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Commander_Pensword


I live in the US, I write stories that deal with standing in difficult times. I also am an amature war historian with some strong beliefs about history. Discord: https://discord.gg/8CcteCH

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Adventure, mayhem, magic of unknown origins. Oh, and talking ponies. These are the strange events that have brought three friends together into the wildest holiday that anyone could imagine.

It starts as a small Halloween chat, where they showcase their costume designs to one another. However, due to events outside of their control, they soon find themselves in a new land during a turbulent time.

Now trapped in a case of mistaken identity, these friends find themselves thrown into the deep end, when a royal wedding they’re asked to assist with is suddenly interrupted, and the three of them soon find themselves on an extended holiday from any sense of reality they ever knew.

We now have our own An Extended Holiday TVTropes Page:
A big thank you to wille179 for setting it up.
A/N: Now I would like you all to know first of all, this is a collaborative work between myself and some friends. So if you enjoyed this, why not stop by and say hello to the other three writers of this story. I have included their links at the bottom here.
Team Extended Holiday
American Brony - Writer
Teal Speckles - Writer
Shawn820 - Writer
OmniKitsune - Writer/Head Editor
Biker Dash - Editor

Big thanks to Shawn820 for the great cover art.
WARNING: There are spoilers in the comments. Read the comments at your own risk. By all means, please add to the discussions.

Chapters (163)
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Comments ( 1907 )

Sounds awesome so far. I hope to see more in the future :pinkiehappy:

It is very good up to now and i request more if you would, please!

Awesome! New chapter and cliffhanger!

P.s. the link is not working.

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Trust me, there is plenty more to come, in technicality we already have over one hundred thousand words down and are working on Chapter 16 as of this moment.

This is going to be a fun trip.

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Just to let you know, the link has been fixed, Thank you very much for the tip and letting me know of a broken link.

Well, looks like they get now a new (and REAL) equip of weapons and armor. I'm very interesting when the Changelings attack and they have to defend themselves :pinkiehappy:

I would like to see maybe some pictures how this Armor and weapons looks like.

well i found this interesting at first..... but... when Celestia viewed their memories you would think she would have found the holes in their stories. I tried to read, but I just dropped at the point where they were talking about their 'back stories' they also claim there is no magic yet one talks about hunting magical monsters. they also talked about their normal life (and talked normal) a bit right in front of her. all sorts of red flags pop up that just scream she is either dumb or she wants luna to kill them when she finds out the truth and is just playing along.:pinkiesad2: sorry I tried but this story with these plot holes just kill it for me.:ajsleepy:

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I'm glad you brought that up, we actually address that, if I remember correctly, in chapter 5, the next chapter. We separated it, and I understand that might have been a bad idea, but we do have it there. If you have any other questions you can send a message to one of the three of us and we can try to answer any questions you may have. Please direct any questions to myself, I should be on a majority of the time.

On that note
Chapter List Progress: Writing Chapter Eighteen
Next chapter will be released on Monday.

4313243 ... I'll consider maybe finishing the chapter and giving 5 a try... but I really feel a lack of interest with this story. Sorry.

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No worries, its understandable. As said, you can't please everyone.

An epic mass of movie quotes... and I like it :pinkiehappy:

Awesome chapter. Cant wait to read more :twilightsmile:

interesting ... what of the aura of magic around ....shawn i think?
well it would explain his fast healing and dmg resist
will he be able to manipulate it ?

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Ability to Manipulate, in progress.
And by that I mean we have determined this to be fact, but even at the chapter we are writing it is still a bit far away. As for the fast healing and damage resistance, that is correct, the field surrounds all three of the group. If you have anymore questions, feel free to ask.

Chapter in progress: Chapter 24

This Story was AWOSOME! :rainbowdetermined2: Goog work, guys :yay:

I cant wait when they first visit Ponyville. And I'm sure Pinkie can't wait either :pinkiehappy:

From what I have read so far of this, I have to say this; Not bad, not bad at all. Some spelling/grammer mistakes, but everything is quite fine, so keep it up laddeh.

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I'll be honest, we don't really have an editor. But yeah, typically I try to edit as we're writing, every now and then one of us goes back to the older chapters and edits some more things I missed, hah.

Chapter in Progress: Chapter 29

Bad capitalization in the first half... Otherwise, awesome!

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Thanks for the notification, I'll get to work on that later tonight, should be fixed by tomorrow.

Holy Grail! They should make a Holy Hand Grenade with a fuse of five seconds. Whoops, I mean three seconds!

I have a question for any who can answer it: What is the average velocity of an unladen swallow?

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What do you mean? An African or European swallow?

Chapter's is progress:
29: 52%
30: 35%

4695847 I don't know... Ahhhh!!! *falls off bridge and down cliff*

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That scene never gets old. Also I am happy to see you caught the reference about weeping in the previous chapter.

They should do a "I'll make a stallion out of you" song.

