I know like almost no one will read this, but I want to say thanks first of all to everyone who commented on my first story. This has been the most supportive community I've ever participated in. Even the most negative comment I received wasn't a series of insults like it is sometimes with my music (Note: I also make music, www.soundcloud.com/hellplanet). I heard all of the advice. I will probably edit my story rather soon to make it more appealing and accessible.

That's it!
Isaiah