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Well...that was a cliffhanger.
NOOOOOOOOO! NOT HIATUS!
You know... I've always liked to imagine there's an archeology dig happening, and his journals are apart of it. Slowly we get more and more of the stuff unearthed as the dig progresses. When it is all said and done we just might have the full book rather than only a couple hundred pages from the ruins...
A lot of good development on the romantic plotlines with this one. Novo putting Celestia in her place like that was pretty much what I wanted to see with her after what happened. I still can't shake the feeling that something bad is going to happen to Ember, but if that's to happen, at least she knows now beforehand what's really going on with James, and the real motive behind that question.he asked her. It was also great to see Ember, Celaeno, and Novo all meet, and also makes me intrigued about the Bird Leg Arc that is surely to come after this is all over.
Really loving this arc you have set up! Take the hiatus, man. You deserve it.
Alright, so I’m finally going to comment on this after a long time of silence on this story. This whole story is fantastic!
I genuinely like where the story is going, the character development, amazing adventures and new characters, and many things that make this story a “chef’s kiss.”
And yeah, it takes time (a long time) for things such as development of the characters in their everyday lives, but it was worth the length.
Even though I was “irked” at the early parts of the story for a lot of reasons, it is probably because I am so used to stories making their characters develop after a chapter or even a paragraph.
So for now, I give the story a 4 star rating!
Can’t wait to see the end of this story and it’s sequel! Hopefully you also get enough rest my guy, it is alright that the story is in hiatus for now.
Peace!
The Human Commentator
Hello will this story get an update anytime soon?
11078001
Yes, now that Volume 3 has been completely edited.
James represents a trait that we Humans have Perseverance and perseverance is to Never give up on what you are and who you are and what you believe and what are fighting for and what you are protecting and those you love. And a Virtuous being indeed is to Never waver in such dark times.
With the war on pause for the time being, we’re given a little slice-of-life day.
Changelings really aren’t that frightening once you’ve seen them for a while, huh? The thought of Ocellus becoming a queen is an interesting thought. I know that many bronies and pegasisters have played with that concept before.
It seems like Queen Chrysalis is yet another age anomaly which will be touched upon later.
I’m not that surprised that Nightmare Moon is helping Dragon Lord Ember to keep her people in line and it seems that the Dragon Lord is becoming more accustomed to modern living. I can only imagine what will happen when the other dragons see its potential.
It seems that yet another dragoness is developing feelings for James and vice versa. I wonder how that will play out. Those two had a really deep conversation. Ember seems to understand very well, as does Captain Celaeno.
Queen Novo, Captain Celaeno and Dragon Lord Ember all seem to have hit it off with each other. I wouldn’t be surprised if they all became friends.
It was rather funny what happened to Ocellus in Novo’s chambers and her friendship with Princess Celestia will surely give her some leverage regarding James and Twilight Sparkle.
Again, I’m sorry that this review is rather brief. I suppose it doesn’t help that I haven’t been able two write it out for some time. Onward…….