• Member Since 12th Oct, 2011
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Rolix


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Thanks for the fave...but which one does mine fall under?

Hey there! Thanks for the favorite on Dusk Shine's Saga! :twilightsmile: Hope you keep reading.

2087357 While I enjoyed the story there were just a couple things that I didn't like. To start how the pairing. It felt a little rushed; I would of liked to see some more bonding scenes between Spike and Applejack. This is only my personal opinion though, so you shouldn't feel compelled to have to write something like this for my (or any reader for that matter) sake.
Next, maybe I missed something but just how did Spike figure out that the almost kiss was the subject of Applejack's dream as soon as he heard the dream was about dragons? Why would that be the first conclusion he comes to?
Why did Spike fall unconscious at the end? Did he hit his head or something? With all that being said, I did like the story so please don't feel slighted or insulted about the library I sorted it in. Thank you for your time.

Thanks for checking my story, Heart Invasion 101! It's a bit unconventional, but I'm glad you found something to enjoy in it.

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I'm glad to know that you were able to see those aspects in the work.:twilightsmile:

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