A long forgotten element has been brought back, but for better or for worse?
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O_o the ending tho...
Who won?
DAMNIT DISCORD!!!
Congratulations on breaching 1,000,000 words.
Still puzzled about how Twilight, who knows about moving the Sun, refuses to consider, or even accept, that Discord, a near God, could easily drop a brainworm on anyone, given his spectacular achievements in animating window glass figures, being too small to see, and other such relatively minor abilities?
Maybe she oughta watch the fight scene in The Sword And The Stone? Merlin vs Madame Mim?
You aint going to find anything wrong, if he doesnt want to be found.
Who is this presence that causes him pain? The memories of the false Mane 4, the writing upon the vase. Who is this? What does it want?
5846125 Since when was Twilight capable of moving the sun before season 3?
5846062 agreed
Who is this? It isn't Discord. Not even he is this sadistic. I don't believe James has any enemies, either. Who is this bastard? What does he want? And where can I find him so that I can break his goddamn face? I mean, we know James survives, sequel and everything, but this guy is one sadistic little piece of shit...
Oh, Boo Hoo Hoo! My friends were brainwashed into becoming monsters and I'm all depressed about it, so I'm going to kill myself now!
That basically what this is right now, and it's gotten ridiculous. Get over it already, you big crybaby!
i did not like the sex scene with Rarity. It felt like James and her betrayed Fluttershy. I think the changelings can help James there magic looks like it mess with the the mind so maybe they can help or have someone scan his brain when he is talking to his friends and it will not come out when Nightmare Moon and Luna are there. congratulations on getting over One million,
5846760 ... dude, that's a DIFFERENT alternative Universe story plot line
5846557 The problem with what you said is that he IS trying to get over it.
However, as hinted multiple times, is that someone/something is making their presence kill him. So while he is depressed about what happened, it's more he's depressed that he can't even see his friends anymore.
5846557 obvious troll is obvious
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Queen Chrysalis already visited him in one night at the end of chapter "Toxic Love" and tried to help him but without success.
But the thing with Rarity and James, I also think that was not right, even when it was just in a dream.
Excellent chapter very emotional and romance but the thing with Rarity kinda threw for a loop I wasn't expecting that one to happen I already have a general idea on who the enemy is and how he is torturing James in his body but I have to wait and see it confirmed first. I have to admit though you really are killing us making us wait and waiting even longer to reach the conclusion it's really killing me. Please don't let you're inspiration die and continue writing for the sake of all those waiting for the greatest masterpiece to come out soon. Great chapter and I look forward to the next one and have a great day.
5847364 I see. So, if it had been a regular dream where the dreamer had minimal control over their actions and could barely remember what had transpired during it, it would have been fine?
It was a moment of respite and a genuine attempt for Rarity to try to help remind James of just what he means to her and how close they had always been, despite whatever happens in the dream would have no impact on their lives once they awoke. It was that one special time where they could reach past their inhibitions without consequence. Besides, I'm certain many other people have, once married, dreamed of sexual escapades with someone other than their spouse.
I was debating on whether or not to write that segment, but I just felt compelled to. Like, right or wrong, it would happen. While fidelity is always important, I feel this event was neither right nor wrong and is entirely up to interpretation.
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Obvious idiot is obvious. Must not have any friends if can't understand what it feels like to have them torn away from you.
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It's only wrong if it hurts the relationship. Fluttershy's fine with sharing his love with Rarity so long as things don't get physical. Things didn't get physical, they got metaphysical. It's like a guy being okay with his wife text-fucking people online so long as they don't meet up RL and do anything, because he'll be the one giving her what she wants in the flesh.
Also, damnit Discord. Or... dark-half of Element of Humanity. Whichever one. Stop that, you ain't win shit.
Who won... Discord?
Was it because he ate the wings?
damn that KFC!
seriously tho... will they try to zap him with elements? I would like to see Chryssie help a little too...or will he just die?
so much love so much passion.
just wow.
and DISCORD go buck your self.
Harts Fire
and I forgot twilight you found the clue now you just need to put the letters to gather.
a huge congratulation to you Humanity 1 million words+
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No discord is inside him, but discords Magic is hitting him...he's becoming apathetic...the opposite of humanity...GET HIM HIS ARMOR DAMN IT!!!!!!! HIS ARMOR IS THE KEY TO SAVING HIS LIFE!!!!!!!!
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No it can be discord...he was beat at his own game...tricked...he's in a bloodlust rage...
Discord is in him, making the memories strong in his waking world, and faking happy dreams so when he awakens he goes deeper into apathy....discords Magic wasn't working on him because of the armor...armor came of, he started dying...the magic is hitting him HARD, add discord making it tougher for him...shit has hit the fan...
