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Dubs Rewatcher

Fandom veteran, journalist, sixteen-time EqD published author. I hope you have a lovely day! Come visit my official website at www.williamantonelli.com


It's been more than a year since Princess Luna's return to Equestria, and she is making great strides in her language skills. And along with this come a slew of new writing skills.

However, Celestia may have a few objections once she finds out just WHAT Luna has been writing...

Now with a reading by Fanficsational!
And another by Doom Pie Network!
And another by FarnesyFudge!
And another by Teksune Studios!

...Almost forgot to mention! This fic is dedicated to FIMFiction user Karrakaz, who requested more silly Luna and Celestia! Hope you enjoy!

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Comments ( 202 )

Oh and what could you possibly want to commission Celestia? Nothing inappropriate I'm sure :trollestia:

instant 5-Starred!

This was pretty fun to read, I'll give you back. The jokes worked well and from what I've seen the writing is good as well. Great job!

lol. Commission. What could she possibly want to commission?
Looking forward to reading more.

Well that was interesting...and quite funny...:rainbowlaugh:

Take all my stars.

That was really entertaining. A good laugh here and there. Good story all around, and the Tirek reference was a good moment.

There are not enough stars on the internet for how much this rocks... I've checked.

That... that was awesome.

Great short story, well written, and quite the interesting concept.
Great job all around, that was very entertaining :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by SethTheWizard deleted May 7th, 2015

Don't do it Luna, if you take Celestia's commission then she'll turn into Trollestia and troll us all!!

Well done sir/madam you have won all the star good going.:pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish::twilightblush::pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::yay:

Ahh! This is quite a change for the different and although its well written and all, I don't really care for it.
Good job....

I don't usually read a lot of clopfiction, but are you planning on actually writing Element?:trixieshiftright:

....I'm a filly, what's a commision? :trollestia: :derpytongue2:


A commission is when you pay someone to make something for you, in this case, a fic.

It's basically a glorified form of prostitution

pfffffft funny as hell here take all my stars :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

Thank you SO MUCH for the kind comments, everyone! You have no idea how proud I am that I managed to get featured. I honestly wasn't expecting this good a response.

THANK YOU! :yay:

My bad, I meant 5 stars and hit 4.5 by mistake:derpytongue2:

So, if the only things Celestia doesn't understand is the SEL and magnets, does that mean she understands pinkie pie?:rainbowhuh:

Great story by the way, five stars.

The SEL was one of two things in the world she would never understand(the other being magnets).

I c what u did thar:rainbowlaugh:

This story had me amused every second I have gone through it. This honestly made my day.


Well done!

Oh my, this was amazing, you need to write more like this!
5 stars and I'd give you more if I could.

Congraduations on being featured! I'm sure that you'll giggle with excitement for quite a while! :pinkiehappy:

Take my five stars, take them!

Wow. This was GREAT. First of all, the concept of Luna-the-fanfic-writer (sort of) is just flat out funny. I don't care who you are, that's just amusing.

On top of that- anyone else notice that "not all' of them contain the Elements? I wonder if the Mane Six realize Luna writes steamy and not-so-steamy novels about them? :P

Oh heavens... comissions. :trollestia:

Take all of my stars you magnificent gentlecolt. Also, commissions, eh?


....Woah. (no pun intended)
Now I'm curious, and for all the wrong reasons.

and, to borrow a Cliche line, Cool Story, Bro.

Cute. But now you'll have to write the book. :pinkiehappy:

Great picture choice too!

>Impossibly in love with Princess Luna / Nightmare Moon brony here... hhnnngggghhhh

ok that was funny... needs a sequl tho

You my dear writter have started a chain of events that will lead you to a 5 star rating, being tracked, watched and stalked. For you need to create the story 'Elements of Lust' by Moony Maiden.

it kinda makes sense that celestia doesn't under stand magnets seeing as she violates the law of magnetic force more often than magneto. great story just just great.

Bring out a sequel it needs to be to be something that no one would expect good luck and I hope to read a few more like this

WHY DOES CELESTIA EAT FILET MIGNON?! Steak wrapped in bacon is a horrible thing for a pony to eat!

Cool story though.

One of the more hilarious fanfics. 5/5

wow, lol, XDD loved the end there

Great story and made me laugh quite a few times! BUT, there are a few gripes I feel I have to present. Why do they eat Filet Mignon? >.>

Also, I think you've made a bit too many references here. Don't get me wrong, this particular story has a load of its own original content, but I never found references (unless they're really subtle) as a strong point of content. My observation, but still a deserving story overall.

"It's basically a glorified form of prostitution"

Okay, that made me giggle.

Oh this was really funny. :pinkiehappy: I love your Celestia, “Screw privacy, I have power!” :trollestia: greatest line ever.

lol Filet Mignon. Not the first time I see someone making the ponies eat meat, I think it's unessesary to cause conflict, since there are lots of nice expensive dishes without it. If it's just a joke, is ok I guess.:derpytongue2:


Sorry I had to. :twilightblush:

Good to see this story here :)
well done!

Oh boy... It's stories like this that make me wish we had a Luna Emoticon. :trollestia:

Well done. Well done.

That was good.
Funny and captivating.
Didn't outstay its welcome. :ajsmug:

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