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Autum Breeze


a home-grown australian who embraced being a member of the fandom 2 days before joining. Willingly delved into the fandom whole-heartedly and has never looked back

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My life's pretty normal.

Wake up and go to work three days a week, then come home and do whatever from Thursday to Sunday.

Never in my life did i think that could change so dramatically, but it did.

One, hot summer day, as i was walking home, i came across something I'd have never expected to find. a character from the My Little Pony Freindship is Magic show, Lyra Heartstrings and she's a filly.

that leaves just one question, What do i do now?







Major Spoiler: No, seriously, this will take away the mystery if you keep going. Just wait and you'll get quite the surprise, I swear it will be worth the wait. Fine, but I warned you. This fic is an unofficial sequel to A Spell For Lyra by Kolwynia with their blessing.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 50 )

This reminds me of My Little Dashie, but I can already tell it might be much more different...:moustache:

4152063 Yes, I know. I just meant the title. However, I have read it over and it is absolutely different from the rest. The author has earned a like and fave from me. :twilightsmile:

D'aww this story is adorable.

I hope James' family accepts Lyra, I can totally see her cuteness earning her a place in the family, even if they only treat her like a pet at least she'll be warm and safe and James would treat her as the intelligent mare she is. Of course... his mom might be ecstatic to have a grand daughter...

I can tell this will be difrent and I hope this continue -tank

42 degrees, boiling? She must be freezing, instead of boiling

Paragraph 4
Should be relaxing, not realizing
paragraph 11
i encourage you to change it to i heard a small noiseco.ing from it
change nasasiery to necessary
In the line "around the lake around" take out he second around
Instead of "what my family was say" put what my family would say
Envelops is spelled envelopes
It should be i put the bread on my plate, not of my plate
Otherthan what is stated i like this story very much and enjoy the fact that this character seems to be in a brighter situation than the one from my little dashie

4259942 its in degrees celsius, or at least i assume so

I love his story. Cant wait for the update

I need update!! Want to know what happens next!!:flutterrage:

I ike the story but i want to ask do it end similar than the one with Rainbow? It would be not bad, but such an ending would be a bad ending for me, no offense but if it end like that i don´t really want to read the whole thing.

Update please!:flutterrage:! This story is too cute!:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:
Misty Berry:moustache::moustache:

i want to know if that maybe shoul end like my little Dashie? i like the story but i don´t want to read a story with a sad ending right now.^^

.... half of me wants to see Lyra become a magical girl, the other half says she's magical enough she doesn't need to. But I can totally see her blasting a criminal or something to save her daddy:scootangel:

I liked this chapter the only thing that has (and might will) is that time gap. I need to fill that becaws the family gest feels kinda feels hollow, and the future chapters that they talk on skype or something. I only say this becaws we have moved to America, England, france, then back to America. And our famaly almost all ways talks to us.

I did not see Japan coming, very inrtresting.

please don't let this end like My Little Dashie did

This just occured to me: Lyra is curious... what kind of parental controls does James have on the Internet to keep her from getting mentally scarred????

I work in Airport security... so I'm laughing my head off at the image all of the MLP plushies I've seen kids carrying might be ponies under a spell. OH man, that would make for some interesting flights.

So I guess this is where Lyra gets her fascination with humans lol:derpyderp2::rainbowderp:

Please end with "daddy in equestria but as a unicorn"

"Well, if you accept the idea of string theory, yeah,” I said, nodding. “I’ve always believed that, for every TV show, every book, every fictional thing that ever has been thought up by mankind, another universe, parallel to our own is created."

Dude....I think the same way. A reality for everyone! yay!

does this story end like the one with rainbow dash? i want to read it, but i don´t like a farewell between the two if there is one, but if he is going to be in Equestira at the end it is ok for me.

4859211 that would be a sad ending. Do you see a sad tag?

4862658 well ok your right, but that don´t stop some other people to do it anyway. Let just say i read a few comments at youtube about the Dash story and some people said it is not really sad in some way.

Then again i really forget sometimes that the answer can be found that easy, i think i had to look the hard way for my answer again:twilightsheepish:

Now i know it better and i can start reading the story this afternoon or sooner.

oh really nice story again, no wonder they get featured that often, i hope they stay together somehow, she in his world (would be something new i think.
Or at least the more or less usually him turn into a Pony or just go to Equestria with her as a Human and her new father. Hope she stays a Child too, that is if they find her befor she is grown up

4791525 i would not like that too, but if i understand him right, the two of them don´t get separate. I don´t like such storys with an sad ending, i only disliked my little Dashie for the ending.

I don´t care for the meanin behind the story, i know that it could be possible like that but even then i don´t think it would be reason enough to separate them forever. At first i wanted to say, why not let Rainbow stay in the Human world, then again she is a Element bearer, but Lyra not. So i think if she want to stay Celestia could let her, or he went with her to Equestria.

PS: But i don´t remember a story where a pony choose to live in the Human world so this would be new i think (and maybe better because of being new), every pony Human story end normaly the way with the Human going to Equestria

I don´t really get why he wanted to go to Japan and i don´t know what to think of it yet, but then again why not.

4795254 I agree lets get away from my little dashy and this time have the dad go to equestra also.

4540954 Just got done reading this first chapter to come down to the comments and see my great friend curiously asking about the story. good old Texus. :twilightsmile:

5440922 sorry i don´t really know how you mean it, but i am happy if i make you happy:twilightsheepish:

I am not sure why i was so amazed of the story, i don´t remember much of it, but yeah he was/is one of my favourite writers, i was just thinking that he started to much storys at once, and stopped reading there for a while.

I dont know how much you have already read from him but i can recommend him, i know that i like much of the storys he is writing, i just don´t wanted to wait fornew chapters, since he suddenly started 5-6 new storys, i am honestlyamazed that this arent more than 25 storys yet, but i don´t mean it in a bad way.

i love Japan alright they really have the best anime that you can't find in America or any other country but Japan that's it

Oh hey, what's this? A story updating after over half a decade?

This is good so far, and I'm curious to see how Lyra will respond to the letter detailing her past. Looking forward to the next chapter.

One minor note that may need rectifying: wasn't James' surname "Walker" in earlier chapters instead of "Williams"? Chapter 4, IIRC.

AB i can say you are doing a grate job telling this story. amazing righting.

Comment posted by i forgor deleted Aug 29th, 2021

“Would you knowingly send a child, in a world different from her own, out onto the streets? She wouldn’t even last a day in our world.”

And the government would take her away and experiment on her.

“Would you knowingly send a child, in a world different from her own, out onto the streets? She wouldn’t even last a day in our world.”

He frowned, thinking. “That’s true. And think about what the government would do if they learned there was an alternate world alongside our own and that one of its inhabitants has come here.”

Exactly

My parents... well, they were harder to deal with and easier to deal with at the same time. My dad told me we’d have to send Lyra away, since we weren’t (he wasn’t) sure if it was safe to have her around.

We cant let the government find her!

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