5846557 You sure do know how to make a fool of yourself.
5847484 I suspect Discord's ghost did this!
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5848642: Well, forgive me for taking your previous words into consideration. Allow me to rephrase myself.
You told me yourself before, regarding my ideas of it being Golden Freddy: it's all in his mind. From what you said, there is no outside force trying to kill him or no spirit haunting him with these reactions: it's all just in his head. All of his reactions and depressions are all nothing more than his own thoughts and desires...and from that angle, it's actually makes him very pathetic: His friends were all FORCED into becoming monsters, and he even realized this down the road, and this alone is enough to make him fall into depression? So basically, forget all the dozens of other friends he's made over his time here, especially the two closer ones that stayed true and even confessed their love to him; just because these four FALSE COPIES were MEAN to him, his mind has hardwired itself into his depression over it, and despite having dozens of reasons for staying, he's ALLOWING himself to slip away into death and make all his other friends lose the one that a few have confessed their love to...including his OWN UNBORN CHILD, who will be born fatherless just because he couldn't take the truth of reality.
So unless I'm mistaken, and that there IS some Ghost of Discord or Golden Freddy slowly killing him off (if so, then I would actually LIKE you proving me wrong), from what I can see this is all just a REALLY petty depression-based suicide. Absolutely pathetic.
Fear, a normally natural feeling and emotion, twisted into toxic and destructive causes. Were he in Thedas I'd say he was possessed by a demon of fear, but he is not there. Oh, "I win" does it? Sounds like the old trickster isn't done just yet. Let's see how things play out.
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..........*bursts into uncontrollable laughter*
I'm sorry. Where did I say that? You must have severely misinterpreted my words at some point.
If that's what you really think is going on, then you're in for one hell of a surprise in a few chapters.
this whole discord thing has been dragging out for too long! When are things going to be normal!?
5849124: I hope so. I could use a good surprise after all this shit.
Love this story.
I have more than an inkling about what is happening to him now. Just two theories, but I shall wait and let time prove them right or wrong.
Still going with my theory that it's the Nightmare parasite working it's stuff on him.
Still looking forward to more.
you dastardly son-of-a. stop making me confused, angry, happy and sad at the same time.
"I WIN"
....I highly doubt that I'm right, but, the "black" half of him could possibly be doing this? as a way to TRULY finish the ultimate game. the "Black" side finished the game with discord, but, perhaps it has started up a game with James?....damn you and your making of so many different plausible theories.
A wonderful story with a perhaps toxic ending
I but a shadow
Can't wait for next one Awesome!!!
*browses through fimfiction and finds this story*
"Hmm... looks interesting"
*looks at the work count*
"One million??"
*A determined look crosses my face*
"Bring it on!!"
5854432 Well, as they say, every man mourns differently. Some might take it as it comes while others would go manic/depressive. All depends on the person.
I would not necessarily say worried. For a while, every time I would upload a new chapter, I would get hit with a rather alarming number of downvotes. Since a story is put on the front page whenever it is updated, I deduced that it was because of those who were reading the story for the first time. And I will admit that in hindsight, the first volume is the story's weakest link. I felt it was necessary to alert new readers that the story only improves over time so they hopefully don't judge it too quickly.
Good work, Humanity... though, I can only hope that James deals with the abomination of a plague that he can kill it. It's plainly obvious that it or he needs to die, and that James will be the one to slay it.
Nothing stood out, so nothing to report. I'm already eager for you to finish writing this Darkest Hour and bring the Brightest Day.
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i am sure that some just dislike your story because it is a HiE story. someone commented on this site somewhere (don't know where anymore, was some months ago) that he/she wished that HiE storys would be banned from fimfiction.net, just because they are HiE story. these seems to be the kind of members who do not even bother to try to read the story, they judge a story without knowledge of it. and everytime they see such storys they dislike/hate them.
don't let yourself be discouraged by the dislikes. it's your story alone and you have the right to write YOUR story the way YOU want.
who cares that there are some who don't like your story, there are still much more likes than dislikes and I doubt that will ever change.
This is my favorite story on this site. Well done good sir.
If I may add some feedback: The hospital scene is being stretched way too far. You have so many points to work off of in this world and he's been in a hospital bed for quite a few chapters. I truly hope the story progresses past it soon. The armor, his friends, discord and other things you've hinted at. I can't wait.
And again, I always look forward to reading this story.
Throne...
DISCORD HOW COULD YOU
Luna’s reaction to Rarity being coronated is like my reaction to Twilight Sparkle’s coronation as the ruler of Equestria.