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GOOD LORD MAN! 36k words!?!?! good thing I don't plan on sleeping tonight
36,337 words!?
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1542691 my thoughts exactly....
1542691 yes... holy fuck
A1: chrysalis A2: discord
1542691All of my yes.
1542651 Please let me know how it is when You finish reading it. Took a long time to finish.
1478748 Didn't disappear. Just changed name as precaution.
its beautiful
And thank you for letting me forget all about my homework with this huge chapter
First!!! And good chapter btw. I can't wait for Chrysalis to make her move.
New The Lost Element chapter?!
BRAIN HAS STOPPED WORKING. BRAIN IS RESTARTING...
Awwwwwwwwwww yeeeeeeeeeeah!
My feels... And thank you for finally resolving everything with Mitta and Nightmare Moon. Now we just need to break the curse on Ruby... Or is she cursed? Is she a ghost? Anyway, great job on it!
A part of me is kinda hoping that the story takes a turn for the polygamous.
Not that the story isn't excellent in it's own right!
It's just that James has a ton of ponies that (at least in my opinion; the list is below) love him in the same manner as Fluttershy, and incorporating them into a sort of herd (I cite Xenophilia as a point of reference) could both enhance the character interactons, as well as adding a new dimension to the plot:
Luna
Twilight
Rainbow
Nightmare Moon
Rarity
1543137 She's a ghost. Her death is the reason why the ponies of Sunny Town were cursed in the first place.
Awesome chapter keep it up.
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?? Wut? Your like 12th?
Awesome chapter man, I was about to delete it from my list of stories cause of no updates in FOREVAH
Very nice work, I thoroughly enjoyed it. PLEASE keep up the good work and Don't take as long to post next chapter?
... Or do..... If you want..... Please don't stop D:
Holy hell! I'm glad to see you're not dead after all the fucking hassle certain PEOPLE (I use that term very loosely) have been giving you, when saw you hadn't logged in here or DA for nearly two weeks, last time I checked. Anyway, I just got done reading this on Sofurry, cause hadn't yet seen it uploaded on here, thinking maybe you were being cautious after lately.
Anyway, just... damn. I think this is awesome, even if James/you, did seem to break character a bit. Not to say it wasn't deserving, though. I think it did irk me that after he woke up and Rainbow Dash knew and said she was telling their friends about him being awake, he neglected to find or spend any time with any of them, until last... 10k words or so? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png Also, I sense some hidden romantic intents from the tomboyish/brash Pegasus, if not mistaken? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Soarin_dayum.png And had expected her to want to see James nude again, even if I was aware he probably wasn't entirely.
The whole Donutopia thing and Pinkie Pie lurking (I almost thought it was so she could break her diet, on one of those RARE instances) was VERY odd; but then, was flabbergasted by the exclamation mark she ate, which was... weird, but hey, it's Pinkie Pie! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png Interactions with Nightmare Moon were nice and surprised to see Redheart here (I guess James would need a doctor, even in Equestria), but was expecting her first journal appearance would be when Fluttershy gets preggers, eventually. And gah, that was so silly how Luna and NMM decided to mess with him over his, um... yeah. And surprised to see Scootaloo get some mentioned flying time, though hopefully, won't be mentioned she tries anything foalish flying on her own if knows it was thanks to James using magic and holding her (not calling her dumb, but just didn't seem to imply that she knew).
Moving on to past the Everfree Forest start. Shame James doesn't know that what he saw/heard WAS a Changeling, otherwise he might've acted. And *whistles* damn, so sad what your take on what the Sunny Town majority did to Ruby alone. Almost expected there to be more mentioned or implied that they had killed (speaking of, how did Luna even know in first place? Seems like a bit farfetched for even an alicorn Princess to know if one of their subjects murders another or is about to murder, and worse, doesn't do a thing to stop it), but eh, it's not likely going to be an issue anymore, so I know it's moot. I mean, know they probably deserved it though James didn't seem to feel as much remorse as when he beat up Blueblood during the Gala; but as far as he knows, Blueblood didn't kill anypony in such a violent fashion as they did. As far as the OOC moment I was talking about, but would understand why wouldn't feel any remorse if I were in his shoes, even if he hates harming anypony unless they deserve it or have no other choice. Anyway, glad to see that was all settled, even if hadn't expected it to be anytime soon (expected MAYBE wake-up after the fight or birthday, for this chapter).
