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From a guess, the next chapter will probably hold tales of James' escapedes in the Empty Plains. Meeting Galus, running into the Kirin, meeting Ember. I'm sure his friends would be curious what he was up to.
I was confused at first and i thought... Wait this is too easy maybe its a trap but yeah i guess the emperor is kind incompetent in formation and battle plans due to the fact that war is strange Equestria. James have many references that can help him games, books, movies we humans are deeply rooted to war.
Also another development for nightmare moon yay also smolder would probably fly to where james is if she knew his situation.
So, there was a lot to go through with this one, despite being relatively short by this story's (though not this arc's) standards. A death pact, more sexual tension from an extremely intense "mere friendship" that probably still isn't going anywhere just yet, an inspiring plot twist, the first real fight in a while, and a much anticipated reunion.
It seems like everything going on with Nightmare Moon is about two or three more nights alone together from turning into something, whenever that happens next, which just became quite uncertain. He has to realize she means the same if not more to him then those, let's see, uh, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, no 7, wait 6 or 7 (depending on who you ask) other people he's had similar realizations about at this point. Unless the side stories are to come true and they really will be edging each other on forever until he literally dies of old age, I guess. I feel like a lot must have changed about your outlook since those were written though, but I'm not sure what that'll mean going forward.
Although war is not in the nature of ponies, it seems all it took was a call to action by the one person among them who it is, and his #1 fan, to inspire them to act as well. It's a good thing the Emperor is so outdated and thought so lowly of his opponents though, because anything much more well equipped than that likely would have torn that ragtag militia to shreds. Granted, James and the Princesses could probably handle anything short of a modern combined army by themselves, but there definitely would have been casualties. Next time, they'll be more prepared, on both sides that is.
I swear, all James really needed was an encouraging crowd around him to remember just how godlike he is in that armor. Ultimately still a squishy human underneath an incredibly tough shell, but other squishy humans cannot normally wield a fifteen-foot long flaming super death sword made out of magical plasma, either. It's probably for the best in the end that he stood back until it was just the boss left, for everyone else's sake. The encounter afterward with Mr. CEO of Racism himself ended in a suitable manner.
That reunion that happened afterward was sweet, and well missed. The gang hasn't been all together (well, minus Fluttershy) for a proper outing for quite a while now. I'm glad they understood the justification for his sudden disappearance. It also seems like Rarity remembered a technique from the last time they all swooped in together to save his life. If only she could still make more of them. Rainbow is as excited as I figured she'd be, and Celestia's as apologetic as I figured she'd be.
Putting James in charge of tactics is probably the least bad out of a list of terrible ideas. Though, if I recall correctly, the Princesses have the ability to kind of just observe Earth remotely (I distinctly remember Celestia mentioning Ireland at least once). If I've got the timeline right on all this, and it's the early-mid 2010s back on Earth, then there should be some pretty major civil wars going on right then to take some notes from, if they can stomach it. I'm sure James doesn't want to hear anything about how pissed off the South Sudanese got at each other right after getting independence though, but getting war on the mind is kind of unavoidable right now. Despite being (sort of) human though, this enemy is something that's hard to gain much knowledge over in terms of tactics because the guy at their head is downright prehistoric. Who knows how he thinks a war is won, really. All the more reason however to study more contemporary tactics, because that'll blow his bronze age thinking right out of the water.
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Patience, friend. We’ll get there eventually. I do not take continuity lightly in my work.
2nd to last paragraph, 2nd sentence,
Did you mean “Even if these ponies...”?
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I guess you haven’t noticed the pattern yet, but typos are inevitable on the first draft.
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I loved the Discord arc where the first draft typos were literally part of the plot.
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Yeah, those were intentional. I even had to proofread the entire chapters before release to make sure any unintended typos would not be present. Going back to then, it’s easy to forget that the typos are supposed to be there and my first instinct is to revise it.
This seems interesting. Is it worth the read?
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I would say it is.
Are you going to finish this story
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Yes, unless I experience an untimely death.
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God I hope not.
I've been invested into this for way too long for you to go out like that.
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Ok...what did I say?
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You asked about Sunburst in regards to Starlight being killed off a few years back.
That will be answered very soon.
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I did? How long ago was that?
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April of last year.
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I was wondering if you know I kinda did some snooping around the internet to find some new images posted by you lately and what caught my eye was an image of James, Celestia, Luna , Nightmare and two other Alicorns i don't know about all fighting Tirek at the same time from some fan site called derpibooru.com as weird as that sounds.
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That’s a bit of foreshadowing.
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but it became popular in the west
Hey, Humanity! I just wanted to say THANK YOU!!!! Thank you for this beautiful Story you Made! Especally your Version of Nightmare Moon is what makes me Always Happy! I just love her! After i read your Story i don't see her as an evil Demon! I see more in her! A beautiful Alicorn that deserves a Place in our Heart! She and Luna became my two #1!!!
its been a month since u upload u doing okay bro
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No, not really.
Dam this story is still going