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Muppetz


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Today is the day you finally seize your rightful position as lead cellist in the Canterlot Philharmonic Orchestra.
Unless that is, a certain ashen mare has anything to do with it.
Be on your guard. The firebrand with amethyst eyes plays dirty.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 35 )

Great, another Muppetz story :pinkiehappy:, right on time :heart:

Hmm, why does this picture look familiar? Oh yea.

Room 213

I will never understand classical music.
though i have a cousin who plays the cello and he hates it
I wonder if that got him laid:trixieshiftright:

GASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSPP :pinkiegasp:
Will read momentarily.

Edit: Made me power-lol. I'm visiting my parents and definitely can't have them knowing I read this kind of thing XD. I'm really glad that you kept it borderline intense romance and didn't let it slide into clop (no pun intended).

Commas, mate.
And out of many rules of fanfiction I've gathered, here's one for you:

"22) Do NOT write meta."
And why the fuck would you write some buzz-killer into the story right before things get really good?!
Going to chapter 2...



P.S. I do like this story, although it goes a bit too fast. Changed your style?

1393026

I know that feel, bro, I know that feel...

1393026

I know that feel, bro, I know that feel...

1393199

HAHAHAAHAAA
AH
AHAAAHHAAHA
haahahaAHAHAAA
JESUS THAT PUN
I DON'T KNOW BUT I'M LAUGHING FOR REAL RIGHT NOW

Comment posted by Gribbit deleted May 27th, 2019
Comment posted by Gribbit deleted May 27th, 2019

1401041
I haven't heard from Gears in forever.
Tell him I said Hi

Comment posted by Gribbit deleted May 27th, 2019

Muppetz Shipping story
This intrigues me

I really need to fix my notification settings.

Not bad, although you should put space between paragraphs and also replace filly with mare (fillies are little girls, you know like the cutie mark crusaders)

The story is finished after 2 chapters? Seems too short to end here.

I laughed again. :pinkiehappy:

Like 1416477 said, it would really benefit to double-space between paragraphs. It makes it much easier on the reader's eyes and makes your story not look like a wall of text. :rainbowwild:

A quick example, in case you're confused:

You got up and found the restrooms and inspected yourself in the mirror. You did look a bit rough. Your mane was disheveled and out of place and your collar was inside out and missing it’s tie.

I do look like a hobo. You wet your hooves and ran them through your mane trying to smooth it into place. You took off your collar and reversed it. Once you decided you looked presentable. You made your way back to the theater. You walked back through the double doors.

This time you weren’t alone. Trotting back to down to the stage to retrieve your cello case, you see a figure pop out from behind a row of seats in the dark as you walk past.

This also applies to sections in which the speaking character changes, which are still considered new paragraphs.

1564482
You profile picture says something else ^^

I'd like to read this, but I'm seeing some odd paragraph formatting errors. Not sure if the problem is on my side or site-side.

Good story. Loved it.

Trotting back to down to the stage to retrieve your cello case, you see a figure pop out
from behind a row of seats in the dark as you walk past.

Trotting back down to the stage to retrieve your cello case, you see a figure pop out
from behind a row of seats in the dark as you walk past.

realize that for the continuity of the story it is probably best if you just don’t ask questions.

Must be related to Pinkie.

*just finished sex part*
Thinks to myself, *BONER ENGAGED!!!!!*

:rainbowkiss:

Fantastic storytelling! Excellent reference material.

Heeheehee, how this started out. I loved it.

Extreme Cello battle, then a make out session then SLUGGED TO THE FACE!
Perfection~

Nicely done!

Heeheehee, how this started out. I loved it.

Extreme Cello battle, then a make out session then SLUGGED TO THE FACE!
Perfection~

Nicely done!

Hehehehe, this escalated quickly, but it was a nice short story.
Good work man.

You get a fav.

8052793
The army gave it to me, Sergeant.

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