5730449 Sam and the ship have the same color scheme.

....Luna deserves a bitchslap

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