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The King of Hearts


Plain and simple Brony. (Loves Ding Dongs. (The chocolate kind(Not the weiner kind (Unless I'm in a good mood.))))

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[General Description At the Bottom]

Omnipotence was truly… Beautiful. But the 'holier-than-thou,' attitude sorta ruined it for him.

“Tell me,” She asked, her tone nothing but condescending, as she leaned toward the face of the entrapped pony in front of her, “You think yourself important?”

“Important?” Alex asked, scratching his chin as best he could inside the levitation spell that held him in place, “Maybe?”

“Truly an impressive answer,” She scoffed, an ugly scowl plastered across her face, “You assume, that slightly altering the chain of events in a universe, could ever make you worth something? Pathetic.”

“That hurts!” Alex half-grinned, feigning shock to her, “Between the time travel, the split personality, and the big wedding, I think I’ve made some sort of impact.”

“You couldn’t be more wrong,” She laughed, squinting lightly at him for just a moment, “Dust in the wind, was it?”

“Great song, but inappropriate use, if you ask me,” Alex smiled, unsure if her prodding through the events in his head was something he should praise her for, “But, if you’re so sure that I lack importance, you need to start from the beginning. Not when you showed up last week. Not when Scootaloo and her friends saved Equestria. Not when King Sombra was turned to dust in front of his old subjects... Not even when Discord was freed from his stone imprisonment, and tried to take over Equestria again. The very beginning. Nightmare Moon, and the return of Princess Luna.”

She gave him a sick smile, entertaining the idea. Perhaps it would be interesting to see things from such a... puny perspective. To see the series of events unfold. Of course, it could also be a waste of her time…

“Fine.” She said, slowly placing him on the ground, and resting her horn against his, “Let’s start from the beginning.”

“Get ready sweet heart,” Alex said, licking his lips and winking at her, as she closed her eyes and focused deeply, “It’s one heck of a trip.”

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Basically, a guy goes to Equestria to episode 1 of the series, and he changes the whole playout of the series, adding a bunch of side stories and different paths for some characters to take.

And, he's an alicorn OC.

Yeah yeah, I get it.

Off you run and cry about it. I've heard about it twelve million times. Literally. Not Hyperbolically.

If you insist on calling him a Gary Stu, and a self-insert, I'll assume you're flirting with me, and calling me perfect, since a Gary Stu tends to have no flaws .

So unless you plan on taking me out, and maybe getting some wine in me, don't go calling me perfect.

Thanks!

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Comments ( 4856 )

To some 12k is a good size, i love chapters that are between 10k and 30k
dont realy mind short chapters though

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Really? Well, I'll try to keep that in mind for the future. I also find it easier to write in stages, allowing me to upload a bit at a time. Still though, thanks. The later chapters will definitely start to get to that size.

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Like, season 1 is the series.

There will be parties.

And, long.

Am I seriously the first reviewer for this magnificent story! Oh well, can't wait for the next chap!

Interesting. I wonder how this shall turn out. You DID say you were changing the story because of alex's presence.

That doesn't seem much like a plot change, but seriously, will RD ever be cool w/ Alex?
Edit: HOLY $#¡% IM FIRST?!?!?!?!?

Nice twist on the ticket master, loved the ending

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i have to snowball these changes. they start small, and end up being huge in the end. give it some time.
And dont worry about Rainbow. :rainbowkiss:

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I'm glad you like it. always nice to hear.

lol Alex nothing wrong with manly man stuff cant wait for the next chapter

OH COME ON never say whats the worst that could happen! :facehoof: cant wait for the next chapter

lawl dat tree its a troll :trollestia: cant wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile:

.... The mysterious stalion was The Doctor? ........ Frankly, I should be more supprised.

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I Use the space to separate the individual words within Nightmare, that's all. It's just my personal preference.

And I'm not out to surprise anyone. It's just part of the plot.

But.... but..... no drunk Applejack in the future?

............ I must fix this. - gets out a wreaking ball -

Udder Chaos.... isnt that Discord's favorite chocolate milk producer or something?

Yay Spots and Colors lawl cant wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile:

And then they made out.

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Slow down there tiger. Give it time.

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beautiful! thank you for pointing that out. watching and copying directly from the episode itself can lead me to missing those things.

Alex brings Discord to rule? Damn, now that's a plot twist.
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I'm glad you're enjoying it. (At least I hope you are)
I hope to see your comments in later chapters.

HOLY FLYING SHIT!!!
I THOUGHT IT WAS CUPCAKES!!!!!!

MUST. READ. AGIAN. BECAUSE AWESOME.:pinkiecrazy:

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Happy to hear it. I'm glad you like it.

Ooooo do I sense a possible romance perchance? Perhaps one of the tags should've been "Romance" :twilightsmile:

Then they get drunk at a party and THEN sleep together

haahhah Rainbow has hots for Alex :rainbowlaugh:

I also support long chapters. One Harry Potter fic that I read was a single chapter, 100,000+ words long. It was an awesome afternoon.

Alex should definitely tell Spike that he might get to dance with Rarity

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I hope you're liking it so far!

The Long chapter was originally broken up in individual ones, but i decided to merge them. Too many people had just read chapter 1 then never come back to it. So, i decided to have more of the story inside of Chapter 1, so people would see the WHOLE beginning, and hopefully like it enough to come back.

By the way, You a fan of Spike x Rarity?

Way to go Spikemeister! :moustache:

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Actually, I'm pretty nuetral about SpikeXRarity (though I am writing a RainbowSpike fic write now). I just thought it would be interesting, but I hadn't realized that you gave Alex no pre-knowledge of the show.

Twilight Sparkled like a boss.:moustache::facehoof:

Seriously, that was awesome. It's great to see writers give Twilight her due, though I tend to go with knowledge and diversity over power for most of her magic.

manly Spike gots a women now :rainbowkiss:

I was hoping for a guitar battle... :*(
Oh well. Still awesome. Also, i wanna hear spikes story. NOW

new chapter yay cant wait for the next

Ursa Mejor es Pissed. (spanish FTW)

A Dalex shippage? Not what I expected, but ok. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Woah... Trixie actually helping out? Now that's a surprise :trixieshiftright:

Awesome chapter, no glaring errors and whatnot.
More Woona please! :fluttershysad:

I love this so far. Butterfly effect in motion. This story has had my thumb since I saw the 16 thousand word prologue but it now has my track.
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cant wait for the next chapter this one was good

Great. Snips and Snails found an actual Ursa Major this time.
This will end well :pinkiecrazy:

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Haha, Woona? She'll be in the story more as the central plot starts to develop. I promise.

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