• Member Since 31st Mar, 2014
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Critical Chance


Only recently started reading fimfiction, but loving it hard....Oh, and die hard shipper :)

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Just a small drabble that's my first Pony-Fic, something I came up with at work today that wouldn't go away. A story about the masks we wear and the relief that can come with being with that special some-pony for whom no masks are needed.

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I love the concept. :)

4171223

Thank you! :pinkiehappy: I'm trying to decide whether to do a story from Pinkie's perspective or maybe expand it a little :D

4171787 Why not both?
*mexican music*

No, but in all seriousness, this would be an awesome story to expand on! :D

If she was in her 'normal' mood

This bit kinda confused the perspective for me a little bit but it only occured once so that's mostly just me over analysing a little.

Other than that I found the story really cutie and it reminded me of things in my life. Enjoyed and thumbed up!

4202820 Thank you! I'm writing a companion piece from Pinkie's perspective right now.

I agree with ghost balls hehe. But if you what direction do you plan on taking with the story

:pinkiesad2::heart::twilightsmile:

Meanwhile Spike: :moustache:💤

Cute story!

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