A month after her coronation, Twilight Sparkle decides to try out a few new spells. When an age spell goes wrong, she ends up stuck as an alicorn filly. While she tries to find a solution to her dilemma, Twilight becomes dependent on Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie, who end up as her foalsitters, for better or worse. And the answer to her problems might well lie with one of Ponyville's most eccentric figures...
Note: This story features Alicorn Twilight, Doctor Whooves, age regression, and infantilism material.
Cover art by HopeaHam.
Chapters (18)
Ok, going places. I like it so far, and I'd like to see where you take it. I had a critique, but upon further review it was just two incidence in rapid succession that made me think you did it through the whole chapter.
Worked well as a prologue; it'll hook people that like the concept.
nice prospect. will keep me eyes pilled
More.
That is all...
Oh dear this can't possibly end well.
I look forward to more.
Next chapter, the foalsitters arrive.
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>keep me eyes pilled
>pilled
Thanks, everyone. I hope you'll like the next chapter just as much!
2383444 I'd be happy to hear your critique anyway. I could always use the help in my writing.
MOAR!
Interesting, I will gladly follow this story.
Twilight is best filly! So far, so good and I can't wait to read more! (but I will, I am a patient man... sometimes)
I'll mark this for my "Read Later."
It sounds cute.
looks interesting, will add to watch list
EM DASH <3 auto-upvote
Well written and decent premise. Can't say much more with only a prologue of a chapter to go on.
I really like this story so far.
Poor Twilight, make her mind regress!
I like where this is going. One fave and like from me.
hoo boy I can see where this is going
Poor Twilight but I fear the worst is yet to come for her
D'aaaawwwwwwwwww! So cute!
D'aww...so cute and sad moment.
You know, I'd actually love to see Cadance and Shining's reactions to this situation. Maybe they could pop in for a surprise visit!
The title and picture is misleading....
Anyway, this story is cute!
Troll-doc.
wat
More!
2388852 I agree somewhat, but I still want her to be her, but just wanting to be a foal and likes to act like one when she's like that
Looking forward to more I have to say.
I saw Whooves in there, and by Luna I shall get him! The L+F(Like and Favorite) cannon hast fired!
This is starting to get creepy.
Diapers...I would be crying to.
I really liked this chapter. Had a lot of cuteness.
2394201 Thanks!
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Ah, my particular critique was incorrect. I read sonething wrong <3
Also, that new picture: fukken saved.
Is it just me, or is anyone else dying for another chapter? I mean, this is just too damn cute to pass up and leave alone!
Baby Alicorn Twilight = Awwww
Whats the next chapter going to be released i want more
So how long until Twilight's forced into her first diaper? (There's no way she's going to willingly put one on)
Yep, Twilight is boned. Hopefully her new mother Fluttershy will not be too smothering.
MOAR!
ish a cute story hehe.
2404340 Thank you!
2404338 *ducks head over keyboard* I'm writing as fast as I can! Thanks for your patience!
You know, you're doing really well. I had some small niggling with the storytelling in chapter one, but you've smoothed that out. This is a rare case of a story being so well written that the errors require me to look for them; a nice change of pace.
this is getting kind of weird...I like it.
Keep it up.
Ooooooooo! I sense the Doctor coming!
It's time to meet Time Turner (Or Doctor Whooves). Now I really don't see why Twilight wouldn't want Pinkie to change her, if anything she should look forward to it because who knows maybe Pinkie Pie will get the diaper stuck on her head again.
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She's probably terrified Pinkie would A) go over-the-top with "who's a widdle cutie? You are!" comments, B) make a song out of it, or C) both.
THis is gonna be good!
2405092 Entonces, muchas gracias por leer!
2405439 All of those things are a very real possibility where Pinkie Pie's concerned. Not to mention Fluttershy seems like the more comforting pony to go with.
2405439 Pinkie Pie making up a song about changing diapers? Well I guess that's one way of making the experience more pleasant.
And the cryptic crossword fan in me immediately rearranges 'despair' into 'diapers'. ^^
My pleasure.
Nice chapter. I'm glad i faved