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Hello I'm Cloud Mist and I'm being held captive by a rich mare that turned me into a foal with a potion and now I'm in diapers, I pray to Celestia somepony comes and save me before I give into my foal emotions or worst...start to fall in love with the crazy mare.
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Just overfill your diapers every hour, she'll give up in a few days. Pack your bags, within the third day... (For preparation reasons...)
3354274 That's assuming he has the control to do such a thing.
3354312 Who says all babies don't.
Those sly bastards, I'm still trying to clean these poop stains out my carpets... Grrr
3354331 I take it from that last part of the comment you had a bad experience with baby sitting. Dare I ask what happened?
3354392 Well, my good sir, imagine you rocking a baby back and forth on your knee whilst all you feel is a, wet... something splash onto it. You look down to see a diaper. Though, not only just a diaper, a dirty, wet, poop-filled monstrosity dripping onto your floor.
I had grown a personal vendetta against (some) babies since that day...
3354462 Wow, sounds like you had it rough.
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3354493 Well I'm sure whoever that mare is she's not going to give the main character a chance to drive her crazy. She'll find some way to keep him in control.
Yeah, you really need to edit. As in, not just correcting some words, but grammar and punctuation as well.
oh god this isn't another one like that rd hypno sadist fic is it?....
I like it
Well, that was a little dark, but you have my attention here. I hope Star Bright didn't really die in the forest.
Awesome story, but you need to make it teen. There is a bad word, and it's a bit to dark for everyone. Long Live Babies!
You really need to put some , and . in your sentences, they're way too long
3354855 I hope not. That was really messed up.
Well, you are going to get some heat if people remember the story Obsessions and Regressions. Sorry. Also there was a few places that could use some commas to add pauses in dialogue. Still, I want to read it lol MOAR!
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If you remember Rainbow Dash wasn't really regressed like here just mentally and besides its not going to be that close to being the same...maybe.
Oh I don't have an issue with it lol. As long as you change a few things then its fine, lord knows I've written stuff that seems like a copy to others. 3362589
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Okay like what?
3362561 Oh I remember that story. Very messed up and disturbing, but in a good way. Esentially it was a better written "Pattycakes".
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Hold your CODE RED you could shoot yourself.
What should you change? I guess just make it your own, and yes Rainbow Dash was not physically regressed. Just try not to follow 100% of the plot that Regressions had I suppose, *shrugs* 3362620
3362654 Sorry.
Just was how I reacted to Miss Breeze kidnapping Cloud Mist and foalafying him. *I use Cadence's breathing technique.* Okay, I think I'm good. I hope to see more to this story and to Foal adventures, please update soon.
Change he's to she's . In the middle. Also this feels like a copy of Obsession and Regression.
3365700 Dude, if was plagiarism, it wouldn't be allowed. Besides, OC, not extremely forced regression, the OC is actually Okay with that, and it is rated everyone.Yes, they are similar
but the Oc is literally not held against their will and injected with harmful materials. It is also not sad.
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Guess that's one positive to all of this, you get to boss a fully grown pony around. So like for example if you don't like wearing diapers you could order him to let you use the potty and he would have to obey.
Hope hiss friend is alive and will come back soon. That was cute with the timber-wolf scene. A lot of people have the wrong idea about some wolves. I came eye to eye with a wild one once, and all he did was sniff me. No harm befell me.
Go on...
3370215 Well what Ms. Breeze doesn't know won't hurt her. And if she lets him have a little room to still be himself he'll probably grow to like her a little bit better. Besides just because he may want to use the potty doesn't mean he'll have to completly give up on diapers.
Not to mention the potty could serve as an escape route for him if things go south. Though he might want to hold off on considering flushing himself til he finds out what's become of his friend.
your chose
update faster
longer chapters
Uh oh... he is regressing and things probably aren't looking up for his friend.
This story gets crazier and crazier, and I like it. Update soon.
Oh that's not good.
You need to find some way out of here soon. Otherwise you're going to be stuck in diapers forever, and if you think wetting em is bad you don't know the half of it.
My advice to you. See if you can find any escape routes, and consider all your options. Once you know what's become of your friend you should probably escape, though based on how you do that you might need an excuse to keep the staff busy.
One option that comes to mind: Find the bathroom, and when you get the chance flush yourself away.
Read the story Past Sins it makes you fart
3395172 Well Equestria does seem to be very forgiving.
3398928 In any case I never said that extends to pyromaniacs.
Yay new chapter! I love this story!
Awwww!!
I wonder if Miss Breeze might think about having twins if Star Bright ends up in the mansion and gets caught?
We'll just have to wait and see.
Well looks like you don't need to escape after all.
Sorry to hear you messed your diaper, that must've sucked.
Like I said before try seeing if you can demand that the butler let you use the potty.
I luv this I reviewed Obsession and Regression. I guess this is a good story!
This does bring up memories of Obsession and Regression, but not so much that it seems stolen to me at all. And there are places where grammar could be watched better, but I'm enjoying the story a bunch regardless. That was such a cute moment between Dream and Cloud
Keep it up!
Ooooh, somethings going down, I can hardly wait.
Huh so you actually WANT to escape, and yet you don't mind being a baby? You need to make up your mind on just what you want to do.
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That's just how mom's talk, you know how they talk about how there kid will always be there baby no matter how old they get.
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Hmmm if he does stay, keep his mind, and leave wouldn't he be able to get to the police and tell them what happened?
3457561 I assume it's because his mind was not regressed. He has the mind of an adult but the body of a baby.