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Marcthelightspark2004


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Somewhere in the multiverse is a special place. A pub in a seedy back alley in almost every city, yet it is all one pub. A pub with the image of a skull and crossbones, with two hands holding some ale.

A place where conquerors, dictators, murders, and psychopaths can go and relax. Destress from a long day of laborous evil deeds, and even heal the wounds from encounters with heroes.

A place, called the villain pub.


If you want a specific villain to appear, PM me the deets.

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I can’t believe I’m saying this but, way to go my friend way to go.

I was wondering when would somebody write a fic to do with the Villain Pub.

This was actually pretty funny.

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You sound surprised....

No matter! Thanks for the comment! Mind spreading the word about it since it's a tad lil known still

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I was a bit surprised.

You captured the humor of the animated shorts, not an easy task.

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It helps that I was binging it as I wrote the chapter.:twilightblush:

One problem. In the 2018 Oscar nomination video Zod hated Thanos for killing Groot.

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Ahh...right. may include that in the future. Also, this is based off Villain Pub. I may add or subtract things. More than just movie villains for one thing

This was actually pretty clever. Work on your formatting, though. Proofread your structure so it looks professional and consistent. Also, using eight periods for a continuation is too much. Use three.

An HISHE: Villians Pub and a MLP/EQG crossover? :pinkiegasp:

SIGN ME UP! :pinkiehappy:

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Ok. I'll...try to do all that. I'm still a bit green.


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Glad you like it! :pinkiehappy:

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I did! I really did! :twilightsmile:

Quick question: when requesting a specific villain to appear, do you mean the villains from the MLP/EQG series or from a different series outside of MLP?

Considering My Little Pony needs to be shows up in a big way for any story to stay on this site, I don't think we need to PM Friendship is Magic's villains to show up.

Never heard of Villain Pub. But it sounds dumb enough to work anyway.

"So, Palps.....how you dealing with that humiliating cinematic return?" Joker asked with a smirk.
"LEGENDS DID IT BETTER!" Palps hissed back.

:eeyup:

"What are these...oscars?" Cozy Glow asked.
"Oh. An earthen award used to show what movies are the best." Palps explained.
"OK. Why do we care about them?" Chrysalis asked.
"I-I don't know honestly....." Palps admitted, putting a finger on his chin.

That sums up the whole 'Oscars' deal pretty well. :trixieshiftright::moustache:

Nice intro. A few grammar mistakes here and there but nothing glaring. Good work.

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You covered all the good ones in this chapter though. I got nothing for the moment. But I love the story anyway.

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No problem.
Out of curiosity, since I found this in the Hazbin Hotel group does this mean you will be bringing Alastor, Angel Dust or someone else in a later chapter?

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Yes. Yes I am. And Lucifer. And Pentious. And Vox. And Charlie and Vaggie. And Nifty gets a side job there.

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Lol, Charlie? That precious cinnamon roll in the villains pub? That's going to be a fun chapter! :trollestia:

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yes. it is. Especially with the numerous other Lucifers......

This is honestly a interesting Idea. It seems that the characters are semi-aware of the 4th wall yet it isn't shattering it completely, and the Dialogue is honestly really good. Iron Cross worthy even. This is definitely going to be a good one.

Good flow, nice writing, not too confusing. Bring some Decepticons and we good.

dbz: Frieza
DBZ: Ginyu Force
Inuyasha: Naraku Character
Final Fantasy: Sephiroth Character
7 Deadly Sins Fullmetal Alchemist
Sly Cooper: Clockwerk

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I feel honored sir! Let's hope I earn the medal!

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Glad we're good then!

Why aren't there any character tags?

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Because characters can change from chapter to chapter with only a few recurring characters

If you want a specific villain to appear, PM me the deets.

Can I give you my Villain O.C. ?

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Uhhh.....sure? I dunno. Let's wait until this story gets off the ground some more with more widely recognized villains.

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K, PM me when you want to hear about my evil-O.C.

Very nice; looking forward to new chapters.

Wonder if the Storm King will be added in?

How about a chapter where the MLP Wendigos are brought in as nonsentient pets for our three mlp villians which could expands the chapter into a discussion about the Villians' pets

I knew this was going to be golden as soon as I read this line:

"Love," Chrysalis demanded.

"Magic!" Tirek insisted.

"Chocolate milk!" Cozy Glow smiled.

Well done! The on-edge, bantery style of the characters feels like it could fit right in with an actual episode.

Do keep in mind, though, that you're converting from a visual medium to a textual one. The beauty, and really the strength, of the Villain Pub is that they can shove as many background characters in there as they please. It didn't get to be too much in this chapter, but it got a little close. In situations where there's more than two or three characters, I've found it's sometimes easier to describe a character's action right before they speak, so the audience is clued in.

That said, you've taken on an ambitious, well-known crossover and done good by the characters, the tone, and the setting! Best of luck going forward!

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Thanks for the feedback! Let's hope I can catch Lightning in a bottle twice

Dragon Ball: Goku Black, Perfect Cell, and Raditz.

Mlp: King Sombra, Storm King, and the Dazzlings.

Power Rangers: Rita, Goldar, and Lord Drakkon.

Comment posted by AnonymousFin deleted February 15th

*Cue instrumental theme song for the sitcom, Cheers.*

Making your way evil today
sure does take a lot
Thinking of ways to distribute hate
takes everything you've got
Wouldn't you like to rule a place
Sometimes you wanna go
where everybody hates your face
and the villains share your rage
You wanna be in the evil seat
Heroes are all the same
You wanna go where everybody hates your face

I LOVE THIS! Seriously it will be awesome to see how this develops and fun too. :) Do all villain requests have to be done in pm, or can we also send some through reviews?

If yes on the latter than I would like to suggest the Young Justice version of Klarion the Witch Boy, and South Parks Eric Cartman. I can't help but picture Cartman and Cozy either hitting it off, or becoming rivals of some kind.

This oddly reminds me of sunsets isekai

This is gonna be GOOD. *chuckles evilly*

Jojo's bizarre adventure: Dio Brando, pillar men, yoshikage Kira, diavolo and Enrico pucci

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