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Storm Shine


Just a fun guy trying to write fun stuff

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A teen goes to a convention with some friends. Dressed in casual wear and walking around, he notices a small pink gem that looks oddly familiar... After buying it from the Merchant he blacks out, waking up in a strange location with blonde hair, orange skin, and a seriously bad case of dragon breath.

I got this idea while watching an old favorite of mine from Cartoon Network called 'Firebreather'. It's about the son of Kaiju King Beloc, Duncan Rosenblatt. Look it up or wait for the story to progress if you're not sure what kinda stuff he can do.

Planning to tie this in with my other Displaced story Promising Shadows.

Tags and such will be added as the story progresses.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 50 )

I like that movie you have good taste

Dang, I haven't seen that movie in so long. I figured that most people just forgot about it.

literally was watching the movie with family when i found this jewel!

This is a very good story so far, and I can't wait to read more of it. :pinkiehappy:

Nice job. I want to cross over with you sometime. When you're not busy of course

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I'd be happy to! The funny thing here, is that I was literally just contemplating on writing a chapter about making a token (Along with some other stuff of course.)

I'm actually pretty free for the foreseeable future, and was planning a potential writing spree. Tell me when and what story and such, and I would be more than happy to try a cross-over with you. :pinkiehappy:

6364083 Alright. It might depend on the character, but Nicko from my story Of Magic and Machines might work. He was taught by a dragon.

We wonder how the Royals would react to THAT letter? Perhaps Twilight trying to be 'subtle' in observing him? For a 'half breed' of a unknown violent giant breed easily knocking three drakes away with but a tree.

It isn't like we would think they might consider having him become a citizen and enlist him into the royal army to guard the elements or seek personal meeting likely hoping to use him as a diplomat for said violent species.

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Okie dokie, cool! I'll go ahead and read through that one (And the prequel, since jumping right into a sequel is (Usually) not such a great idea.:derpytongue2:) to get an idea of things. I've read some of your other stories already btw, and out of what I've read it's all pretty great! I particularly enjoy 'When Lightning Strikes...' and 'Monkey Business'. :pinkiesmile:

Also, just to clarify, I'm guessing you want the crossover to be with 'Son of a Kaiju!' on my end?

6364247 Whichever works. I had another idea in mind that I would want to start that relates to the whole being part dragon thing. But it's your choice... Mr. Scalebound

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Well I'll be honest and say that I would actually prefer to use 'Son of a Kaiju!'. :derpytongue2:

Anyways, do you want to use the PM system or something to talk about this or do you prefer another method of communication like Skype or something?

6326405 They came out with a DVD a while back:pinkiehappy:


I'll follow

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You're good... >.>

Then again, he can bake a cake to appease Celestia. :trollestia:


lol, not really of course. But they will find out. And they will react.


....As soon as I figure out a good letter for that. So maybe Chapter 4 or 5. :derpytongue2: (Or will I? Dun dun dun....)

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Yay! Thanks, glad you like it! :twilightsmile:


Sorry to everyone for not responding to your comments sooner. I try to respond to comments if I can, but I guess it slipped my mind. Imma have to remind myself to slap my mind's mind me. :pinkiecrazy:

Alright. Now you caught my attention. Wanna get to work?

hmm i saw that movie quite awhile ago...:rainbowderp: might take a look at this later.:applejackunsure:

Nicko MAY have blundered a bit by stating what Duncan was as a displaced out loud, with the crowd he had even his new father present? Normally it could go badly for relations, the war faction could if hearing that he isn't the king's true son may openly state he had lied to them all and result in the start of a world reforming war.

I just realized this three to five days after reading this: Duncan just got ousted as the son of the King of the Kaiju, and Heir to the throne. Rarity is going to be on him like a fabulous fly on stink. I can't wait to see how that turns out.

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I was thinking like white on rice, but yeah basically. :derpytongue2:

Hmmm... Muffins may fix Luna and Celestia. Maybe. And if not, muffins. Then again, perfect time for princess boops.

I almost forgot about this movie... I really liked it. Favorited for now.

Loving this story and can't wait to see the next chapter.:pinkiehappy:

Well, light me on fire, throw me offa building and call me a meteor, I never thought I'd see the day... A fellow Firebreather fan! God, I wish they'd show that again.

6622680 Nah. They'd just fuck it up, like Teen Titans Go. Cartoon Network has really gone downhill.

6622696 Teens Titans Go was gonna be fucked up unless they got someone to actually continue the story from the original, though they fucked it up more, seriously, having Starfire be the peaceful one is stupid, starfire is from a race of beings who understand two things Love and War... seriously she is about as peaceful as female tiger...

6625020 And do you have any idea what they'd do the same thing to Firebreather?

6625028 If they had made the show back when they made the movie then it might be good.... Im just glad that alot of the animators and cartoon story writers that made most of the best cartoons back during Cartoon Networks golden years have gone back to working for Canadian based cartoon channels, though their shows also air on Cartoon Network but not in America... seriously, the Anime version of Powerpuff girls aired in spanish speaking countries with both english dubs and spanish subs on the spanish Cartoon Network.... seriously.... what the frack... does Cartoon Network see America as the stupid retard child so it gives us the stupid shows while everyone else gets the smarter shows??? Seriously... what the frack

6625119 ...THERE'S A POWER PUFF GIRLS ANIME?! HOW DID I NOT KNOW OF THIS?!

BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH I MUST FIND IT!!!

6625125 It's called Powerpuff girls Z, the story line is extremely different but it is a good show.... seriously it makes you feel sorry for Mojo Jojo...

The pluckiness with a touch of scatter-brain is decidedly intriguing, but all the same, do try to be careful with some of those "Displaced Tropes".

A bit meandering in the middle, but a decent closer with the Kaiju King popping along. Though, I do hope this king merely smells Duncan's blood and recognizes him as something closer to a clone rather than an actual son, unless you're planning on some sort of Displaced Parents as well.

I always did like that movie. I remember when it first aired on CN, I was shaking in my seat with anticipation for the awesomeness to come.

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Comment posted by Lycanthromancer deleted Nov 15th, 2016

oh man, this is such a shame. A Displaced story about firebreather and it hasn't been updated in a long time.

“Indeed.” the second alicorn spoke up, “Thou art are a curiosity, just as much as those creatures.”

-Thou art a curiosity-

“What is this… Displaced… That thou speaketh of?” The Moon Princess asked, testing the odd word.

-That thou speakest/speak of-


Thanks for the chapter!:twilightsmile:

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Thanks, I never noticed that 'are' I put after art and I appreciate the correction on the 'speak' bit :pinkiesmile:

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Np! I am a bit more familiar with the old English words.

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