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The Joeker


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This story is a sequel to Livin' The Dream.


[there might be no mane 6 in this story by the way]

Who am I? or... what am I? am I even human anymore?

Have you ever wondered what defines a soul? well I hope you find the answer, i really do, and when you do, let me know, because I'm still searching for my soul...

Well, I've died thrice now, and it's not that enjoyable, I either expected eternal damnation or ascension, but no, I was given another chance, by... well we'll cross that bridge when we come to it, you'll know who he is VERY soon, no worries.

I have been given a third chance at life now, but where am I? what time is it? who am I? why am I asking you these things? just read the story.

(And to warn you my char is kind of a Mary Sue but he will still get his ass kicked and many other things which show that no matter how badass you are, things can go horribly wrong, so don't dislike because of that fact because I warned you.)

Chapters (13)
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Comments ( 36 )

The pacing is pretty fast in my opinion. The dialogue between the main character and the others seemed pretty weird to me. You probably got more dislikes because he's a Gary Stu.

I warned people in the description about that, but that he won't be this badass character for long, he's going to get his ass completely kicked and then some.

Man I am loving this. Liking and faving.

YOU LEFT US HANGING?! I liked how you guys wrote out the hallway scene from Metal gear twin snakes. Can't wait for the next chappy.

still good af ever

Really hoping crazy ponies don't have POW camps.

Sooner or later the anger is gonna override the pain. And when that happens. Ponies are gonna see what gilded means in human terms.

Hey can you have that mare die slowly please

Much like what Kratz says, the dialogue between characters seems rushed and akward. Go back over the story and fix it please. I wanna like this story but I just can't.

A lesser man would have turned feral by now. I'am at the edge of my seat here. When's he gonna break out? This is torture to me to man.

good story THE SUSPENSE (if i say that right)

dfffffffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu now i wanna kill him myself but i trust to give him a long and painful death:pinkiecrazy:

Should have known that lunatic was a minion. So freakin obvious now that I think about it.

Comment posted by I stabs you deleted Jul 22nd, 2015

YYYYEEESSSSSSS! Finally free. Can't keep a good fox down. Now how does he get his shit back?

damn hahaha it gets better every time

And that's how Grey Fox saved Christmas.

That was a quick beat down on Sombra. Then again Fox should know what happens if you don't take an enemy seriously.

Nothing wrong with a little romance now and again. It's a good chapter.

Comment posted by VunderGuy deleted Mar 18th, 2016

6349953 that was a rhetorical question, also some people don't believe in the soul, so yeah, there is no true answer.

gild·ed
ˈɡildəd/
adjective
covered thinly with gold leaf or gold paint.
"an elegant gilded birdcage"

wealthy and privileged.
adjective: gilded; past participle: gilded
"he saw plain, decent boys transformed to gilded, roistering youths"

6392641 OK... I'm sorry, me and my co-writer cannot take this seriously with that picture... please explain your comment a little, if you were just explaining the meaning of glided, I know what it means, I was partially referring to all three, the third one at the end of his imprisonment.

1. To cover with or as if with a thin layer of gold.
2. To give an often deceptively attractive or improved appearance to.
3. To smear with blood.

Damn shame this is on Hiatus, it's a great story.

great sequel!, absolutly enjoyed reading the chapters, is there more chapters even though it's on hiatus?, i hope this story continues, also is baz now frank? im having trouble trying to figure it out?. 10/10 great sequel to main story!.

I am going to assume, that this is in the time of Lunas' fall. I think this is going to hurt Frank to the core.

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