Previously called 'Broken Knife'.
Marcus. A closet brony who just came out of his shell goes to Brony-con with an MLP hoodie he made based off Pinkamena. He arrived, and bought a knife with Pinkie's Cutie Mark on the hilt. Now, he has to help the mane six fight their most deadly threat. Sunny Town. And fight insanity caused by images of him doing... Cupcakes... You get me. And take care of Apple Bloom, while sorting out his feeling towards a certain cyan Pegasus.
He also has to deal with weird 'Displaced' as they call it... Swell...
"A broken mare in the right place, can make all the difference..."
Chapters (5)
A few typos here and there, looking forward for the next chapter! Let the river of blood flow through your eyes as you weep for the memories that fades with your killing...
You probably should get a proofreader, a few too many errors for my likes.
Now I'm hooked
5976801 I'm glad you are! I've put more thought into this story then my others. I usually just wing it.
Stupid Cupcakes references! I need you for the story!
good start I can't wait for the next chapter
As cas mentioned, there are typos. However, It's a good concept. Good luck.
Super story, like to read more from it
more is needed
Sunny Town? As in bucking Story of the Blanks Sunny Town? Well now someone call in Gilgamesh to help if so. It's about time someone tried to doing something about that place. this sounds like an interesting story then.
Also I laugh at that part about Twilight sending Marcus back to the Mirror Pool. Even if she wanted to it wouldn't work as Marcus didn't come from the Mirror Pool and the spell only works on things that do come from it originally.
5977217 Yes, and its coming up!
No, there is a chance. Remember the threat Pinkie was in? Twilight said if she used it on the real Pinkie, she'd be sent to the Mirror pool. And Marcus did come from the mirror pool. He/she came out of it after he/she got the knife.
He is in trouble.
Great story!!
Awesome start!~
5977323 Well should be interesting then. I wonder if Applebloom will end up there like the original story had to start things up? It would also make sense if the curse they all referred to repeatedly from what I hear is actually the Cutie Pox which may have happened at a time where a cure was nonexistent causing the curse to happen. If so then good the Mane 6 have a way to fix things in Sunny Town and use logic to break the curse.
Really? I figured the spell Twilight used would only work on clones that were created by the Mirror Pool when one jumps in and back. Seeing how Marcus wasn't from the Mirror Pool originally but another world and sent through it to Equestria, different chain of event. Rather than a clone thing we have a inter-dimensional portal thing happening.
Most likely the spell would be as ineffective on Marcus due to that loophole of logic as say firing the elements of Harmony at the Princesses or an innocent and expecting something bad to happen like stone or banishment when nothing happens at all due to that's not exactly how the elements work, balancewise and all. It just seems like a flaw in Twilight's logic or something you know? Plus this is coming from lil miss "I'll be banished to magic kindergarten by the most understanding and benevolent princess who wouldn't do that at all or banished in a cage to the place I'm banished to" here. Not exactly a good track record of thinking right under stress as amusing as it is to see her have a humorous breakdown and cause chaos in the process.
This is so reminding me of Blood Cleaver. (She is based of Pinkamena Diane Pie.) Here is a link for those of you who wonder.
5977814 I'm not saying anything about that.
Watch the episode Too Many Pinkie Pie's again.
5977879 Oh, sorry if I did something. I've never even read that.
5978305 No, It's fine. If anything I think a crossover would be something I'm interested in.
5978307 Cool! I'd love to!
5978384 Great, just not right now? You have some more chapters to release before that, and I'm currently working on a crossover at this time... three to be exact... so yeah, no more crossover for me as of now.
5978428 Yeah. I need to introduce her.(I'm officially calling Mark her.)
Bro you just made my day with this! I cant wait for next chapter :D
P.S. Sunny town.... ma god! call kat or gilgamesh! burn that damn place down!!!
