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HALLELUJAH! HALLELUJAH! PRAISE THE ROYAL SISTERS! GLADESONG IS BORN!!!
It happened?! Praise the Emperor!
And the herd has begun to form...
Wow.
That was the shortest period between chapters - without them being posted together - I think I have ever seen.
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I was on a roll and close to the end. I was very eager to get Volume 4 over and done with after at least 3 and a half years spent writing it. That, and it was very enjoyable writing this chapter.
Too
Wasn't
I found these two while reading. I had a feeling that I had spotted a small error somewhere, but I wasn't sure where. So I had to reread the chapter to find out. And here's the result. Not really anything of major concern, but I felt you should know.
With that being said, another full volume of the story has reached it's conclusion. I gotta say, this chapter had a somewhat bittersweet end. I REALLY hope Smolder is ok...
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That's good. Polygamous relationships make me uncomfortable, and seeing James having sex with other girls outside marriage feels wrong to me, no matter how much he loves each of them. It's like he's violating a sacred covenant and making an exception for particular girls when the mood seems right. He made a promise, and I feel like he's mocking it at times.
I mean, I'm only one guy. Humanity has no need to listen to one guy on the internet that disagrees with him. But I still get uncomfortable prickles at this sort of "love" in arc 4. I'll continue reading--how can I stop reading this practically legendary story!--but the story doesn't quite shine as much as I remember it.
Also, before I end, I liked the way you tied everything up at the end of arc 4. Gladesong's birth and the honeymoon and a happy ending and real emotion, not manufactured emotion that I sometimes have. You are a fantastic writer. But some of the twists in the bend I'm unprepared for. That's all.
First read this on Fanfiction, and dawwed at it there, now you've melted my heart! Let's see what Sins of Humanity brings!
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Three new chapters?! Oh my god... I'm in the heaven!
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Any feedback is appreciated.
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Welp, okay. But first I have to read it
But now... I'm tired... And I wanna sleep. Besides... Moonie is calling me to sleep. Goodnight.
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I’m almost done with the next chapter.
I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it thus far, but may I ask what the highlights have been?
I'm not crying.....
I'M JUST SOOOOOO HAPPY!!!!
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With Volume 4 finally out of the way, I’d like to ask an odd question.
In hindsight, how does the whole thing pan out? Has it improved in comparison to the previous volumes?
Precious. Just...
sniff
Sorry. Can't really say much. Hard to see the keyboard for some reason.
-Ru
Congratulation!
On break at work while reading this.... dammit I have to wait a little longer for the tears to dry up lmao damn was that one emotional chapter. Little Gladesong is finally here, and Rarity is a part of the family now..... it is a good day.