Edit: Hey guys, as you may have noticed I put up a new cover image for my story, this one I actually drew myself and it took me about three hours to get it exactly the way I wanted it, basically it incorporates several different characters and genres that I love in one character. If you want you can tell me what you think about it, and it's okay to say that it looks like crap i'm no picaso and I know that it isn't perfect but hey in the words of Matt Smith "Give me time and a crayon."
When Discord is imprisoned by the mane six once again he needs to break out. His solution? Find someone to manipulate and break him out of his stone prison. The problem? That certain someone is a human, and a nerdy human at that.
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Looks interesting, will read later
Edit: Dat new cover art, unf XD
alright, this is interesting enough, but slow down a little! give a little more detail. and try not to change the tense in the middle of a paragraph. it's kinda jarring
3780466 I'm DIscord now, i'll do what I want. Seriously though, thanks for the tip I do realize that I did that and the rest of the story will be in the first person perspective. Unless i'm not there at the time but i'll be sure to point out when that happens.
Just wings, BORING! If he's the new god of chaos he needs to arrive in style, maybe a flying motorcycle made from cotton candy with chocolate milk coming from the exhaust, GO BIG OR GO HOME!
HAHAHAHAHAH! YES! I was hoping you'd post this here! Good luck!
3791997 Thanks, good to see you on here to.
Ugh, this story really got dry... and stupid. I mean, yeah, Gilda's a bitch, but why the hell would she round up a gang to come beat up Rainbow Dash? There's no reason to these action sequences you felt the story needed; they're just overly-convenient plot devices used to make the hero look like a hero. It doesn't help that he's using different personas each time. I lost interest right when he mentioned apple-themed treats. This is just that bad.
3796721 I understand what you're saying...and I cant believe I didn't realize it sooner. However, there's going to be a lot of action sequences in this story that may or may not make sense so either get used to it or don't read it if you find it very off putting. There will be an explanation for it though.
3796721 The reason why there's so much conflict is because Will is supressing the side of DIscord that wants to spread mass chaos. This causes it to leak out in his magic as subtle waves of chaos that make anything within its radius a bit wilder and rowdier. Is that a decent explination
3801396 That... actually makes a lot of sense. Huh. Kinda reminds me of the Chrysaluna conspiracy from Reviewing is Magic. Except where DHX will inevitably ignore that possibility, you have the potential to turn it into a really good point for your story.
Alrighty, I'm back on board.
3802041 Thank you, but uh quick question...what's the Chrysaluna theory?
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Nice!
Seriously?
You have a space room, but no spherical, corrupt AI floating around in it?
You shame the society of nerds.
But to be serious this is an epic fic.
3816897 MIND BLOWN
There's also the part where the headache healing spell happens
and right after she runs away there is the part with Luna
unless of course that was another changeling playing cadance at the time
Screwball... I did not see that coming, good show.
3831159 She is still normal pony size. A normal changeling could probably handle her form long enough to put in an appearance.
3831136 Wheatly reference?
3833538 Close, but no cigar.
Space core reference.
SPAAAAAAAAACE!!!!!!!!!
I NEED MOAR!!!!
COLTS WITH MAGIC ASCOTS
3914152 Not even close, but I do love that idea. I can imagine a stallion with a magical ascot that moves on its own and strangles people...Actually that was the concept of a TV show I believe, it was called "The cape" and that show sucked the big one so...yeah not doing that. However, your description was hilarious and possibly made my day so good on you.
Repeat
Best revenge plot idea from gilda for me is still the one she has in "Turnabout Storm", where she tries to frame Rainbow Dash for murder because of a missused storm cloud.
I really liek some of the lines you use, also references and some transportation ideas.
Having the power of a chaos spirit, at least the kind as discord was shown in the series, should actually force you to use a ridiculus or illogical way of transportation from time to time, as the magic itself has a random nature to it.
I always think of teh following characters, when I debate the possibilities of Discords chaos magic in action:
Jim Carrey as the Mask
Genie from Disney's Alladin
Cosmo, from Fairly oddParents
When you mentioned the nice family of moles, all I could think of was Bottles and his family in the Banjo Kazooie series.
Can waffles make apples?
Canvasser whiff Markab aglow
I have no idea
crazy wankers making afros
3935162 Whoops, thanks for pointing that out. I had fixed it in an earlier edit but I derped and forgot about the save button so I had to redo some things and I clearly missed that one. Thanks.
3937209 No, but th story might be crazy so you were kind of close.
I must say, I am rather interested in what you plan do to with Gilda, though it's probably going to be her going after Screwball.
3939137 Um...no. I planned to do something with Screwball in the chapter after the next one so she won't play a major role in the next one.
Screwball is best pony!
CELESTIA WANTS AND MONEY ATTACKS!
3972642 Ha ha ha...no. But you did get the first word right so you're on the right track.
...If it opens from the outside, how the hel is he gonna get out in the morning?
Celestia and Will, madness attaches.
3974732 I said the and is between the W and the M. The first word is Celestia however but my character isn't involved.
It would have been a really big troll and really hilarious if he turned into sexy batman and defeated the mugger that way
. Of you don't know what I'm talking about, watch this:
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Batman is getting real tired of your shit.
hahaha
by any chance there was a cupcake reference there
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Maybe...
so chrysalis and nightmare moon working together
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I think the image speaks for itself.
4008920 OH GOD SERIOUSLY?
spoilers
and its definitely chrysalis and nightmare moon now
sure of it
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You guys are idiots.
3936829 Especially you.
Downvoters will be DELETED and EXTERMINATED!
4038558 Hey, we do not call people names here. It was a good guess and I didn't expect people to get it right on their first try. Here's a thought: Why don't you answer it and prove that you aren't an idiot?