Let me start by saying, YES! I never knew I needed a displaced story like this. Second I would like to say that you should bag a editor. There was grammar errors in there that had me re-read a couple lines. Aside from that I would love to crossover with you sometime. After you get some more chapters in, and after I get more in myself.
I can't wait for the next chapter in this displaced story.
5979130 Thank you! I have no idea how to get an editor, but I'm planning on going through it and fixing it.
I'd love to crossover.
5979338 Awesomesauce, I'll PM you when I'm ready for it.
Gon would be happy to get another visit from one of his own kind.
5978952 I keep hearing summer town... Have I missed something? I feel like you're all referring to "Our Town" but I'm unsure...
5979803
Don't really know, I first saw it on this story, next I search for it and... it isn't pretty xD I believe everything started from a story called 'Story of the blanks', look there even is a game from it!
There are images too... those are the ones that creep me out!
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5980299 I'll be avoiding that, thank you very much. I'll much rather keep my own nightmare fuel...
Oh, I am looking forward to this.
Interesting concept, I eagerly await to see more of this story chapters stuffs.
Not bad for the start of a story, there were a few grammatical errors and a few oddly structured sentences but other than that it's an interesting concept. I'm looking forward to more.
What exactly is this 'Sunny Town' everyone is referring to?
You did a good job I can't wait to see the next chapter can you do more please
Can you do more you do good work
What's gonna happen next is the real question...
Ooo, I really like the idea! I will look forward to more.
Fuck Sunny Town, I ain't gonna go anywhere near that place! I played Fallout 3 and I watched Silent Hill! In Fallout 3 I found a nice town... And it turned out they were all Cannibls! So again... Fuck that shit I ain't gonna go anywhere near that shit!... It's still a great chapter though! Keep on keeping on!
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I still don't know what the Fuck Sunny Town is, someone tell me!! Hey, doesn't the father have the special weapon Jack, a special ripper?
6005071 Nah... That's in Deathclaw Sanctuary
have fun getting it! Also Vengeance the Gauntling laser is in the deepest part of the place... Also Sunny Town is filled with Ponys who have no cutie marks because I think they thought they were bad and when the first filly got hers they killed her and the were cursed... Also there all zombies 
reminds me of a Silent Hill.
6005099
I've read about Sunny Town in a crossover with Team Fortress 2. Do you know the original source to this Sunny Town? A piece of fiction or maybe a mini story? Really, the Deathclaw Sanctuary?! You know what? Fuck it. Gonna collect em' all like Pokemon. Took me Several in-game weeks, but I've enough mini-nukes for me MIRV launcher. Nothing says kill, like - overkill~
Or you can just use the toy guns to cripple and poison em. That little pee-shooter is hella effective against fleshies.
6005186 It's actually from a flash game called "Story of the blanks". Which is really quite terrifying, but around 15 to 20 minutes long. Still fun though.
You did a good job I can't wait to see the next chapter
6005186 Eh, I got bored at one point and went back there and fist fought three Deathclaws... I won if you didn't know, but it was quite fun
also it was a game, Sunny Town, I saw it ages ago and still remember what had happened... That shit is messed the FUCK up!
6005682 And Fourth is going to fight that!
6005687 Then I pray to the Emperor she survives the experience... I know I did... Yet I kinda wanna throw a Spartan or a Space Marine into that town, and let 'em fuck shit up.
6005682
Found the game. Its in newgrounds. And really, a fist fight? With all of the Deathclaw? Conrates, I wouldn't have been able to do it in very hard mode. Plus they hit like a truck. SO yea, I'll stick to my explosives while you stick to fisticuffs.
6005717 Fallout 3 Deathclaws are easier then New Vegas Deathclaws, and besides... I did have the best armor from that one DLC.
O_O.....
....s-s-s-s-SUNNYTOWN!!!!!
RUNAWAY!!!!!!!
6005882 Worst is she doesn't have anything to defend herself or Apple Bloom.
6005887
...jack help them!!
jack:Umm...you don't even have the first chapter done yet..
'YET'!!