• Member Since 25th Apr, 2015
  • offline last seen August 14th

MLPFan234


All hail, Sunset Shimmer.


Name: Kate
Age: 16
Location: Latvia
Here's more pony-related stuff about me:
Favorite Pony: Sunset Shimmer
Favorite Mane 6: Twilight or Rarity
Favorite CMC: Sweetie Belle
Favorite Villain: Queen Chrysalis or The Dazzlings
Favorite Song: My Past Is Not Today
Favorite Episode: Not sure yet.
OC: Silverspeed

Fan page? Yup. Here.

Me: *takes a deep breath*
me: i lo-
anyone who has spent five seconds around me ever: yes, you love sunset shimmer, we know, you love sunset shimmer so much, she the light of your life, you love her so much, you just love sunset shimmer, we KNOW , you love sunset shimmer you fucking love sunset shimmer ok we know, we get it, YOU LOVE SUNSET SHIMMER. WE GET IT.

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Criticism: “You write a lot of run on sentences and it can be hard to read.”

Opinion: “I don’t like what you did with the character in the last chapter.”

Criticism: “I noticed you misspelled a couple of words here and there.”

Opinion: “I thought the last chapter was kind of slow.”

Criticism: “You misrepresented a culture/practice/way of life in the last chapter and I would suggest reading up on it a little more before you handle it again.”

Opinion: “I didn’t like this because it didn’t fit my headcanon for this character’s behavior.”

Criticism is something objective the writer can change. Opinions are personal preferences that the writer doesn’t have to conform to.

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2268106 Yes! I have the Noragami manga's and I love the anime.

I know this is completely unrelated, but, uh, YATO.

You watch/read Noragami?

Thanks for the follow! I hope you enjoyed the story :D

Hey there, kid. For accepting me as your new lord and savior, I will give you a gift. You can ask me anything about anything in the universe. I will answer honestly, because - as we all know - I know lots of things.

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