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I write pony words that people seem to like. I also review fics and draw purty pictures, apperently. I'm an older fan of MLP, so expect a lot of 80's references.

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Princess Luna, alicorn of the night and all things therein, sends happy dreams to her saviors on the anniversary of her return from the darkness of madness. One of these dreams belongs to Twilight Sparkle and once again Luna sends her visions of the pony she loves most, Princess Celestia.

Now if only they would come out and say something to each other about it. All the sexual tension in the castle is driving Luna nuts!

It looks like she's going to have to take things into her own hands.

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Comments ( 86 )

Totally AWESOME!

This looks unfy ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Your description made me think "When a problem comes along/You must ship it/Before the cream sets out too long/You must ship it"

Twilight certainly does like her fat bottom girls, doesn’t she?

Don't we all? :trixieshiftright:

Fuzz, you are one productive little furvert.

Nicely done! We can never have too much adorable Twilestia, and for once I didn't even mind the Anthro tag. Good show!

Also I had to look up "Shidduch". Knowing is half the battle!

Nope! Minds made up!

Mind's

bit there was also honest curiosity there too.

but

Fluna?

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Or this:

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All the unfs, Pearpy. ALL the unfs.


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i.imgur.com/LdGL1w1.gif

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I :heart: fat bottom girls. They DO make my rockin' word go 'round.


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you are one productive little furvert

I try. When I have an idea, sometimes I just got to write it out. Also, nice catch! Fixed now.


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Just a wee bit...:yay:

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Bottom slot on the non-Mature Featured Box. Fuzz strikes again! Kudos to you.

Also added to a few groups. Not the full slate, just a few major ones.

I would LOVE to see a LunaShy fic. I think those two are made for one another.

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Thank you. I'll toss it in a few more, see if I can't climb the mature box too.

That was both adorable and sweet. And I loved the bit at the end with Fluttershy.
Am I to take it this isn't the first time Fluttershy's 'thanked' Luna for the bunnies?

*looks up Shidduch*

...I see what you did there. :raritywink:

*looks up meaning of the word "shidduch"*

So Luna, Celestia and Twilight are orthodox jews? :rainbowhuh:

*shrug*

In reference to the title of the fic...

Twilight certainly does like her fat bottom girls, doesn’t she?

Fat bottom girls, you make the rockin' world go round! I love Queen. :pinkiehappy:

Nice story. I miss read the title as Skidduch and half expected to see some Kung Fu action. What I got was more than satisfying. (Though I guess Luna could have used that word when casting the final elements of the dream spell.)

Is Bri-sta the author of DAT AWESOME PIC? :heart:

I didn't really like this story that much for a variety of reasons, but two really stuck out at me:

The first was that Luna felt really out of character - far too pushy and sexually aggressive. It isn't that I couldn't see her trying to get her sister and Twilight together if they did indeed have a mutual crush, but...

Secondly, I wasn't really super impressed with the attempts at trying to sex it up, and Celestia peeping on Twilight in the shower really is creepy and she should feel bad about it.

While less important, I'm not really sure why this was made anthro, because, quite frankly, I'm not really sure what relevance it really had to the story you were telling.

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I'm sorry you didn't like it.

1) This is a valid point. The premise for the contest is 'Luna Ships', and I feel the way she is normally portrayed and the way I usually write her wouldn't be very conducive to that unless she was pushy. The sexually aggressive part...eh, that might just have been myself faffing about, but my intent was she was ready to push her sister and Twilight to an extreme to get them to overcome their shared reserved nature.

2) It is creepy and she does feel bad about it. Celestia's tension stems from that one moment where she over stepped her bounds and was equal parts disturbed by her actions and aroused by what/who she saw. It's about sex, so sexing it up is a natural part of the story, but I could have done it better. I'll try harder next time.

3) It was written as anthro because my original idea when I was driving across state was anthro in my head. It's as simple as that.

Fuzz, please continue this. There is just far too much potential for MOAR that it just can't be a one-shot.

Do I see. Yiddish? I'm thoroughly supprised. And on the same day with a clopfic whose title is a fiddler on them roof reference.

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Wait...there's a clopfic that references Fiddler on the Roof?

There's too many possibilities to for this! You need to continue it!

A little bit crazy, agressive and spontaneous; flawed, passionate and kinky. The Royal Sisters are ALIVE. Thank you for this perfection.

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Thank you! That's high praise indeed.:twilightblush:

Make no mistake, I will be keeping tabs and if you two aren’t at least hugging within the next hour, I will come back in here and use my powers to turn this humble bedroom into the kinkiest sex dungeon I can imagine.”

All my yes :rainbowlaugh:

In her place, a large clock face appeared with the hands set at midnight and the 1 am replaced with the words ‘Kinky Sex Dungeon Time.’

Double all my yes :rainbowlaugh: :ajsmug:

My one complaint. Is that this story needed to be longer.

TDR

Moonshy ship ? Never considered that one

I've read many Twilestia fics, but this one is really good! Seriously man.:twilightsmile:
And please, PLEASE, let the Lunashy be complete. I was left drooling by how Fluttershy looks.:yay:

4909139 I love whenever people do images, it is so much funnier than writing an actual response:rainbowlaugh:

SHL

Not bad, I like it ^^

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"And then what happened?" Fluttershy propped her head on her palm and smiled at Luna as her other hand traced a slow, winding path over the curves of the alicorn's belly.

"They started making out!" Luna pumped her fist triumphantly in the air above the cloud they both rested on. "It's about time too, the lunch meetings have been getting more and more awkward ever since Twilight's ascension."

Fluttershy ducked her head as she giggled and then laid it softly against Luna's shoulder. "Do you think that happened because they both secretly realized that they could have an actual relationship?"

"Possibly." Luna hummed to herself for a moment before rolling over so she could easy look Fluttershy in her pretty blue eyes. "Mare's in love and lust with each other act oddly sometimes."

Luna let her hand glide over the butterflies on her savior's flank and then down to the base of her tail. Fluttershy snuggled herself in closer until Luna could feel the pegasus' breath on her chest. "It was a cathartic moment for me as much as those two. Now, my concern is the lunch meetings feeling awkward because Tia is sitting in Twilight's lap."

"That would be adorable!" Fluttershy smiled happily and slipped her arms around Luna. "Um...not to change the subject, but...I'm ready for round four. If that's ok with you?"

"Fluttershy, a mare could die happily from your 'thank yous.'"

"Then it's a good thing you're immortal."

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Oh, fuck you! You know what I meant! :twilightangry2: :flutterrage:

Shidduch: A system of matchmaking in which Jewish singles are introduced to one another in Orthodox Jewish communities for the purpose of marriage.

Oh Luna~♥

This community needs more Hebrew pi`el verbal nouns!

4910133 That word is literally the only reason I clicked on this fic.

4908386 It's Hebrew you barbarian!

“An impossible raceway for Rainbow.”

Nothing is impossible... If you believe...

Also, Twilestia! Cool!

4910581 Weird words are great ways to draw people in

That's how I found "Triptych" by Estee

A triptych is a work of art that is divided into three sections, or three carved panels which are hinged together and can be folded shut or displayed open. It is therefore a type of polyptych, the term for all multi-panel works.

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