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Ezio iz pirate


Super big Assassins Creed fan as well as a big MLP fan, most of my stories will involve game charcters in one way or another, so if your looking for any of those type of stories follow me :D

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This story takes place in Equestria but starts out in Constantinople where Ezio prepares to take the boat ride to the Maiden Tower lighthouse to collect the four out of six masyaf key's left by the mentor of the Levantine Brotherhood of Assassins, Altair. But halfway to Maiden Tower his means of transportation gets stopped by somebody in a horrid storm and Ezio goes overboard, hitting his head after falling off and knocking him out cold, when he next opens his eyes he will find himself not only no where near the lighthouse or Constantinople but in a whole new world. (this is my first fanfiction but not my first time writing, I ask for your advice and constructive criticism. Thank you and I hope you enjoy)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 62 )

Thank you, sorry when I was setting this up it was like, what 12 in the morning, I was tired lol :twilightsheepish:

Eh, not bad, but if you need a spare hand or hoof I'm around most of the time. Cool also you could use the whole language barrier as a big plot point:scootangel: ROCK AN ROLL:rainbowwild:

thank you very much, im trying :pinkiehappy: also if i need any help you'll be the first I'll ask

A few grammer errors, but so far its good :twilightsmile: not really sure where its gonna go, but hey i'll stick around for it and if you need help, i'll be happy to do so:pinkiehappy:

alright ill check for grammar errors, thanks! also next chapter will be up by tomorrow probably

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12 in the morning, I was tired.

Filthy Casual.

Comment posted by PoniesAndGames deleted Jun 27th, 2014
Comment posted by abdcdweawrbitwaihjtolwtj deleted Apr 30th, 2015

Pacing. Pace yourself, explain the situation, explain what the pony looks like, explain what Ezio is wearing, explain the surroundings. Just slow down in general.

Comment posted by Ezio iz pirate deleted May 30th, 2014

Thank you Cis for the advice, I'll fix errors and add the new chapter tomorrow

WOW over 100 views! thanks to anyone who took some time out of there day to view my story :pinkiehappy:

Interested I am...
Keep reading I must...
:moustache:

You know, you could use the "Nothing is True, Everything is Permitted" Assassin's Creed motto to your advantage in this story

hm, meh, lets see where this goes...

when is the next chapter i cant wait:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

4507537 soon, I'm back and ready to write more chapters so be ready :D

That was good but... Short... Very short...

Comment posted by Ezio iz pirate deleted Jun 15th, 2014
Comment posted by Ezio iz pirate deleted Jun 22nd, 2014

I read through all five chapters today and they are all good.

To answer the question: Edward has to be my most favorite one. Though I love them all respectively.

4605550 Edward was epic! But one thing I didn't like about him was he was way more pirate and way less assassin, but he was good anyhow

This story is great and my favorite assassin is ezio auditore

4608186 thank you ^.^ I'll be writing the next chapter soon.

4693611 yeah I know I'm trying I'm currently Doing band camp, but there will be a next chapter, of that I am sure, just wait and I'll see when I can.

Comment posted by Ezio iz pirate deleted Apr 29th, 2015

This trailer is AWESOME!!!! I don't care if any you guys don't like unity. But can't we just agree this trailer is amazing!

4780890 I just want people to know how awesome unity might be!:rainbowkiss:
( If it isn't, ubisoft failed us.):ajsleepy:

4781164 unity is ubisofts last chance for me, ac4 was extremely horrible... It was a good game but calling it assassins creed is a disgrace to the AC series, considering it was only 1 percent assassins creed

4781332 Haven't played 4 yet, but I have played AC 3 and that was awesome! :rainbowkiss:

4784704 don't waste your time on ac4, first of all its completely pirate, only assassin related thing is his hidden blades, and in the present day missions you play as a abstergo employee! and worst: you play in first person(in present day storyline) :unsuresweetie: the game was an excellent pirate game, but the worst AC game ever.

4785009 My dad told he would get me unity if I finished 3 AC games. I wanted to play the newest ones. So I'm gonna play AC 4 and give my opinion.

I want more of this story also I want to play ac rouge so excited

4815513 glad to see another person interested in this story, it's on a short-term hiatus so I can work on another story I had to make, so expect a new Ezio in Equestria chapter in a few days.

Love it! I will pray to ezio to give you the ideas for future chapters!

4911561 thanks, I pray to god that I can find the time to write more!!! <)

4934227 I'll also pray to altiar (Don't know how to spell it!)

I'll be honest. i didn't quite feel the Fluttershy mode.

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