Interactions between the Mane 6 and Mitta were nice, even if a couple were kinda hostile somewhat, but funny as well. Several funny moments there too: such as the Hotmail pun(?); James' imagining of what Dash would say if she had heard Mitta's words about slaying the zombies again; the attempting to eat Sugarcube Corner like James had thought himself on his first day; Pinkie Pie's description of the exclamation mark she 'ate' (as well as the original scene in question in its entirety, I think); Mitta's reaction after devouring her first sweets that James brought to Ponyville/Equestria, and probably several more I'm forgetting (re-read a bit, while I was typing this out, and don't wish to go over all of them, but quite a few for me, as I seem to recall). Almost expected Mitta to not know about a unicorn's magic abilities, the way she reacted to Rarity's way of tending to fixing ponies up by force, if need be. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rarity_lolface.png Burned reference later on (if it was one) was nice, reminded me of That '70s show, which used to watch years ago. And Mitta's reaction to being alive again and James's reaction to the kiss Mitta gave him near the end were funny too, just had to point those out. And finally, glad to see Nightmare Moon having been inducted into Equestrian royalty as a Princess and official sister, even if had expected it to happen moreso in a non-journal day, as a past reference on one of his written days. Though I have to wonder if this'll affect which one James views as the true Princess of the Night or might be moreso friends with.
tl;dr: Enjoyed the WHOLE thing and wait was most certainly worth it. Though not sure if am looking to another long wait for the next chapter, if'll be super-long as well. Did have some errors here and there of course, but didn't really write any of them down or remember any major ones. Sorry to ramble on, but I really enjoyed everything and this chapter had it all. Plenty of suspense, action, comedy, heart-wrenching scenes and moments, and even some tenderness. Kept me eager to read the whole time, well done! Hope my review is satisfactory, even if may've overdone it!
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Yes, WE may know that, but he doesn't. While it doesn't go over every day for obvious reasons, he does have his own life to tend to: a relationship, two jobs, raising a filly (sort of), spending time with his friends, etc. He's just sorta learning things from the first 2 seasons as he goes, at least for the most part. Even though he clearly in this chapter had learned about Gilda sometime between Nightmare Night and at latest, before he passed out in the Everfree.
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!
Dawww, Mitta is a non zombie now :D
Yes! Finally! Awesome job, man!
There goes Chrysalis' interest in the good/bad Element... still got my bits on her trying to seduce him to his dark side. Maybe kidnapping Shy at first to manipulate him subtly, and get some time in bed with him considering she (like every other mare) seems to be sexually attracted to him.
Still a well-written story, but I've said my bit on the issues numerous times already. Still tracking, however. Fun read all the same.
I have waited almost 6 weeks for this, woundering, prayign that good will come, you my good sir are a fucking wicked ass 20% cooler MLP writer and i shall always be a fan of your work!
I loved reading this, a really good way to bring it back.
FINALLY!!! I've been waiting so long for this.
P.S. Nice to have you back. It was a huge hole in my Read Later list where this story would have been.
It's back I'm so excited I could just scream but I'm at school right now and I can't read it right now at least it's long also does this mean your out of hiatus and forgot to change it to incomplete or did you just post this to give us something.
Edit just finished reading and I loved it can't wait for more
This was an amazing chapter, and holy hell at the length of 36,000+ words. A real monster of a chapter for sure. You did an excellent job with this chapter, I enjoyed the primary focus of integrating Nightmare Moon back as well as breaking Mitta's curse. It also seems that multiple ponies now have the hots for James, Rainbow is doing a poor job covering it up, at least in our eyes. James seems to be a bit dense in that regard, but oh well. Makes me curious as to what you are planning to do, I don't recall either way as to the status quo of relationships in Equestria in regards to monogamy vs polygamy. Makes me extremely curious if you are going to pursue polygamy. Would allow for a ton of character and relationship building if so.
