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This story is a sequel to The Arrival of Ford Mustang


It's been over a year since the Arrival of Ford Mustang, a former human being from Earth, now a full-fledged Pegasus in Ponyville, and things have been going really well with him and Rainbow Dash ever since they became a couple nearly a year ago. With their one-year anniversary coming up, Ford decides it's time to pop the question and ask Rainbow for her hoof in marriage. However, an unknown force of darkness rises from the shadowy depths of the earth and achieves his ultimate plan that can not only seal the fate of Equestria, but for the rest of the world as well.

Now, without the aid of the Princesses and the Elements of Harmony, it's up to Ford Mustang and his elderly dragon friend, Hindel, to set things right and stop this monstrous tyrant once and for all. But is Ford up to the daunting task at hand? What kind of allies will he run into along the way? And what is Hindel's connection with the vengeful pony from long ago? Stay tuned for the continuing adventures of Ford Mustang!

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Comments ( 1345 )

First comment, first like, first favorite. :pinkiehappy:
You may continue:duck:

This is gonna be awesome!!! :rainbowkiss: and wait did Hindel gave some sort of a super powers to ford?.... :rainbowderp:

Not bad, I might just stick around for more chapters.

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"However, an unknown force of darkness rises from the shadowy depths of the earth and achieves his ultimate plan that can not only seal the fate of Equestria, but for the rest of the world as well."

So bland it would make Blandy McBlanderton go "dammmnnnn, that's bland." Rewrite immediately my good sir, make it interesting.

"And what is Hindel's connection with vengeful pony from long ago?"
If you've written a story over 100,000 words long then basic errors like this should be well behind you. Aim higher!

Huurraayy! first chapter of sequel and I'm already hooked.

yeah, I'm wondering what force is strong enough that it can block both THE PRINCESSES AND the ELEMENTS OF HARMONY. And yet a dragon and a normal pegasus are the only ones who can stop it?

Yeah I'm a nerd, but I like a good story. It better be good.

Huh. I thought it was Mord Fustang, not an OC named after a car.

I must say sir... this is an excellent chapter once more... so glad you decided to continue this tale

this comment is so moustache-y that it almost hurts!

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and that is the maximum amount of facial hair I can give for the glorious return of Ford Mustang

I like the cover art the enemy looks fucking OP!!!!

3465113 Sorry, could you please inform me what OP stands for? :twilightblush:

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How dare you. I'm not 'that' evil. ^^
Also, 8 dislikes for trying to help out? :rainbowhuh:

How did you make that Awesome OP cover art?!

I'll be honest, I thought this was a joke-fic at first. The cover art and description seemed to point to that. But it actually seems to be somewhat well written, so don't feel bad.

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Actually, I posted the link because it seemed relavant to 'the great darkness' in the description. Wasn't a well thought out connection I guess. Honestly, I do agree with you. It is a cliche description, and one that I think needs some work, just like my comment. :twilightsmile:

Sorry for the confusion. Didn't mean for it to come out that way. :fluttershyouch:

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Heh, I had an inkling it was probably something to do with that. No worries here!

I read the whole first story just so I would be able to follow along with this one.:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

First thing that passed my mind when i saw the picture was Ford saying falco punch.

YEAAAAA UPDATE MUTHAFACKAH!

Ahem...


:yay:

Finally

I wish 4 an update my good friend

Also congrats on making it into the featured box :twilightsmile:

finally a sequel to one of my favorite stories of all time.....:pinkiegasp::raritystarry:

thank you for this!!!:twilightblush:

3466815 :twilightsmile: Thanks! I'm not only surprised on my second story being Featured. But I'm a also surprised on how my previous story is receiving some of the attention as well. Sure, there are people who would like to make car jokes and those who don't have a "particular interest" in HiE stories. But I'm okay with that. I'm happy for what I write and knowing for a fact that I have fun when it comes to writing it. And I'm grateful for the welcoming response I've been receiving for the premiere of my latest story.

P.S. In case you've missed that, you should read my latest blog on any "updates" to this story. :raritywink:

3466137>>3466128 Basically, I drew it and colored it on my computer. Just like the previous cover for my last story.

Comment posted by Thrawn1800 deleted Nov 10th, 2013

I would read this story. But then I found this ''OCxOne of the mane'' six cliche. bubblews.com/assets/images/news/725860010_1375149565.png

The villain that I see in the picture, are they already developed? Do you have them ENTIRELY planned out? If not I could donate some of my ideas to help a bit. I have a few cool ones in mind right now.

TGM

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Y'know, if there's one thing I dislike it's people automatically down-voting a story without even bothering to read it.

I believe in the phrase 'Never judge a book by its cover' here, no matter how overused the concept if it's done by a good author it can be done well. Which is why I'm planning to read the previous story and this story before saying anything about it.

Read this first chapter the second I saw it through my feed. No I wasn't meant to be writing an essay to be finished by tomorrow. But seriously though. I'm a big fan of the original and don't let what people say about it being cliche get to you. If anything I like the cliche. You've somehow pulled it off in a way that keeps me interested. I expect great things with this and any future stories of yours. :pinkiehappy:

...I'm only going to read this because you selected the genius name of Ford Mustang.

Well played. :trixieshiftright:

dripping-wet marefriend

In more ways than one, amirite?

my mind is telling me "yes this is good continue reading:trixieshiftright:" and i respond with "YES SIR"

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