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Blade Star


A fan of MLP since March 2013 and a die hard fan of Princess Luna. The Moon shall rise again.

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When our protagonist awakens in the Everfree Forest, he is not alone. Transformed into a creature he once thought to be fictional, and accompanied by his close family he must find his way through this new land. Can he build a new life for them all in Equestria, and how will the ponies react to these strange creatures? Particularly when they find out about a certain TV show.

Comments and criticisms appreciated.

(Not a self-insert)

Thanks to Wadusher0 for the cover art.

Updated every Friday.

Featured on 05/09/2014 (or 09/05 if you're American)

Featured again 05/12/2014 Thanks again, everypony!

And again on 09/01/2015

Chapters (101)
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Comments ( 1587 )

Knew it, I did. Turned him into a pony, you did.

Disappointed, I am, in this cliche.

G3 is not a horror:ajbemused: And everyone who says that has probaly never seen it

3635269 I thought G3 only existed in doll form. No cartoons were made.

It's G2 that ramped up the oddness and had the ponies doing a lot of "slice of life" stuff in the 80s.

So he doen't like being a human? :rainbowhuh:

3715524 It's not that he dislikes being human, it is that he is indifferent to being either human or pony. After all, has anything really changed for him since arriving in Equestria?

hummmm nice momentes with the doc on this chapter :heart::heart::heart::fluttershysad::fluttercry:

so what happen in next chapter?

Another neat chapter dude. :pinkiehappy:

lol mmmmmm that was a nice chapter :heart::heart::heart::heart::fluttershysad::fluttercry:

3635269 3637374 G3 was a cartoon, specifically a set of straight-to-VHS movies, and it wasn't a horror, unless you count G3.5 Newborn Cuties. That was HORRIBLE!:pinkiesick:

3726356 I do count the Newborn Cuties. :pinkiesick: I no longer fear Hell. :pinkiecrazy: As it stands, you are right, it wasn't all bad. I was merely alluding to the general dislike of that particular period prior to G4.

I like your style.

The thing about the CMC being Pinkie's powder monkeys... I can easily imagine them trying to get a cutie mark in 'powdering monkeys'.:rainbowlaugh:

It even faster than Dashie

"It's"

Huh. Perhaps I have been playing too much Fallout: New Vegas. Because when I saw your author's note about "powder monkeys", I immediately thought "powder ganger".

3730967 Powder monkeys is actually the term used on warships in the 1800's for children who would carry gunpowder for the cannons. That's where I got that from.

I really like this story:pinkiehappy:

3737637 Thank you. Any suggestions though?

Sorry I don't have any:ajsleepy:

3737652 No worries. :trollestia: The positive comments encourage me just as much. Sometimes I let that mocking sliver of red dislikes get to me a bit. I'm pretty certain nine are just because of the setting. One, I know was actually a valid point from Jacob Hoove which I take on board.

I love this story,I have been reading it ever since chapter 1 came out. :twilightsmile:

3737687 Thank you mein Herr. I am always in need of someone to point out my foolish errors in grammar.

AWESOME!!!! but , i know i'll sound stupid if i ask, but cna flutterbat be mentioned atleast?

3737812 Your welcome. Also,I can do that if you like. :twilightsmile:

3737907 Possibly, but I don't want to go into specifics on season 4 in case of epic bombshells.

3738704 i see ^^- she's just become my fav character since that episode. sorry

Hai-kudos:

Fantastic story
Now reaching chapter nineteen
Is Muse being keen

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Please update when you can!!
^.^

Good story so far, sometimes the flow seems a little off in places but all together good job :scootangel:

can't wait what happen next chapter

3740099 Any place in particular? I'm always up for pointers. :ajsmug:

And that, is what makes humans so terrifying - especially to Equestria. We are ingenious, we manipulate and trick and outwit to levels equal to or even greater than Celestia.

3749886 Oh please, very few humans can hold a candle to the troll Celestia. :trollestia: I actually based that one something that happened when I was in in primary school. I actually felt sorry for the evil bugger.

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Sure, we might be overmatched in terms of scale or resources, but we're innovative and resourceful. We'd do things she'd never even think of.

3749934 That's true. Equestrians do seem to innately be more kind hearted than humans. even Tia. She has yet to introduce the concept of 'Family camps' as North Korea has. :rainbowlaugh::pinkiesick:

Hey Blade Stare I have an idea. Okay,so,you have MISS Cheerilee,and MRS.Owen,maybe Margret could help Cheerilee out with finding a relationship. Just a thought.

3750148 :rainbowlaugh: I did consider expanding on the episode 'Hearts and Hooves Day'. Maybe the next time she gets a chapter. :eeyup:

dam that a good slice of life chapter :heart::heart::heart::heart::fluttershysad::fluttercry::fluttercry:

One thing I had trouble pinning down, when you included the remark about a bilingual school becoming a minority-only school I couldn't figure out what kind of schools they'd be in the context of British education.

3750551 So who the bloody hell just disliked? It's really starting to annoy me.

I don't think you should ask me what's bad about it, because anyone here who's been in contact with me must know my standing ovation... or whatever you call it.

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Behold, the land of haters and trolls. We don't go there.

'whatI was' You need a space here between what and I.

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