I want to write stories with ponies, insanity, romance and intense action. Is that too much to ask for?
In today's world filled with spell checks and auto corrects, some people don't slow down and take time to check over their writing. Twilight believes this is most true with her students because their grammar is absolutely horrible and she doesn't quite know what to do about it. But Pinkie does, and she doesn't care how silly or out of control she has to get, she will help Twilight!
AN: Just to be clear, these are full on humans, not like EQG humans.
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Cool!
This deserves a lot more likes!
The title of the fic (and chapter) needs to be capitalised, and I mean beyond the first word. Basic rule of writing. Kinda funny considering the story's subject matter.
The fic itself was alright. Not too bad.
At first I was like "Hey, that's ironic, 'grammar' is misspelled in the title."
Then I got the joke.
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While that may be intentional, I don't know if the errors in the description are also intentional.
Cute
Repeating Twilight's name again so soon looks clunky. Just a simple she would work fine, there.
Have you been listening in on my conversations?
Has she been at the Mirror Pool again?
Anyway, this was adorable beyond all reason! Good job!
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Yeah...that was totally done on purpose.
That...is...AWESOME!!!! I love how you made Twilight a teacher,
and how Pinkie still had her Pinkie Sense.
I even emailed Word Crimes to my previous language arts teacher! And I loved how Twilight reacted, too.
On a scale of 1 to 100, I give it.. aw crap, you broke my scale!
4884710 Your enthusiasm slays me good sir (or madam, i'm not sure what gender you are) I wish half the people who read this were as excited about it as you are.
4884730 It was a great story, one of my favorites EVER. Oh, and I am a female, but thank you for not assuming anything.
You sir are winning at life enjoy the like :)
4923777 Well, I wouldn't call myself a winner at life; i'm still single, i'm not very successful, i'm not happy with my job, i'm veritably crazy...not wait, that's a good thing. My point is that i'm not winning at life, but i'm not losing either, so i'm happy.
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How about winning at writing life or at least writing as made clear by you crafting this wonderful story.
4924650 ...yeah that sounds about right.
Nice job. :)
It was really cute, although i wasn't sure if some of the grammar mistakes were for irony or not.
Also this:
It feels a little off to me how pinkie says
It could just be some sort of fourth wall break how she describes it so much like the narrator
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...unfortunately the grammar mistakes are not done on purpose, and as for the way Pinkie describes Twilight's actions that was not a 4th wall break, I just couldn't find any other way of describing it.
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maybe try rub.
as for grammar, i can make a gdoc and comment any mistakes I see. i wont catch everything, but i could help you get rid of some of the more prevalent ones.
5042104 If you want to help I won't stop you, but this isn't a top priority so don't let this take precedence over other stuff in your life.
4884710 On my scale from one - onehundred (by the way it's a grammatical duo that you put a number from one to ten in written form, and anything from eleven up is optional) I give it an, OVER NINE THOUSAND!
#overusedmeme
5052814 fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/235/6/8/over_9000_ver_2_by_unitoone-d47n9vu.png
Memes are your friends here.
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5055959 I just had to do it
5057109 No, I just think it's funny, because I use that phrase all the time!!!!
5057296 #usesmemesinreallifeandgetstonesofLOLs
5065050 Glad you liked it. Anything in particular that you thought was absolutely hilarious?
The part that made me laugh the most was when pinkie pie was playing word crimes.
5067030 Yeah, that sounds about right.
“Stuffed crust Twilight! You can eat it in reverse!”
Please tell me this is a Dragon Ball Z abridged reference.
5779381 Yes. It is a blatant DBZ abridged reference. I love DBZ abridged.
5780604 I did not expect that reference, plus I had dbz abridged playing on my ps3.
Awesome story! I just found one thing I needed to point out:
Is this a joke?
This is brilliant, my friend: absolutely brilliant.
Have a fave and a like!