Curing Mitta was a very nice thing to see in the story. The history behind Ruby was tragic, and James destruction (although futile) of all the residents of Sunny Town was a nice addition.
As usually, another amazing chapter my friend. Have to say that my favorite part of this chapter is a bit of a tie between three moments...the reunion of Nightmare Moon and James, James rescuing Mitta from Sunny Town and fulfilling the promise he had and the hug the he shared with the three sisters on the bridge. Although I have to say...it seems like Rainbow Dash may have developed some feelings for James. Seems like with all these mares that have a feelings for him that it could lead to an interesting turn of event depending on how you decide to roll with it.
fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck yes awesome awesome awesome and last but not least awesome time 10^infinity indubitaly
That face Shining Armour had: The 'Oh crap' face.
*finishes reading chapter*
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No one can write as great as you, and a 36,000 word chapter! Oh I feel spoiled, and nice to see Mitta has been ridden of the curse, great story with an interesting plot and character development, shame about Rubydl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_cry.png anyways I got to read this awesome chapter again, cant wait for the next one
--Lewis 13 (Skyrimlegion)
I...
That was so... beautiful.
You are a brilliant writer, my friend. I hope to see more updates soon. It was nice seeing this story continued.
When I saw this updated, my heart skipped a beat! I was like YYEEEESSSS!
After reading this, my heart is full of warm fuzzies. It going to be a good day.
Well it will be a hearth breaker if it won't be a harem/herd because it hurts me right now when you are creating that scenes that are suggesting there is more ponies for James heart and they will be a friendzoned. But still love this story So much.
Finished reading this chapter and I friggin LOVE IT! glad to see Mitta got that darn curse removed way to go nightmare moon!
*wandering through favorites* HOLY SHIT 36KWHAT!? *reads* 36K IS NOT ENOUGH!
My reaction to logging in and seeing this story had an update.
My reaction to said update being the longest chapter thus far.
Seriously though great work here, the wrap up of this little 'arc' is very well done. Your talent at story writing is getting even better my friend.
Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next, and if you need any assistance with editing/proofreading just holler.
1546426 What parts gave you the most fuzzies?
1546191 I wish that were true. Judging by the words of a close friend, Fallout Equestria and its sequel puts even my best work to shame.
I try to not let it bother me, but its a story I am honestly afraid to read and the ridiculous length of both is rather disheartening to me. And after hearing about it so often, it's gotten to be a nuisance.
Well, aside from that gripe, what did you enjoy most from this chapter?
1546420 Thank you, though I would appreciate to hear what you loved most about it.
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Thank you. But what brought out the most applause?
1544815 What did you enjoy most?
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But what stood out the most in this chapter?
1435789 Ah, I actually forgot about that. Yes, I'll go back and fix that. As for Lyra, I'll just keep her name as I've kept it so far. Unless she actually has her full name spoken in the show at some point.
In any case, glad to see you like the latest chapter. If you can, I'd love to hear what you liked about it.
1542761 Sorry about that. I honestly don't plan out the chapters' lengths. I just write it as it goes.
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One of the may things about this chapter I enjoyed was the big twist with Ruby, I honestly wasn't expecting it, I also enjoyed the touching scene between the princesses and nightmare moon being accepted as a co-ruler of Equestria. There are a couple more I'd like to say but the walking dead awaits me, and a bottle of Jack Daniels *HUZZAH*
1551039 In all honesty, I am amazed by how many readers don't know about the Story of the Blanks. That really did happen in it, after all.
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You're writing a good fic and it made it into the featured box, seemed like a good enough reason to me.
UPDATE!!!!!!!! and what's this? 30,000+ words? you sir are amazing