A long forgotten element has been brought back, but for better or for worse?
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So many feels.
this is the first story I can't put myself in the humans place I just can't place myself in James' shoes. I think the biggest of many reasons is I prefer to be peaceful yes but I embrace violence with open arms and a smile when I have to, now this is not to say he's a "coward" or a "wimp" simply that he is not me I know I have been and will be down right malicious to people hurt my friends or family and I'm ashamed to say I have taken it too far on 2 separate occasions (hospitals were involved). I'm also nowhere near that timid the result is he reminds me of my younger brother whom is best described as a marshmallow and I mean no offence by that. all meaning I have no clue how James will react to any given situation. To me he's unreadable for the lager part of his actions and I love that it one of the things that make this story you have a truly enjoyable read you have captured me with this one and I look forward to the rest
“Even though it rides high on the flank, Rainbow won’t look like a…"
was rarity going to call RD a skank?
This whole chapter... How much he cares for all of the ponies he's met, how much he loves Fluttershy, how much Fluttershy loves him. The impact he's had on Ponyville during such a short visit. It's all so... just wow.
Plox catch up to where the story is on fanfiction.net!
my heart! my heart! it aches!
bravo with the affections. Didn't make me cry but I dawed
This is possibly one one of the most interesting concepts for a story I have seen yet, I am very interested i where this goes, as far as Mitta and Moon. As for this chapter I found it very heart warming and enjoyable.
i wanted him to mention the zombies to someone
i really like what you're doing with nightmare moon. its not very often we get a story with her being repentant.
Once I was out of my sleeping bag, I attempted to stand up. But for some reason, I immediately lost balance and fell right back down onto my…hands? “What the…” The sound I heard when I fell onto my hands was very familiar… The sound of hooves clopping… Oh no…
HA! i completly forgot about the poision joke i was like YESSSSSSS!
Might I suggest making a chapter that shows the events of the previous chapters from the ponies' perspective? It'd be really entertaining to read their reactions to James' letter, as well as Cheerilee calling out Diamond Tiara.
Please?
...peeked/peered
I'm imagining the royal sisters attending the spa
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I thought you would have him mention SunnyTown to the princesses since you know they said it was 1000 years ago. But oh well.
I really hope that in the coming chapters he pulls Celestia aside and fills her in on everything he's seen and found out since coming to Equestria <,<
I was a bit upset that James didnt mention NMM, Sunny town or the Ghost... i do hope he will mention them so the princesses soon.
Diamond tiara is gonna be piiiiiiissed
edit: after reading how diamond reacted, i'd say that she wasn't very in-character... but now that she is try to change her ways, perhaps good will come of this
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I wish he would tell them of sunnytown
Seriously author? And I suppose child abuse is the most peaceful way possible?
I have seen stories where the main character was able to talk Diamond Tiara out of it, to make her realize through a very thought out explanation why her personality is crying out bad karma. The way he acted was child abuse, by keeping her to the ground and 'removing' her mark.
You want to see a real peaceful way to set things right with Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon?
Read this, it's an extract of "Living in equestria".
This is how you are supposed to treat a little filly Diamond Tiara, not the way James did.
James held her down with his foot, he touched her flanks, and 'made her marks disappear' threatening not to give them back until she changes.
Was he really thinking she'd change, instead of projecting her hate towards him for stealing something as precious as her mark from her?
This was not the most peaceful way possible to make Diamond tiara understand, nor was it very intelligent in the long run.
The mane 6 and Celestia supporting his method, is just as illogical.
Sorry but this is it for me, after how he acted a few times, I can't see why he would ever deserve a mark like that, since he hasn't shown what it apparently stands for.
If you want another example, after RD pulled her prank on him, instead of resolving the issue calmly, he took his bowl of salad and emptied it on RD's head as sort of payback, then stormed off.
You think that was the most peaceful way to resolve a conflict?
Sorry author, but that's just plain pathetic.
Tbh if I was in his situation, I would have unleashed all of my comments about the night to Luna all at once, I mean they don't visit ponyville often sooo, why not throw in everything? (There is nothing bad of course.)
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Would it be okay for you to pm me the link to this story?
You know. im surprised that no one has mentioned the fact that in that pic Zecora has a round tummy. also I love the fact that both Luna and NNM see to be falling for James...
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If you still have the link (or ever got it...) could you forward it to me?
BEHOLD!!!! ZECORA THE MIGHTY DUCK!!!
I could see poison joke as an enhancer of human/pony relations ;)
Love and Peace!!!
If only he had a trendy and classy hat...
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At least DT learned her lesson...
"Even though I still could not wrap my head around how a human could acquire a cutie mark even though only Equestrian ponies can get them, Twilight’s explanation did make a lot of sense to me. Despite my fascination with swordplay and that I am relentless in voicing my hatred about things I despise, I am a lover. Not a fighter. It would be very difficult for me to bring myself to hurt anyone. No matter how angry I would feel towards someone, I would never be able to bring myself to seriously harm them, let alone kill them. I even try to avoid killing insects and other bugs whenever possible, with the exceptions of mosquitoes, roaches, wasps, and other particularly dangerous bugs. But I digress."
*Ahem*
Mortal Chaos.
'Nuff said
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Watch as I work my gypsy magic
Eye of the newt and cinnamon
Watch as the matter turns to batter
Open the portal, jump in!
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'The Will' Used Boot To The Head!
Its Super Effective!
And one for Jenny and thhe wimp.
La historia es buena pero el protagonista es demasiado sentimental
Seriously author?
Seriously?
I'll hold you to that, James.
That Dsi holds a lot of charge to be running for a few weeks.
Diamond Tiara's apology was the one part of this chapter that made me tear up.
I think the doves fit him as a cutie mark.
I'm going to take a wild guess but I think James is the element of love. (But I could be wrong)
Oh, my God, but what an asshole
Ill take your entire flipping stock!
I require this immediately.......
Alas, 'tis not to be
no, but it is useful information to have. History can repeat itself, and that is one of the reasons we study history today.
Yeah, it’s been legal for about twenty minutes now. So, yeah, well, you know. That old chestnut.
oh thank god, i thought we were gonna get ponified human in equestria story again, not a fan...
Damn, i never thought of her like that. and now that you mentioned it... yeah! wow