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In all honesty, we have that planned...
Still thinking on it...

Chapter in Progress: Chapter 29, 70% complete

4768406 By the way, I have some predictions.
1.) Starswirl is the Doctor
2.) Time travel to the distant past, before the statues, which are obviously modeled off the changed humans.

Can't wait to see if I'm right!

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Awesome I think you are so far the only one to even be hazarding a guess and predictions, congrats on that. I hope you enjoy your wait, as I think you are going to be surprised with what we have planned.

Also yes I have gotten enough free time to actually respond to a comment.

Finally thank you for being a loyal reader. Have a determined Rainbow Dash. :rainbowdetermined2:

Was that a 'average airspeed of an unladen swallow' joke or am I hoping too much? (Average speed of a Pegasus without gear)

Prediction: Sombra's curse sends them back to the future...


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How odd in that this did not show up, I recall replying to your comment and yet, I see nothing. Sorry. But yes, Yes it was a nice incident, in fact I recall that I wrote it and only after we were editing that we realized the joke we created. So we left it. Thank you again for your comments.

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Well, did you enjoy the prediction you made? I know why we did not comment on this comment due to the fact that it might reveal too much. Just to let you know things are moving quickly and by all means keep up the comments and dialog. Feel free to also keep making predictions if you want.

Alright, I've been thinking. When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Make life take the lemons back. Get mad! I don't want your damn lemons, what the hell am I supposed to do with these? I'm the man to see life's manager, make life rue the day he thought he could give me lemons. Do you know who I am? I'm the man who's gonna burn your house down. With the lemons. I'm going to get my engineers to invent a combustible lemon that will burn your house down!

That quote is burned into my brain.

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Cave Johnson, we're done here.

Bonus, spin off failure chapters? Interesting idea!

Toast to the Author!

Moonshade is totally Lunar

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well, that will be worked and headed up by Shawn820, just to let you know.

Yes a fourth wall joke.

ANd Moonshade is totally Lunar what? It feels that is part cutoff. Just thought you would like to know that.

Still, happy to see you are enjoying the chapter.

4954028 Lunar Fang. She goes to the past and uses the name Lunar Fang later.

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A small note on the failure endings, I don't mean in the sense of them screwing up and continuing, I mean in the sense of more mature endings.

Big time screw ups that you don't recover from, hah.

Aww, asleep the whole chapter? Really, Hammer/Shawn? Can't wait to see what's next!

Doctor Wolf? You made a reference to a annalist...
Huh.

Also cave Johnson reference. Hmm.

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well, then I will have to say that things do happen and the plot continues. But yes, sometimes even the one who does not sleep needs sleep.

Also I shall leave any more comments to another of the writers. All I can say is I think the next few chapters you will enjoy.


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I will be honest. The Cave Johnson reference was from another of the writers but we are all happy at the responses and ideas.

As for the Doctor Wolf, well, do what you can, life is never a vacuum so things like this happen. Still I hope you enjoy the rest of your read. Still a lot left to not just have you read, but a few more chapters for us to post. We kept a backlog for a reason.

Thank you both for your feed back.

Priceless ending! I can't wait to see what happens next. I wanna see the next time travel journey...

I have a pretty good feeling that Lunar Fang is actually Moonshade in another name, and another feeling that those three (plus moonshade) will have another time travel adventure.

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I agree, that was a lot of fun to write that ending, and in a way, completely in my opinion as a writer, does a one eighty of what you would expect should happen in a situation like that.

As for the next time travel journey? Well if we do have one again... you will have to wait, keep reading and keep piecing together the puzzle I would say. I think you will enjoy the coming adventure.


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Ah, another prediction, wonderful, it seems that you and Dream are both of the same opinion, please be patient as I do not want to give anything away, and for your last part... who knows? only we three know what is to come next.

((Seriously, we have a buffer written))

Still, to both of you, thank you for your comments, keep reading and keep those thoughts and opinions rolling in. I think you are going to enjoy the coming couple chapters. That is really all I want to, and feel comfortable on saying... just keep your eyes peeled and those gears turning in your heads.

5012090 Well you can't blame me, I want those two to be ship! And apparently so does Taze and Luna as well!

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I shall not blame you on what you want. In fact I am happy to hear your compliment. While I cannot say much more then that on the subject matter, just keep your eyes peeled and I am sure you are going to enjoy some of the upcoming scenes in the coming weeks, and month.

Just as a heads up we are currently working on chapter 32 at the moment. Work has eaten into our little buffer, and so that is a rather good thing having the buffer.

Still, I hope you enjoy the coming events.

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Well, I hope you enjoyed their introduction to Ponyville. I am sorry that I have not responded to your comments before. Still, as it has been a little bit of time, I was wondering if you enjoyed the travel to Ponyville and the antics taken there in so far.

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Hahah, thanks for mentioning that, it will be changed soon.

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Thank you for the information, the story has been edited to include the information and fixed the link needed.

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