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MLPFan234


All hail, Sunset Shimmer.

My Best stories.

  • Kind of married to your crush At a ordinary day in class, Cheerilee signs up a task that involves two people to pretend to be a married couple and experience the feeling of how though it is to be in a relationship with another person. I get to team up with my crush, Sunset. by MLPFan234 12,309 words · 3,429 views · 162 likes · 27 dislikes
  • A taste of Christmas Sonata has never really experienced Christmas, and this might be her first time. What makes it even better is... She is spending this Christmas with Sunset Shimmer. by MLPFan234 1,334 words · 1,392 views · 60 likes · 5 dislikes
  • Practice Twilight Sparkle hears a lot of things from Sour Sweet, who always shows off her fun life experiences. Once, ''Kissing'', is mentioned, Twilight takes interest onto it. After scoring a date with help from Lemon Zest, Twilight had to get some help. by MLPFan234 1,207 words · 3,633 views · 162 likes · 11 dislikes
  • First Kiss Sunset and Twilight had never experienced this before. Twilight had just returned to the human world to meet Sunset again, and Sunset wanted to share something special with Twilight, a kiss. by MLPFan234 1,289 words · 3,306 views · 104 likes · 8 dislikes


Name: Kate
Age: 16
Location: Latvia
Here's more pony-related stuff about me:
Favorite Pony: Sunset Shimmer
Favorite Mane 6: Twilight or Rarity
Favorite CMC: Sweetie Belle
Favorite Villain: Queen Chrysalis or The Dazzlings
Favorite Song: My Past Is Not Today
Favorite Episode: Not sure yet.
OC: Silverspeed

Fan page? Yup. Here.

Me: *takes a deep breath*
me: i lo-
anyone who has spent five seconds around me ever: yes, you love sunset shimmer, we know, you love sunset shimmer so much, she the light of your life, you love her so much, you just love sunset shimmer, we KNOW , you love sunset shimmer you fucking love sunset shimmer ok we know, we get it, YOU LOVE SUNSET SHIMMER. WE GET IT.

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Criticism: “You write a lot of run on sentences and it can be hard to read.”

Opinion: “I don’t like what you did with the character in the last chapter.”

Criticism: “I noticed you misspelled a couple of words here and there.”

Opinion: “I thought the last chapter was kind of slow.”

Criticism: “You misrepresented a culture/practice/way of life in the last chapter and I would suggest reading up on it a little more before you handle it again.”

Opinion: “I didn’t like this because it didn’t fit my headcanon for this character’s behavior.”

Criticism is something objective the writer can change. Opinions are personal preferences that the writer doesn’t have to conform to.

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2268106 Yes! I have the Noragami manga's and I love the anime.

I know this is completely unrelated, but, uh, YATO.

You watch/read Noragami?

Thanks for the follow! I hope you enjoyed the story :D

Hey there, kid. For accepting me as your new lord and savior, I will give you a gift. You can ask me anything about anything in the universe. I will answer honestly, because - as we all know - I know lots of things.

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