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Night--Mist


Son of Princess Luna. A Bat Pony Alicorn who's small for his age.

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Velvet Sparkle Finds a little pony in a basket and it's parents are nowhere in sight. It's a pegasus, but there's a lot more to him then anypony knows. Watch what happens as Velvet Sparkle's maternal instincts are resurfaced.

Warning: This story contains cute scenes and babyish things for a few chapters. Do not read if you are faint of heart.

Rated teen to be safe.

Please leave a positive comment and constructive criticism. Thank you.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 19 )

Soo coute hope to read more soon

Aww... What a cute widdle guy...

Such a cute story. can't wait to read more chapters keep up the good work. :)

Oh great Idea! I can't wait for more. :pinkiehappy:

Twilight Velvet, not Velvet Sparkle

6946012 It's never been confirmed by Hasbro in the show.

6948024 but it has confirmed by them in the merchandise

6948827 Sorry, only follow what the show says.

6987834 Bonnie: *Holds you in a levitation spell in front of her face.* You were saying?

I agree this story has a higher cute index than a three way CMC stare. Don't know why no one would point these out. Is it possible that spell check is out to get us ???

To whoever reads this note, pleas listen, [ please ]
and have him raise by a cruel family [ raised ]
and gaze upon the sleeping foal once more. As he cutely yawn [ gazed ] [yawned ]
mortal decedent of the Princess of Night. [descendent ] ????
Or maybe their [ they're ]

him becoming ( a ) really great philosopher [ ? ]
cooped up in the castle fr days [ for ]
the crystal heart that floated at beneath the [not needed ]
hiscrown dropping over his eyes a few times [ his crown ]

Another cute story by the infamous Night-Mist. May he finally finished his storys soon... Or at least update them.... PLEASE :yay:

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